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Lactation content sounds interesting. It would be funny if the PC were to tease Clementine asking her if she is really a sheep or a cow haha
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Fleep interacts here without a hitch, so I really don't see the problem. He's not being stealthy either, his nick over here is Fleep, too.
A lot of people in this place act like dickheads. It's the internet, of course they do, but when you work with people, you just don't go behind their backs to badmouth them where they can see.
It's quite simple: be nice. Really, it's not that hard. Not when it comes to video games.
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-house expansion (build clementine a bigger house)
-More pregnancy stuff
-face sitting
-Milking/Lactation
-system similar to Kiyoko's tails, she gets thicker and busty the more kids she has. (toggleable)
-More children interactions
-Standing sex
-Wooljob? (idk how this would work)
-Wedding event
-Rut content
-Dates
-House system- Clementine moves around the house (e.g. she will be sleeping in her room at night hours and during day hours she will be in the kitchen or doing chores in the living room.)
-nursing content
-Cuddlefuck
-More options with Clementine (kissing, handholding, headpats (etc), more conversations)
-Anal? (I'm not a fan of anal so idk if I could do it justice)
Thank you for the kind comments and suggestions! Just to be clear the Kiyoko-like system I had in mind wasn't going to be drastic or anything, just small changes in the art. Will be adding a note to make it toggleable after seeing responses. If you have any more ideas let me know, apologizes if I skipped over anything you suggested. I'm trying to keep it to things I'm more comfortable with, again still new to writing.
-More pregnancy stuff
-face sitting
-Milking/Lactation
-system similar to Kiyoko's tails, she gets thicker and busty the more kids she has. (toggleable)
-More children interactions
-Standing sex
-Wooljob? (idk how this would work)
-Wedding event
-Rut content
-Dates
-House system- Clementine moves around the house (e.g. she will be sleeping in her room at night hours and during day hours she will be in the kitchen or doing chores in the living room.)
-nursing content
-Cuddlefuck
-More options with Clementine (kissing, handholding, headpats (etc), more conversations)
-Anal? (I'm not a fan of anal so idk if I could do it justice)
Thank you for the kind comments and suggestions! Just to be clear the Kiyoko-like system I had in mind wasn't going to be drastic or anything, just small changes in the art. Will be adding a note to make it toggleable after seeing responses. If you have any more ideas let me know, apologizes if I skipped over anything you suggested. I'm trying to keep it to things I'm more comfortable with, again still new to writing.
Basically a handjob but using the wool around her neck, can even combo it with a BJ like you would with a titfuck. Could also do it with the wool you shear off in the event.
Maybe being able to give her some TF items like Bovim Sherry to increase bust outside of the unwanted thickening?
Don't fly too close to the sun. Do what you gotta do first, expand later.
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The main idea seems to be a variation of "Hair Handjob", in that act, the person envelopes its hair around the penis of its partner and begins to stroke it.
Since it's Clementine, a few examples would be:
- The PC humps it's cock/pussy in the wool located on Clementine's neck/shoulders
- Clementine uses one/both forearm/s to caress the PC Cock/pussy
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Replace all instances of penis/pussy/fuck/etc. with more figurative descriptions. Spear, cleft of venus, lovemaking for corresponding words.
Dont repeats same figure two times in a row in text. So no 'Your breeding tool slowly enters her squishing maw. She moaned and clenched her squishing maw for more pleasuring sensations for both of you.' Second time 'squishing maw' should be something replaced with 'her sacred temple' or 'loins' or 'baby factory' or....
Just be careful with amount of figures per unit of text, too much of them turn porn into pornographic comedy. 'You drop your pants and revealed to the world your hard, glossy, humongous, leaking, beautiful, erect, trembling, mouth watering, attractive, mathematically qualified bitch breaker.' If you really really want to add many figures separate them into different sentences. In first its 'hard dick' in next 'humongous penis' in third 'womans adoring cock' and so on.
Add additional descriptions of a smol interactions for immersion. SMOL not tobs level of unnecessary descriptions. General idea of 'You approaching orgasms so you quicken your pace. She moaned and begins to makeout with you' turns to 'You feel you approaching the edge so you quicken the pace, to not leave her behind. She qutely moans and move her hands from your back to your cheeks. She takes your head and move your lips closer and closer to her lips for a hot makeout'.
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I was going to write an expansion for her ages ago but decided against it. I'm glad someone cares enough to make the sheep complete.
One thing I wanted to write was making the virginity loss more explicit rather than just implied. Do you have plans for that?
