Others Corruption of Champions II [v0.7.14] [Savin/Salamander Studios]

[MogwaiKupo]

Okay, seriously, every time I check in on this thread y'all are dissing on the writers, is there any writer in this game you people do like?

Wsan is consistent and that's it, every other writer is a complete coin toss whether they'll deliver good content. Except Tobs, his writing drones on and on so much it ruins even some of his actually good characters.

 

[Fikedever]

Okay, seriously, every time I check in on this thread y'all are dissing on the writers, is there any writer in this game you people do like?

Wsan, William, and B are my favorites both in CoC2 and TiTs. I generally enjoy Savin's writing, although I might criticize his editing/directing work, and I definitely dislike his attitude towards mods.

It is way to cutesy. And like many scenes involving Brint, our character feels like they are written for another game. Like we are sheltered virginal school girl that just learned what "going past the second base" means.

That's fair. I also felt the Brint/PCMale scenes tend make the PC sound feminine.

 

[MogwaiKupo]

Hey, but that's great news for us! Let's hope that one of the good writers ends up hating Tobs one of there days.

Didn't HugsAlright leave because of a mental breakdown, even if him and Gardeforde made a fool Tobs for writing the companion conundrum, that's still pretty scummy. Especially since we know how they would feel about Mods doing that sort of thing to their characters

 

[Deleted member 3463984]

Not saying that's a good thing, just saying I wouldn't be surprised if that's the way it goes. Bear in mind Takahiro is "in-love" with another kitsune, but has just as many sex scenes you, the shrine twins and one of her subordinates. Quin is already one of the slutty companions, so the idea of swinging isn't to farfetched for him

i didn't mean to make it sound like you were saying that, i just think that giving quin a romantic interest that isn't the player isn't going to be something anyone except bk likes.

 

[MogwaiKupo]

i didn't mean to make it sound like you were saying that, i just think that giving quin a romantic interest that isn't the player isn't going to be something anyone except bk likes.

Its at least consistent with the writer, Takahiro has Azami, who the Buubblelord says will never be sexable because he doesn't want to make "just another woman for the character to screw", Jen has Leofric who if you don't convince is bad for her, will have sex with him right in front of you, and now Quin will have Rune.
Bubblelord clearly likes to right characters who don't revolve solely around the PC, which are never the best received when that trait is so emphasized, but that's the archetype he likes to write. Maybe he thinks he'll strike gold with Quin

 

[M0nte]

Its at least consistent with the writer, Takahiro has Azami, who the Buubblelord says will never be sexable because he doesn't want to make "just another woman for the character to screw", Jen has Leofric who if you don't convince is bad for her, will have sex with him right in front of you, and now Quin will have Rune.
Bubblelord clearly likes to right characters who don't revolve solely around the PC, which are never the best received when that trait is so emphasized, but that's the archetype he likes to write. Maybe he thinks he'll strike gold with Quin

He certainly is brave enough to write it, I will give him that. But I do not know if he has the nerves for backlash he may recieve for those things if he keeps putting them in. I know that this games audience is more forgiving than most but still, dealing with horny people is never easy.
Also, what do you mean "convince Jen that Leofric is bad for her". From what I remember, one of the options we are going to have is to Kill Leofric and maybe corrupt her. But it would leave to bad end. Never heard of what you are reffering to.

 

[throbzombie]

It is way to cutesy. And like many scenes involving Brint, our character feels like they are written for another game. Like we are sheltered virginal school girl that just learned what "going past the second base" means.

A straight dude writing a romantic encounter with a guy? He'd have to be some kind of prodigy to make that scene believable.

 

[M0nte]

A straight dude writing a romantic encounter with a guy? He'd have to be some kind of prodigy to make that scene believable.

I mean, I would think that he was at least bisexual considering that he is writing a male companion that has scenes in which he is bottoming for you. But even if that is not the case, I do not think that it is because of his sexuality or anything. Since judging by his scene where champion is the pitcher, the bottom usually acts pretty docile. So basically, when Wsan wrote Brint, he basically gave us the personality of his female NPC. We swoon over him easily and it feels like that we are going to confess our undying love for him at any moment.
The other reason why I think it is more noticable with him is because, as stated by Wsan, he really wanted to express better/more unique qualities of Brint. That despite his looks, he is a carring individual that goes against the whole "surfer/muscle bro" archetype. But to my chagrin, one of the ways he accomplished it is by having our champion comment on them. Which in turn makes them sound more girly than what I like.
But, this is probably something that affects small portion of people. Most people that do engage with him sexually seem pleased enough. So eh, not everything can be up your taste at the end of the day. I at least have Brienne to fall back on.

 

[MogwaiKupo]

He certainly is brave enough to write it, I will give him that. But I do not know if he has the nerves for backlash he may recieve for those things if he keeps putting them in. I know that this games audience is more forgiving than most but still, dealing with horny people is never easy.
Also, what do you mean "convince Jen that Leofric is bad for her". From what I remember, one of the options we are going to have is to Kill Leofric and maybe corrupt her. But it would leave to bad end. Never heard of what you are reffering to.

