- Oct 3, 2018
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Could Demonkillr1 and Squark coordinate their work? ( Supposing they are not the same person )
It would perhaps proceed faster and - even if disagreements slowed it a bit - surely more fun in the end than ploughing/plowing a lonely furrow each, or even the same furrows separately!
I mean: there IS a certain "rustic/crude charm" in the way the dialog(ue) is at the moment. Sometimes it's not clear if the extra humo(u)r in a cheesy or weird text is intentional, or not.
ALSO, it's only occasionally that the excitement level of a text is more than that of the main appeal of the game, the outlandish storyline & a lot of the female artwork (crazily overdone though the heaving bosoms are on some, and dicey the bottom end of the wide age spectrum)....
But it's true there are a number of places where sharper, more convincing, hotter, spicier dialog(ue) would drive up the appeal of the game further. I think e.g. (examples off the top of my head) of the passenger in the middle subway carriage, the two young cops, Simpson, the barmaid in the uptown bar. Basically, with the hottest of the enchanted females. That's where text tweaks would be ... nicest. Some well-located tweaks would defo be welcome.
It would perhaps proceed faster and - even if disagreements slowed it a bit - surely more fun in the end than ploughing/plowing a lonely furrow each, or even the same furrows separately!
I mean: there IS a certain "rustic/crude charm" in the way the dialog(ue) is at the moment. Sometimes it's not clear if the extra humo(u)r in a cheesy or weird text is intentional, or not.
ALSO, it's only occasionally that the excitement level of a text is more than that of the main appeal of the game, the outlandish storyline & a lot of the female artwork (crazily overdone though the heaving bosoms are on some, and dicey the bottom end of the wide age spectrum)....
But it's true there are a number of places where sharper, more convincing, hotter, spicier dialog(ue) would drive up the appeal of the game further. I think e.g. (examples off the top of my head) of the passenger in the middle subway carriage, the two young cops, Simpson, the barmaid in the uptown bar. Basically, with the hottest of the enchanted females. That's where text tweaks would be ... nicest. Some well-located tweaks would defo be welcome.
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