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PREGNANCY. PREGNANCY. PREGNANCY. MAKE THE KIDS ARE SWEET TO US
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I think New Zealand will recognise you with some sort of official award if this . . . comes . . . to fruition.
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I think we can expect some sort of award from Welshmen first.
Heh, I don’t think I’m that much of a lost cause when it comes to word choice, but to me what makes erotica hot is what goes on in the inside, not the outside, and that’s where I have trouble. You can call it a penis, a meat rod, a manhood, or even a one-eyed snake, describe it as being turgid, swollen, hard as frozen banana, or what have you—that’s still nothing to do with emotion.
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I'm going to mostly agree to disagree, but fen forums and discord can be just as toxic, it's just against "the right targets". Easiest way to compare is off of them, like here, it's mostly mp lobby level trash talking, straightforward, harsh but unfiltered opinions, but their forums are far more catty, backhanded, gaslight stuff, along with some pricks also. They also actively participate in upsetting people but can't handle it back, like tobs for example, straight up known as a salt miner for a very long time, actively teases stuff people want, even does commissions for stuff that will never be put in the game to upset people. Bubblelord was very commonly abrasive af.
Writers interacting is also not the issue, again my post was because of possible action from savcos end, not here. Just from what Ive seen they *really* dislike places that think cait sucks, kiyoko post orb is crap etc, and there are people that get so angry at certain sites that it becomes a serious issue for anyone associated with them. I think fleeps swell, ludex also, I'm sure most others here do too. If the staff can publicly do all the insults and rage baiting they do though, people should be able to say a character is garbage and a writer is questionable without being considered awful. If they can't handle it they shouldnt have done it themselves. If Grrm can be criticized, OBVIOUSLY borderline japanophobic smut writers can.
On topic tho when I think wooljob, first think that comes to my mind is like hot dog grinding straight into wool, like a Weiner soaring through fluffy clouds
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Literally this, no need to make her into just another slut or give into the whole submission/dominance thing. If you could make the PC actually feel understood and loved (and not just for their huge penis), that would be a huge middle finger to the rest of the game. Just because she's not in the lead doesn't mean she needs to be a "sub" or whatever. Maybe have her pay attention to some things you do in game.
In fact, you could make it so that she refuses to have penetrative sex until you're small enough to fit her, or make it into an inverse relationship - smaller is better (up to a certain point, obviously). That too would be a new one for the game.
Oh god, don't steal this awful idea from the other characters, Clementine's proportions are already pushing it as is. I think this game has enough synthol monsters with broken backs due to having most of their bodyweight in their chests. I mean, am I the only one that noticed that Moira's characters don't have an ass? The bloated parts on the lower body are just two thighs that extend and connect in the back. I saw this first on Elthara, now I can't unsee it anywhere.
The rest seems fine, as long as it's in character, I feel like "Rut content" in particular might get out of hand quickly.
The key is to prompt the reader's imagination. Even if I'm just looking at a single CG of some kind, I'm already subconsciously thinking about the situation and story behind it. For example, instead of saying someone is nervous, you can give hints towards it - Are they fidgeting? Avoiding eye contact? Tail activity? Or freezes like in Clementine's case, if I remember correctly. What I'm trying to say is that I think the best porn actually happens in your head, so maybe looking up 200 different alternatives for the word "penis" isn't the right way. In fact, you might leave no room for the reader's imagination when you overdescribe what's happening. I'm no writer, it's just something I picked up on.Heh, I don’t think I’m that much of a lost cause when it comes to word choice, but to me what makes erotica hot is what goes on in the inside, not the outside, and that’s where I have trouble. You can call it a penis, a meat rod, a manhood, or even a one-eyed snake, describe it as being turgid, swollen, hard as frozen banana, or what have you—that’s still nothing to do with emotion.
This would also be nice, but in general, I think she needs a better relationship start, as right now you just walk up to her home and say "Sex?" and she just casually accepts. Yes, I know that's basically most characters in the game.
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I'm not sure changing stuff that's already in the game is the best idea (or would be allowed anyway). That's a whole different ballgame than actually just adding stuff.
At that point, you have to consider writing your own character.
Also, 4chan is a hellhole, so that's just telling it like it is.
At that point, you have to consider writing your own character.
Plenty of people on the forums and Discord have said the same thing without any fuss. I think this is a bit overblown. I've never seen anyone banned or even badmouthed for posting on the forums or Discord for originating from any other site. They talk shit about f95 and 4chan significantly less often than the reverse.
Also, 4chan is a hellhole, so that's just telling it like it is.
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Almost reminds me of a certain removed companion. What do you think is the biggest problem? Or is adding or removing a few words for continuity's sake already too much?