- Jul 29, 2020
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I would be open to it. Have you happened to run what I have worked on so far? (New game intro and the playground moms. If not it is the top post on this page.)Could Demonkillr1 and Squark coordinate their work? ( Supposing they are not the same person ) ...
ALSO, it's only occasionally that the excitement level of a text is more than that of the main appeal of the game, the outlandish storyline & a lot of the female artwork (crazily overdone though the heaving bosoms are on some, and dicey the bottom end of the wide age spectrum)....
But it's true there are a number of places where sharper, more convincing, hotter, spicier dialog(ue) would drive up the appeal of the game further. I think e.g. (examples off the top of my head) of the passenger in the middle subway carriage, the two young cops, Simpson, the barmaid in the uptown bar. Basically, with the hottest of the enchanted females. That's where text tweaks would be ... nicest. Some well-located tweaks would defo be welcome.
I was halfway thinking of doing the subway next but wanted to get a little feedback before I went further...