Woooow the preview renders seem beautiful. I hope the story and narration are on par with it.
Man are you serious?! I should rly begin reading the latest coms. I was so hyped lolGood visuals and world-building, but...
The dialogue is underwhelming and the transitions are comically bad. It should take 10 minutes to learn how to do proper transitions in Renpy. I can see this being unplayable for most, every scene is annoying to go through.
I mean, you should try it yourself. This one have great story, if you into adventure like shonen manga/anime, this one I think will suit you. There are a lot of fight scene and some of theym are FUCKING EPIC. The previous comment, he is not wrong about the transitions but only the first part of the game. The first chapter have no transition between the scene at all. About the dialog, there are some issues but minor, I don't mind much about it. Overall, it is a really good story-focus AVNMan are you serious?! I should rly begin reading the latest coms. I was so hyped lol
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I didn't say anything about the story.Man are you serious?! I should rly begin reading the latest coms. I was so hyped lol
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Ok thx man, and don't worry, when I'm interested in smt, I always try things myself b4 giving up on them even if they have a 0 star rating lol.I mean, you should try it yourself. This one have great story, if you into adventure like shonen manga/anime, this one I think will suit you. There are a lot of fight scene and some of theym are FUCKING EPIC. The previous comment, he is not wrong about the transitions but only the first part of the game. The first chapter have no transition between the scene at all. About the dialog, there are some issues but minor, I don't mind much about it. Overall, it is a really good story-focus AVN
I meann, I'm playing an AVN, I'm not expecting some grand thing lol. For me the most importnant thing in those are :I didn't say anything about the story.
The narration is definitely amateur but that's common in the adult industry, I've still yet to play an adult VN that has good writing and doesn't sound stupidly pretentious (and I've played the best rated VNs in here). If you want top tier narration then you're better off playing 07th expansion games or Fata morgana lol
Try it out, I think it can be entertaining. But yeah, it has a lot to improve.
Wdym by that?I've still yet to play an adult VN that has good writing and doesn't sound stupidly pretentious
he should self-NTR haha oh wait, he probably suffers that already...disgusting. self immolate right now
Superhuman is definitely one of the best if not the best story-wise. I always find the way to complain about the narration, but that's because I'm very scrupulous and I want real quality from works that pretend to seduce an audience to make them support them. About the points you mentioned, as far as I've played this VN, I don't think you would have a problem with it. Either way it's always best to judge it by yourself. Try it outOk thx man, and don't worry, when I'm interested in smt, I always try things myself b4 giving up on them even if they have a 0 star rating lol.
I meann, I'm playing an AVN, I'm not expecting some grand thing lol. For me the most importnant thing in those are :
-Not overly descripting and hell nah the description that keeps repeating itself (yk when they say the same thing but just use different words lol). I have nothing against a bit of description but what I like abt vn is the feeling that it's moving, there is already an image there, why'd you spend 4 hours telling me abt how the character is struggling. I can alrdy tell by his face, just use 2 or 3 sentences atleast c'mon... If I wanted to read that much, I'd just read a book.
-I don't mind a few mistakes but I rly hope that some dev/s get a proofreader bc smt, it's litteraly impossible.
-Another thing that rly frustrate me is when they cut scenes randomly. Wth, it's obcvious this scene wasn't finished lol or atleast make it seem like smt interrupted them and they had to depart idk lol.
-The useless time skips, whyyyyyyyyyyyyyy? why???? Why do they do that, especially the ones that just make you feel like you missed out on a lot of things. Then, dump it all on you through flashbacks during moment that aren't suposed to have flashbacks (at least it seems like smt's off and they break the dynamic).
Lol I think I'll stop here. If I don't, I think could go on for a long time and dump all the frustration I accumulated ever since I started playing AVNs lol.
Wdym by that?
Anyway, in term of shonen AVN I have yet to find smt better than superhuman, I don't think I will but smt that atleast get anywhere near that lvl would be great.
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