I was looking for a female protagonist game and checked that game here. It has potential, some cute characters and funny moments, but it seems to have some flaws in story and courruption system.
Right now it seems like a doing the same side quest every day and hope to get new scenes. That could be okay, but although sometimes corruption points appear, I can't really see what they do with the MC. I'm not even sure if corruption points are really necessary for events of if there are alternate routes for a pure (resisting) MC. I don't see a love interest in the game. With that, I'm not sure if I can play a lesbian path or will the MC just corrupted by every man in town?
Because some locations are only opened at evening I even don't know how to spent my time in the town in the morning / afternoon. I like the animation when Dolly dress herself. I like that she has different clothes for different locations. I like most scenes with Dolly's panty provide a cameltoe. But besides the side quest events the game is a too early stage to offer more entertaiment.
There is the unfinished quest with Angourie which
DingoDonger1 mentioned that need a rework. It's a good example why the game doesn't work well for me. I don't get a good connection with Dolly and her motivation. When Dolly is invited she ends up with Angourie in bed and she makes her cum. Why would Dolly let her do that to her? From the start of the game she is more an innocent person. The quest was introduced as a ritual, but in the end she just drinks tee that makes her horny, I guess. Is there an alternative route, if she refuses to take part or is that a dead end for the player?
As a suggestion, I would create that quest in multiple layers.
First step. Introduce Dolly to the club or whatever Angourie would call that. Get Dolly's courisity when she watches a ceremony in which everybody (except her) is undressed and has painted their bodies and praise a goddess of fertility. (maybe there is a phallus or a big breasted statue somewhere ... or a futa goddess, for example). Then Angourie offers the liquid that she squirts and mix it with the male members cum. Then she mix it with the herbs and she creates a potion that helps women to get pregnant or something.
Second step. Dolly get's part of the ritual, but is too shy to undress. Angourie takes her to a room alone and seduces her. She fingers her and totally gets excited by Dolly's pussy juice. She gives her an orgasm, but she realize that she needs much more.
Third step is to let Dolly attend on the rituals, maybe to a point where she can sacrifice her virginity for creating an even stronger potion. Maybe this could be also connected with her sister who has to take place for her at some point.
I haven't played long enough to find all quests (like the chess game, the doctor scenes or the goblin that could have sex with her). I think it would be important to make Dolly's motivation understandable. If a scene is about her first time or if she gets molested, she should resist instead let it just happen, for example. Instead of only show corruption maybe there could appear a menu that shows her body status.
and yes, there should be corruption with consequences as it progresses.
