Ren'Py Completed Corruption [Final] [Mr.C]

[Squark ⚧❤️]

Still working on things on my end. Someone should teach this guy conversational level English. Some of it is just... Robotic.
And what the flying F does "Tease-ya" mean? This is something I'm more or less rewording as "Just teasin' ya!"
The amount of repeated text that could have been avoided with the use of flags is simply astounding.

And also, in Kei's dealings with his cousins (Lucy and Lily) he frequently calls them his "sisters". I get that this is an incest-heavy game but there's something very wrong with that. It's either to make it sound seedier or wherever he's from doesn't differentiate between your sisters and your female cousins.

One other thing I don't much care for is using "sperm" and "semen" interchangeably. They're not the same thing.

 

[DMon1981]

Still working on things on my end. Someone should teach this guy conversational level English. Some of it is just... Robotic.
And what the flying F does "Tease-ya" mean? This is something I'm more or less rewording as "Just teasin' ya!"
The amount of repeated text that could have been avoided with the use of flags is simply astounding.

And also, in Kei's dealings with his cousins (Lucy and Lily) he frequently calls them his "sisters". I get that this is an incest-heavy game but there's something very wrong with that. It's either to make it sound seedier or wherever he's from doesn't differentiate between your sisters and your female cousins.

I think the 'sisters' bit is because they wanted to be treated like how he treated his sister from the tennis courts events.

But only my opinion.

 

[cold_arctus]

And also, in Kei's dealings with his cousins (Lucy and Lily) he frequently calls them his "sisters". I get that this is an incest-heavy game but there's something very wrong with that. It's either to make it sound seedier or wherever he's from doesn't differentiate between your sisters and your female cousins.

Dev is from South-East Asia and it is very common over there to call cousins "brother/sister" even for very close family friends.

So, a mother's best friend would be your "aunt" and her children your "brothers/sisters".

 

[Squark ⚧❤️]

Dev is from South-East Asia and it is very common over there to call cousins "brother/sister" even for very close family friends.

So, a mother's best friend would be your "aunt" and her children your "brothers/sisters".

Okay. I'll leave it as is, then.
I'm so bloody glad for Replace All - I don't have to spend so much time correcting every single use of technically correct language with conversational tones manually.

 

[PPE2RedDucks]

Who the heck is "Kei" now?

(It's ok, I gotcha ... but I call the MC "Po'kejerky")


Maybe he means like, "mah sistaz"? - like, they ARE two sisters ...


I'm not sure the "sperm/semen" dilemma is SO high on the list of wacky weirdnesses in the script!


Squark - do DM Demonkillr1 if you haven't already? There could be a helluva lot of duplication of alt-scripts otherwise. Unless you don't see eye-to-eye, I'd have thought it'd be better to divide up paerts and share the load (- if you excuse the expression -)?

PS: Aw! Don't replace All! Best character in the whole game!!

 

[Squark ⚧❤️]

Who the heck is "Kei" now?

(It's ok, I gotcha ... but I call the MC "Po'kejerky")


Maybe he means like, "mah sistaz"? - like, they ARE two sisters ...


I'm not sure the "sperm/semen" dilemma is SO high on the list of wacky weirdnesses in the script!


Squark - do DM Demonkillr1 if you haven't already? There could be a helluva lot of duplication of alt-scripts otherwise. Unless you don't see eye-to-eye, I'd have thought it'd be better to divide up paerts and share the load (- if you excuse the expression -)?

PS: Aw! Don't replace All! Best character in the whole game!!

We do communicate and he knows where I'm going, so it's all good. I should have a decent handful done shortly.

 

[Squark ⚧❤️]

And here I am again with a first batch.
Airport, Aunt, Beach and Casino are done. I'll tackle Mrs. Robinson's apartment, club, coffeeshop, com and date next.

 

[PPE2RedDucks]

Does that download, Squark?

When I click on your attachment, it tends just to open a new, machine-code type of file in a new tab/window. I can't see a D/L method.

It could be just me. It often is.

There's a script-revision pincer movement going on now between the two of you. Moving a bit too fast for me to keep up with!

I hope others can do the second-opinion, "second pair of eyes" work, if that's being asked for, and if that helps.

 

[Squark ⚧❤️]

Does that download, Squark?

When I click on your attachment, it tends just to open a new, machine-code type of file in a new tab/window. I can't see a D/L method.

It could be just me. It often is.

There's a script-revision pincer movement going on now between the two of you. Moving a bit too fast for me to keep up with!

I hope others can do the second-opinion, "second pair of eyes" work, if that's being asked for, and if that helps.

Downloads okay for me. Must be something on your end.

 

[IceCreamMommy]

Downloads okay for me. Must be something on your end.

Same for me cant download anything on this site unless its .zip so far {.7z .save .rpy } do not work

 

[Zephea]

Same for me cant download anything on this site unless its .zip so far {.7z .save .rpy } do not work

Just gonna ask - try a different browser? Sometimes they update something and things do not work right afterwards.

 

[IceCreamMommy]

Just gonna ask - try a different browser? Sometimes they update something and things do not work right afterwards.

omg that worked thanks buddy

 

[Zephea]

omg that worked thanks buddy

YAY! Glad it is working for you now!

 

[@ignister]

From the wip looks like to tutor girl going to teach her sister how to makeup and dress lol

 

[Kazutoyo]

Same for me cant download anything on this site unless its .zip so far {.7z .save .rpy } do not work

Why not just right-click and choose "save link as"?

 

[PPE2RedDucks]

Gotcha. Thanks. Wasn't alert to the "Save Link" route, somehow.

I think clicking on hyperlink for direct download, or clicking to a new page or tab, is the way I'm used to.

Unless I'm losing my memory, mind or summat.

Entirely possible ....

 

[Demonkillr1]

Here is the latest version of the dialogue fixes to use including what Squark posted yesterday.

The heather script is being worked on by PPE2RedDucks . If you paste the script file without the heather.rpyc it will cause errors as I moved everything dealing with the cafe and heather from the script file to the file Mr.C set up for heather.

 

[Demonkillr1]

From the wip looks like to tutor girl going to teach her sister how to makeup and dress lol

The sister isn't in the picture that looks like the mom.

 

[gginner]

Android save plz

 

[Sarge6669]

so, how on earth do i corrupt the school? i corrupted mrs. simpson, now i cant seem to do anything else in the school other than the usual "talk to everyone and get sent away"