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BSSDSJ

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Solid start! But you really need to stop with the random teleports. It feels cheap and trivializes something powerful. Have the MC get ambushed during missions or something instead.
 

Johan_0000

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Woooow the preview renders seem beautiful. I hope the story and narration are on par with it. That dragon look sick. And man how I loove dragon. I'm hoping more dev/s put some fights in their games, we need more shonen avn (at least good ones lol).

This goes straight to my watchlist, at this point I'm not even lookin at avns for sex. The fact that you can have choices in the story that'll impact it is rly what does it for me lol.
Btw, does smn know abt a site for sfw VN a bit like this one? pm me if that's the case


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Johan_0000

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Woooow the preview renders seem beautiful. I hope the story and narration are on par with it.
Good visuals and world-building, but...


The dialogue is underwhelming and the transitions are comically bad. It should take 10 minutes to learn how to do proper transitions in Renpy. I can see this being unplayable for most, every scene is annoying to go through.
Man are you serious?! I should rly begin reading the latest coms. I was so hyped lol



THX
 

D2bock

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Man are you serious?! I should rly begin reading the latest coms. I was so hyped lol

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I mean, you should try it yourself. This one have great story, if you into adventure like shonen manga/anime, this one I think will suit you. There are a lot of fight scene and some of theym are FUCKING EPIC. The previous comment, he is not wrong about the transitions but only the first part of the game. The first chapter have no transition between the scene at all. About the dialog, there are some issues but minor, I don't mind much about it. Overall, it is a really good story-focus AVN
 

gargamel44

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Man are you serious?! I should rly begin reading the latest coms. I was so hyped lol



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I didn't say anything about the story.

The narration is definitely amateur but that's common in the adult industry, I've still yet to play an adult VN that has good writing and doesn't sound stupidly pretentious (and I've played the best rated VNs in here). If you want top tier narration then you're better off playing 07th expansion games or Fata morgana lol

Try it out, I think it can be entertaining. But yeah, it has a lot to improve.
 
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ImariKurumi

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This is the real deal. Excited to have Xianxia/Xuanhuan in VN form.
Has almost all the usual cultivation troupes.
Yaoguai Cultivator(Awakened Animals), Pill Refining(wish it goes into detail), Innate Talents(Ice Born/Heavenly Body), Cultivation system/ranks, Cultivation Laws(not sure what law they are cultivating, i'm assuming its the 3 Swords law), Techniques(Sword Dao/Shadowless Sword), Domains, Artifacts & Spirit Weapons.
Pill Refiners using their cauldrons as spirit weapons, All female Sect where the Sect Master is against her Prime Disciple falling in love, All male Sect practicing Shendao instead of Xiandao, Forbidden Techniques to temporarily jump Realms, Cultivator with overbearing father with unrealistic expectations, the different races & realms, rivals & grudges.

Cultivation ranks are named differently that the norm, i'm assuming Qi Transcendance is the Golden Core realm?
As its mentioned there's a huge jump between Qi Mastery and Qi Transcendence.
Does the cultivation have Heavenly Tribulations at Qi Transcendence & Qi God realms?
Also the cultivation realms are all Mortal Realms? I'm assuming there's a whole new set of cultivation realms after Qi God meant for Immortal Realms?
Plus there's a world called Upper Realms which the sect master ascended to, so kind of supports the theory there's more cultivation realms after Qi God.

Anyways looking at the direction the story is going, i'm theorycrafting that the MC's father was a Soul Realm cultivator(forbidden love). Deity Realm possibly allied with betrayers of the Demon Realm to overthrow Vannyr's family so they can be the new demons in charge. Deity Realm hunted Dragons to extinction and eventually imprisoned Aetherius to be the Nexus Guardian. Possibly Deity Realm caused the Demon invasion by helping rivals of Vannyr's family, in some sort of powerplay to seize control of the lower realms. The true mastermind is hiding in the Upper Realms. The necklace is some sort of sentient artifact/imprisoned soul capable of travelling to different worlds, that's being hunted down by Upper Realms & their cronies(possibly Deity Realm) and also by the evil faction in the Upper Realms(and their lapdogs Soul Realm).

Anyways i hope there'll be a couple of seasons of this VN.
 

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Johan_0000

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I mean, you should try it yourself. This one have great story, if you into adventure like shonen manga/anime, this one I think will suit you. There are a lot of fight scene and some of theym are FUCKING EPIC. The previous comment, he is not wrong about the transitions but only the first part of the game. The first chapter have no transition between the scene at all. About the dialog, there are some issues but minor, I don't mind much about it. Overall, it is a really good story-focus AVN
Ok thx man, and don't worry, when I'm interested in smt, I always try things myself b4 giving up on them even if they have a 0 star rating lol.

I didn't say anything about the story.

