Raf-Raf

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What's this? A writer that's listening to the players AND putting what THEY want in the game?
I cannot approve of this, this is too much power fantasy.
I'll repeat again, writers doing what the PLAYERS want? Too much power fantasy indeed. tsk tsk.
 

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Or Tobs will write an event in which the town is invaded by Hobgoblins, guess who is forced to enjoy their visit...
That will make their extinction a lot more justifiable. Unless he tries to spin them as being "forced" to do that shit and are "victims" like the shitsune supposedly are
 
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Heh, I don’t think I’m that much of a lost cause when it comes to word choice, but to me what makes erotica hot is what goes on in the inside, not the outside, and that’s where I have trouble. You can call it a penis, a meat rod, a manhood, or even a one-eyed snake, describe it as being turgid, swollen, hard as frozen banana, or what have you—that’s still nothing to do with emotion. :)
Yeah word choice is one of the bigger problems with the erotica side imo, most blatantly majority of tobs stuff, I really can't think of anyone of any gender whod find "baby bag" or any other similar euphemisms a turn on, and I'm decently degenerate myself. Talking about impregnation's one thing but their ad lib approach and some of the terms used are godawful. Rindos "she smells like ashes and burning" talk is cringe, not a turn on, and/or offensive depending on preference. Tobs has some good setups and writing, purple prose maybe excluded, for erotic scenes but someone really should have insisted he at least altered the terms used for the rng.

Especially since kitsune are supposed to be very experienced, playful, walking sex monsters, it's odd how little actual seduction they have written, instead baby bag, ashes, and "hey wanna watch me blow this passed out drunk guy?" Surprisingly little foreplay stuff in game of a character doing something erotic on purpose and giving a smug grin when PC looks, or purposefully grinding against them etc. Warm ups can add a ton to a scenes impact imo. Also disappointed in lack of genital scene flavor text, most have support for knots in some form, some minotaurs have horse flare support I think, but I'm very disappointed I can't be a big greasy pig dude flopping on people mentioning the piggy drill. Doesn't have to be huge amount, just would be nice to have single lines added to characters. Plenty of ntr ish content but sadly lacking in the department to *be* the ntr ub.

And yeah emotion wise many characters are either seemingly boinked beyond repair or in "DANGER ROBINSON FAMILY" mode, but the husbando/waifu factor adds a great deal to enjoyment of scenes, little things like brienne defending you against the rest of your party etc, "take me now" moments etc add a lot, stuff like kiyoko not giving AF what you think post orb, quintillus etc detract
 

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Yeah word choice is one of the bigger problems with the erotica side imo, most blatantly majority of tobs stuff, I really can't think of anyone of any gender whod find "baby bag" or any other similar euphemisms a turn on, and I'm decently degenerate myself. Talking about impregnation's one thing but their ad lib approach and some of the terms used are godawful. Rindos "she smells like ashes and burning" talk is cringe, not a turn on, and/or offensive depending on preference. Tobs has some good setups and writing, purple prose maybe excluded, for erotic scenes but someone really should have insisted he at least altered the terms used for the rng.

Especially since kitsune are supposed to be very experienced, playful, walking sex monsters, it's odd how little actual seduction they have written, instead baby bag, ashes, and "hey wanna watch me blow this passed out drunk guy?" Surprisingly little foreplay stuff in game of a character doing something erotic on purpose and giving a smug grin when PC looks, or purposefully grinding against them etc. Warm ups can add a ton to a scenes impact imo. Also disappointed in lack of genital scene flavor text, most have support for knots in some form, some minotaurs have horse flare support I think, but I'm very disappointed I can't be a big greasy pig dude flopping on people mentioning the piggy drill. Doesn't have to be huge amount, just would be nice to have single lines added to characters. Plenty of ntr ish content but sadly lacking in the department to *be* the ntr ub.

And yeah emotion wise many characters are either seemingly boinked beyond repair or in "DANGER ROBINSON FAMILY" mode, but the husbando/waifu factor adds a great deal to enjoyment of scenes, little things like brienne defending you against the rest of your party etc, "take me now" moments etc add a lot, stuff like kiyoko not giving AF what you think post orb, quintillus etc detract
Yeah, Tobs’s word usage has always struck me as really weak for someone who thinks himself a fantastic writer. I think it stems in part from his lacking concision; he’s long-winded and repeats himself a lot, and so feels he has to exhaust every possible synonym for a body part so as not to make the repetition too obvious, which is how we get things like “baby bag”.