Apparently there's going to be quite a few factors to Jen's disposition, whether or not you screwed her prior to the expac is going to be one of them. He didn't release a doc but he did say after you best Leofric you can convince Jen that his only love will be Tira and she'll lose her crush for him. Or you can play matchmaker and get them to hook up. He didn't specifically say kill but he did allude to some corrupt thing you can do that would make you lose interactions with all the mercenaries, Lusamine, Janeen, and Boomer included. You can get married to Jen but I won't spoil how she's going to act, unless someone asks.

 

[NODOGAN]

Ok i know you guys are having a moment here bashing on the writting (can't blame you there) but just want to share some little gameplay knowledge i stumbled upon:
Warriors that struggle against Ghost/Ethereal enemies in Fort Marrok and Winter Palace, all you need to do is grab one of the two-handed Magic Swords (the ones you get from Berwyn's quest and Fort Marrok quest itself) and you're golden! seriously i was using Cleave with that elemental sword i got from Berwyn (added Charge Weapon as my atwill for good measure) and them ghostly enemies could barely put up any resistance! (just wanted to share cuz a few days ago someone was asking how to clear those areas as a Warrior so there)

 

[Squid37]

I dont think I encountered jen much but reading leofric's part in the wiki makes it sound like such a insufferable oc

"before she can continue a booming voice will shout her name and a near-etheral figure blocking out the sun/moon light will swiftly sucker punch that the Champion which will cause them to pass out. Upon waking they will find Jen nearby with restored vigor as she explains to them that who they encountered was Leofric and that he told her that she was strong, that he was going to return soon and that the Champion is lame. She gives a bit of backstory about Leofric, that he was one of

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finest paladins and that he nearly spent twenty years of his life with the goal to become strong and follow alongside her before she trots off. "

Like thats just egregious. I literally dont understand the point of being like "Yeah my character WONT fuck you, or youre just second rate at BEST". Like Congrats on be suversive for the sake of subversion and not player enjoyment I guess?

 

[arls120]

It is way to cutesy. And like many scenes involving Brint, our character feels like they are written for another game. Like we are sheltered virginal school girl that just learned what "going past the second base" means.

Edit: I went on a little bit of a tangent in my OG comment for something you did not ask for. I am just going to leave what is important in relation to it.


Do not take Atugia and Arona together than. If you bring them along and rest, they are going to have a little contest in front of you.


Honestly, I think I am only person, besides maybe some poor soul on fenexo forums, who likes/maybe adores the bastard.
Still, yeah, it would suck. Even If I am not really romantically interested, being a second wheel (if I go for the romance route) is not something I am really a fan of. Him having a GF is whatever (hope that I can bang her tho) but him liking her more than me kind of kills the mood.
Also, when it comes to companions, writers have (mostly) full control over them. The reason why Quin is getting a GF is because Bubbles wants him to.

Correct me if I'm wrong, is the date the scene where we end up either kissing him or sucking him or both? if so, really seeing the little content that there is of brint (it may be little but I really enjoy it) I must say that I never saw it as if it were so corny until I read your opinion XD. I must say that what I enjoy the most is his Christmas event and when he gives us a ring if I'm not mistaken.

But apart from that, a question, the last time I was trying to see all the content that brint offers and I realized that if you give him more than 20 children, the conversation changes when you tell him about the pregnancy, someone would know if I give him more, a new conversation appears or some other hidden content of brint or that not many know?

 

[OofSs]

If you browse the discord, Bubbleord's not very discreet about it. Her name's Rune, also he might get with a goblin chimera name August, but that's not as set in stone. I believe she's the purple hair cat in the background in the new Mallach temple CG

so bk paid for her oc to get in and romance a companion? what the fuck is this, deviantart?

This is a total shock and so confusing. Isn’t she also BK’s champion for this game too? How is that going to work when you have your champion and someone else’s champion in the same game?

For those who don’t know who Rune is, this is her:



There is something that gets me about people adding their own self-inserts into a porn game because it just feels very Mary Sueish and just plain awkward knowing you are actually fucking one of the artists. There are Pornstars and OnlyFans sluts, that’s way different because you know who you are really getting off too. I mean even William commissions his Steele in some of the image pack art, but he wouldn’t add her into the game. Don’t get me wrong, the artist is a really nice girl and cute artist, but this is just so... bizarre.

 

[LandBeach]

This is a total shock and so confusing. Isn’t she also BK’s champion for this game too? How is that going to work when you have your champion and someone else’s champion in the same game?