The narration is definitely amateur but that's common in the adult industry, I've still yet to play an adult VN that has good writing and doesn't sound stupidly pretentious (and I've played the best rated VNs in here). If you want top tier narration then you're better off playing 07th expansion games or Fata morgana lol

Try it out, I think it can be entertaining. But yeah, it has a lot to improve.
I meann, I'm playing an AVN, I'm not expecting some grand thing lol. For me the most importnant thing in those are :

-Not overly descripting and hell nah the description that keeps repeating itself (yk when they say the same thing but just use different words lol). I have nothing against a bit of description but what I like abt vn is the feeling that it's moving, there is already an image there, why'd you spend 4 hours telling me abt how the character is struggling. I can alrdy tell by his face, just use 2 or 3 sentences atleast c'mon... If I wanted to read that much, I'd just read a book.

-I don't mind a few mistakes but I rly hope that some dev/s get a proofreader bc smt, it's litteraly impossible.

-Another thing that rly frustrate me is when they cut scenes randomly. Wth, it's obcvious this scene wasn't finished lol or atleast make it seem like smt interrupted them and they had to depart idk lol.

-The useless time skips, whyyyyyyyyyyyyyy? why???? Why do they do that, especially the ones that just make you feel like you missed out on a lot of things. Then, dump it all on you through flashbacks during moment that aren't suposed to have flashbacks (at least it seems like smt's off and they break the dynamic).


Lol I think I'll stop here. If I don't, I think could go on for a long time and dump all the frustration I accumulated ever since I started playing AVNs lol.

I've still yet to play an adult VN that has good writing and doesn't sound stupidly pretentious
Wdym by that?



Anyway, in term of shonen AVN I have yet to find smt better than superhuman, I don't think I will but smt that atleast get anywhere near that lvl would be great.




THX
 

tsunku

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i wish the releases happened faster, yes i know how they won't so don't say it haha
this is almost like a manhwa brought to 'life'. i am ejoying it, hated the ending as it was just getting extremely interesting. i think his father came from the demon realm not the soul realm, hence why he was taken over and forced open the portal. but where is the dragon?!?!?
 

gargamel44

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Ok thx man, and don't worry, when I'm interested in smt, I always try things myself b4 giving up on them even if they have a 0 star rating lol.


I meann, I'm playing an AVN, I'm not expecting some grand thing lol. For me the most importnant thing in those are :

-Not overly descripting and hell nah the description that keeps repeating itself (yk when they say the same thing but just use different words lol). I have nothing against a bit of description but what I like abt vn is the feeling that it's moving, there is already an image there, why'd you spend 4 hours telling me abt how the character is struggling. I can alrdy tell by his face, just use 2 or 3 sentences atleast c'mon... If I wanted to read that much, I'd just read a book.

-I don't mind a few mistakes but I rly hope that some dev/s get a proofreader bc smt, it's litteraly impossible.

-Another thing that rly frustrate me is when they cut scenes randomly. Wth, it's obcvious this scene wasn't finished lol or atleast make it seem like smt interrupted them and they had to depart idk lol.

-The useless time skips, whyyyyyyyyyyyyyy? why???? Why do they do that, especially the ones that just make you feel like you missed out on a lot of things. Then, dump it all on you through flashbacks during moment that aren't suposed to have flashbacks (at least it seems like smt's off and they break the dynamic).


Lol I think I'll stop here. If I don't, I think could go on for a long time and dump all the frustration I accumulated ever since I started playing AVNs lol.


Wdym by that?



Anyway, in term of shonen AVN I have yet to find smt better than superhuman, I don't think I will but smt that atleast get anywhere near that lvl would be great.




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Superhuman is definitely one of the best if not the best story-wise. I always find the way to complain about the narration, but that's because I'm very scrupulous and I want real quality from works that pretend to seduce an audience to make them support them. About the points you mentioned, as far as I've played this VN, I don't think you would have a problem with it. Either way it's always best to judge it by yourself. Try it out
 
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Mommysbuttslut

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Dang that was good. Writing is decent, character's are well designed and written, MC is fairly likeable, plot is pretty good and there's a metric shit ton of content for a game that came out this February. Definitely looking forward to more of this one.
 
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Victor Shakespeare

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DuskDuck There are something wrong with the game/script/char_detail.rpy and game/script/replay.rpy files which leads to the errors of the correct display of girl's information,affection and scene replay at the right-top of the screen.For PC or JoiPlay,you can just change the [str(xxx_affection)] into [xxx_affection] in line 29,41,53,65,77,89,101,113,125,137 of game/script/char_detail.rpy,then you will get the right display of girl's affection.You also have to change the [str(filter_tag)!u] into [filter_tag] or [filter_tag!u] in line 28 of game/script/replay.rpy for the scene replay function to work.
 
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