I want to say I have a few ideas for kitsune myself, but I’m still a long ways from getting them into the game, so uh … soon™.*

Thing is, I find it especially hard to work emotions in writing for CoC2, because I can’t really account for either character; I have to write with a generic protagonist in mind, and since I’m a newbie they want me writing encounters with generic NPCs to start off, so it gets real impersonal, real fast.

* Not really.
 

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Yeah word choice is one of the bigger problems with the erotica side imo, most blatantly majority of tobs stuff, I really can't think of anyone of any gender whod find "baby bag" or any other similar euphemisms a turn on, and I'm decently degenerate myself. Talking about impregnation's one thing but their ad lib approach and some of the terms used are godawful. Rindos "she smells like ashes and burning" talk is cringe, not a turn on, and/or offensive depending on preference. Tobs has some good setups and writing, purple prose maybe excluded, for erotic scenes but someone really should have insisted he at least altered the terms used for the rng.

Especially since kitsune are supposed to be very experienced, playful, walking sex monsters, it's odd how little actual seduction they have written, instead baby bag, ashes, and "hey wanna watch me blow this passed out drunk guy?" Surprisingly little foreplay stuff in game of a character doing something erotic on purpose and giving a smug grin when PC looks, or purposefully grinding against them etc. Warm ups can add a ton to a scenes impact imo. Also disappointed in lack of genital scene flavor text, most have support for knots in some form, some minotaurs have horse flare support I think, but I'm very disappointed I can't be a big greasy pig dude flopping on people mentioning the piggy drill. Doesn't have to be huge amount, just would be nice to have single lines added to characters. Plenty of ntr ish content but sadly lacking in the department to *be* the ntr ub.

And yeah emotion wise many characters are either seemingly boinked beyond repair or in "DANGER ROBINSON FAMILY" mode, but the husbando/waifu factor adds a great deal to enjoyment of scenes, little things like brienne defending you against the rest of your party etc, "take me now" moments etc add a lot, stuff like kiyoko not giving AF what you think post orb, quintillus etc detract
TOBS will never understand how seduce work because the only time he got seduction from his father , and now he become someone who hates Father x Daughter

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TOBS will never understand how seduce work because the only time he got seduction from his father
The "Tobs got abused by his father" joke is as funny as the first time you said it (it wasn't).

Tobs is the most atrocious writer in the game, he deserves to get shit on for his purple prose and his absolutely mind-boggling goal of pissing as much of CoC2's playerbase as he can. But "He's a horrible writer because he was sexually assaulted lol" take sounds like you're grasping for something that's not there don't you think?
 

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The "Tobs got abused by his father" joke is as funny as the first time you said it (it wasn't).

Tobs is the most atrocious writer in the game, he deserves to get shit on for his purple prose and his absolutely mind-boggling goal of pissing as much of CoC2's playerbase as he can. But "He's a horrible writer because he was sexually assaulted lol" take sounds like you're grasping for something that's not there don't you think?
The brain rot has progressed far too much for me to care.Salvation is but a distant dream rn
 

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"she smells like ashes and burning"
Omg all this time... That one line changes entire game.
Remember the intro of half life 2? "Wake up mis-s-ster Freeman, wake up and....s-s-smell the as-s-she-s-s".
All this time this was a reference to half life 2. Coc2 happens in half life 2 universe on a distant world that escaped detection of combines, where g-man hides between common folks for a new 'candidates' for his 'employers'. Player is literally the right man in the wrong place that made all difference in the world. Thats half life 3 that we all waited for. HYYYYYYYYPE!!!!!!111111oneoneeleven

Do you know what this means? Tobs writing genius cant be fully comprehended by mere mortals. Who else do you know that secretly able to make a porn game in half life 2 universe without anyone, even lead game dev and even valve, realizing it?
What else he hid there? I dont know. We need to analyze his world salad letter by letter to reveal even more hiden, deep lore!!!!!!111111
 

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i paused playing this mess of a game to work on a coc1 fork. Tho i do come back to it for ideas on how to "fix" coc1.

On a side note coc2 is very fustrating because in some cases it has good ideas but they end up going nowhere with them.
 
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