For those who don’t know who Rune is, this is her:

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There is something that gets me about people adding their own self-inserts into a porn game because it just feels very Mary Sueish and just plain awkward knowing you are actually fucking one of the artists. There are Pornstars and OnlyFans sluts, that’s way different because you know who you are really getting off too. I mean even William commissions his Steele in some of the image pack art, but he wouldn’t add her into the game. Don’t get me wrong, the artist is a really nice girl and cute artist, but this is just so... bizarre.

Wow I forget Cait has blonde hair most the time. This is art of them right?

 

[destroyerofassholes]

Apparently there's going to be quite a few factors to Jen's disposition, whether or not you screwed her prior to the expac is going to be one of them. He didn't release a doc but he did say after you best Leofric you can convince Jen that his only love will be Tira and she'll lose her crush for him. Or you can play matchmaker and get them to hook up. He didn't specifically say kill but he did allude to some corrupt thing you can do that would make you lose interactions with all the mercenaries, Lusamine, Janeen, and Boomer included. You can get married to Jen but I won't spoil how she's going to act, unless someone asks.

The lieutenant is getting an expansion too? Woah.

 

[destroyerofassholes]

This is a total shock and so confusing. Isn’t she also BK’s champion for this game too? How is that going to work when you have your champion and someone else’s champion in the same game?

For those who don’t know who Rune is, this is her:

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There is something that gets me about people adding their own self-inserts into a porn game because it just feels very Mary Sueish and just plain awkward knowing you are actually fucking one of the artists. There are Pornstars and OnlyFans sluts, that’s way different because you know who you are really getting off too. I mean even William commissions his Steele in some of the image pack art, but he wouldn’t add her into the game. Don’t get me wrong, the artist is a really nice girl and cute artist, but this is just so... bizarre.

Yeah when you know straight up that a character is someone's actual self-insert it's an instant complete and utter turn-off. Doesn't have to have scenes with the champion, it's just bad practice.

And it's...fucking stupid too. Like why'd you even do that, man.

Then again this is a game where someone wrote a daughter for you and wrote like 15 short stories about her that you can't skip.

 

[destroyerofassholes]

I dont think I encountered jen much but reading leofric's part in the wiki makes it sound like such a insufferable oc

"before she can continue a booming voice will shout her name and a near-etheral figure blocking out the sun/moon light will swiftly sucker punch that the Champion which will cause them to pass out. Upon waking they will find Jen nearby with restored vigor as she explains to them that who they encountered was Leofric and that he told her that she was strong, that he was going to return soon and that the Champion is lame. She gives a bit of backstory about Leofric, that he was one of

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finest paladins and that he nearly spent twenty years of his life with the goal to become strong and follow alongside her before she trots off. "

Like thats just egregious. I literally dont understand the point of being like "Yeah my character WONT fuck you, or youre just second rate at BEST". Like Congrats on be suversive for the sake of subversion and not player enjoyment I guess?

I always thought that this was written to be sarcastic. Didn't take it that seriously. Leofric sounds more like a deadbeat than anything else.

 

[NODOGAN]

only thing i like bout Leofric is his art, motherfucker LOOKS like a badass oc (hell i might try to make my next player character look like him lol) other than that he being so inflated makes me really happy we're going to get a chance to gear up and knock him down a peg or two lol.

 

[M0nte]

Okay, seriously, every time I check in on this thread y'all are dissing on the writers, is there any writer in this game you people do like?

Well, my personal favorites are William, Savin and B.
William mostly because he writes stuff that is generally easy to like. Cat harem breeding scenes, Ninja Kitsune and up and coming Einen are just pleasent to read to since they are really focused on player empowerment.

B has a lot of good dialogue and story variations to his characters in both TiTs and CoC2. While he has some things that are not for everyone that is into these kind of games. Stuff like Lyric and Zo are just couple of NPCs that do feel pretty unique compared to the rest of the cast. Also, it helps that he writes a great amount of male related content in male statue, Lyric and up and coming femboys.

Savin, while he has his quirks and stuff I do not like (Half of Caits content, Etheryns confidence gauge) it all can be forgiven. Since when he hits it out of the park, he hits it. Kas, Salamander twins, Arona (I did learn to love her), Evergreen and up and coming Senja expansion (forgot to mention it) are all just things that are interesting to read through and are up my ally. My favorite probably being Kas and Arona, which is suprissing considering I am not really into girls with dicks that much.
While some may question his credibility as project manager(especially with things as elf city not feeling like a city), listening to his though process and his plans do leave me with the hope of the future of this project. Do wish it moved little faster tho.

There are other writers I like like The Observer and Wsan but both of them are to incosistent for my liking. Former is definition of weighted coin toss . Latter one has a knack in making his sex scenes feel all to familiar.

only thing i like bout Leofric is his art, motherfucker LOOKS like a badass oc (hell i might try to make my next player character look like him lol) other than that he being so inflated makes me really happy we're going to get a chance to gear up and knock him down a peg or two lol.

I want to be able to fuck him in the ass while Jen watches.

 

[Darkness339]

I forgot where the Temple of Mallach is