NODOGAN

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I gotta admit abit of a guilty pleasure: I like Cait, I know she is Savin's OC, I know she could be written better, I recognize that many of the complains people have about the character are genuinely valid and that she steals our thunder (and even Kassyrra's) one time too many.

But I still like the bumbly slut kitty fuck-buddy, IDK maybe because I never expected her to be a romance option but rather saw her as that, a Fuckbuddy (also not being a futa is a big plus.)

There, I just wanted to share some positivity seeing as how this newest update left a bitter taste in my mouth (seriously? just a bunch of 69 filler scenes for a pun? laaaaaaame)
 

Alterism

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just a bunch of 69 filler scenes for a pun?
I mean. It's a dumb pun. But, if you think about it. There was more sexual content in this patch than what was available when Gweyr quest dropped. Plus, on the bright side, only some of the scenes were unremarkable.
 
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Honestly, other characters are written worse. My main problem with her was everyone saying her religion groomed children and remember vaguely reading something like that in game but being too lazy to double-check. Was all of that even true?
 

Wrynn13

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Honestly, other characters are written worse. My main problem with her was everyone saying her religion groomed children and remember vaguely reading something like that in game but being too lazy to double-check. Was all of that even true?
Yes, it is very much true unfortunately. And written by the same troll that calls the people that want to have a good relationship with Kinu groomers no less.
 
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Yes, it is very much true unfortunately. And written by the same troll that calls the people that want to have a good relationship with Kinu groomers no less.
I'm not surprised. I still wanna see the actual text but going through and reading TOBs writing makes me wanna take two steps on a one-step cliff.
 

Alterism

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I still wanna see the actual text but going through and reading TOBs writing makes me wanna take two steps on a one-step cliff.
https://f95zone.to/threads/corrupti...-savin-salamander-studios.11371/post-10741813
It's in the spoiler with multiple examples taken out of the game. There'd have to be some very loose interpretations on err... Things mentioned.
I can't remember of the two (Savin/Tobs) who even wrote this nonsense. And it's not like it matters all that much.

Regarding Cait I'm sure there's going to be somebody that gets a chuckle

Long as you sidestep that she's advocating doing in the Alraune.

Anyways Cait remains as abrasive and generally unlikable to me for the same reasons you don't ask your best friend intimate questions about his love life.
 

NODOGAN

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I'm not surprised. I still wanna see the actual text but going through and reading TOBs writing makes me wanna take two steps on a one-step cliff.
The temple is Groomer ground no doubt, they try to justify it by saying you can leave the temple when you're 18 and that not all the ones living in the temple HAVE to be sex-workers (cat-paladin constantly tells us "guys guys Mallach is also the god of Arts, you can be writters, artists and so much more than just fuckbuddies!") but well...is hard to justify kids leaving when they grow up with the temple and the fucking and everything as their refference for "normal lifestyle."

Also gotta admit is kinda funny they ask you for 15.000 coins to impregnate the cat and that "those are savings to raise your kitten from birth till 18 y/o without much troubles" and I'm just here thinking..."inflation ain't a thing or something? I though you cats were artists, since when economics to calculate life costs is part of your passions?"

P.S: I jus find it funny that in a porn fantasy game they choose to fixate on economics and try to make it sound so well-planned out and precise, like...dude just say part of the income of the temple goes to raising your childs or something instead of pretending a single sum will be enough lol.
 

Quintilus

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inflation ain't a thing or something? I though you cats were artists, since when economics to calculate life costs is part of your passions?
Inflation was close to nonexistent in ancient/medieval times.
Reason, gold/silver/metal name costs a considerable amount of 'wealth', in abstract sense, since they extracted from ore without using modern smelting technologies, aka one abstract metal peso require enormous amount of human hours for making.
 

Lord Kentus

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Inflation was close to nonexistent in ancient/medieval times.
Reason, gold/silver/metal name costs a considerable amount of 'wealth', in abstract sense, since they extracted from ore without using modern smelting technologies, aka one abstract metal peso require enormous amount of human hours for making.
All that south american silver did eventually render silver basically worthless in Europe for a bit though
 
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https://f95zone.to/threads/corrupti...-savin-salamander-studios.11371/post-10741813
It's in the spoiler with multiple examples taken out of the game. There'd have to be some very loose interpretations on err... Things mentioned.
I can't remember of the two (Savin/Tobs) who even wrote this nonsense. And it's not like it matters all that much.

Regarding Cait I'm sure there's going to be somebody that gets a chuckle

Long as you sidestep that she's advocating doing in the Alraune.

Anyways Cait remains as abrasive and generally unlikable to me for the same reasons you don't ask your best friend intimate questions about his love life.
Did.... did anyone proofread this shit?
 
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On another note I've read that Kohaku preg is never going to happen because Tobs said it would get in the way of her being a merchant.
I don't know if it's just me but the kitsune world-building feels so weird. The lore is randomly explained to us and their rules feel like they are made up on the spot just to fuck with the player.
 

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The lore is randomly explained to us and their rules feel like they are made up on the spot just to fuck with the player
Bro, it's Tobs lol. He's a salt miner through and through, of course he gonna do that to fuck with the player. By the by, here's my first draft of the champ fucking Nakano. I'm open for feedback so pls drown me in them.

 
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Bro, it's Tobs lol. He's a salt miner through and through, of course he gonna do that to fuck with the player. By the by, here's my first draft of the champ fucking Nakano. I'm open for feedback so pls drown me in them.

Despite this content not really being for me. I really liked it! how long did this take to write?
Now there are some grammar mistakes that need to be fixed to make it better to read but I won't harp on that too much because I would make the same mistakes lol.
Good work and keep it up!
 

Hargan2

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Bro, it's Tobs lol. He's a salt miner through and through, of course he gonna do that to fuck with the player. By the by, here's my first draft of the champ fucking Nakano. I'm open for feedback so pls drown me in them.

Not bad! Could use a fem-champ variation imo but in terms of actual writing, I liked it. The formatting was a little weird, though. You indented with a dash for some reason on every line that started with dialogue, but then you kept the whole paragraph indented. It would be better to indent only the first line of each new paragraph/dialogue. Unless there's a reason behind it that I'm not seeing, which there very well could be.

Edit: replied to the wrong post at first
 
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