- Jan 3, 2020
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First of all thank you, this must be a hell of work and effort. Now some small criticism:
Enjoyed first chapter quite a bit.
Second chapter got way out of hand (literally in most cases) with the spanking shit, and theres no much development storywise,
at that point so, i got really disconnected. Also MC Became a textbook psychopath, a tyrant and an asshole, that didnt help.
Begging of third chapter made me want to shoot myself.
Third chapter looks beta. Charlotte is definetly something, too bad that came in strong but didnt deliver much. After the introduction she became spanking material. Chloe and Emily carried the game so far.
If animation is gonna look good, go for it, otherwise i wouldnt spend time there cause full body animated scenes take a lot of time and may look cringy. I mean, the spanking with only a extended straight arm looks horrible.
Enjoyed first chapter quite a bit.
Second chapter got way out of hand (literally in most cases) with the spanking shit, and theres no much development storywise,
at that point so, i got really disconnected. Also MC Became a textbook psychopath, a tyrant and an asshole, that didnt help.
Begging of third chapter made me want to shoot myself.
Third chapter looks beta. Charlotte is definetly something, too bad that came in strong but didnt deliver much. After the introduction she became spanking material. Chloe and Emily carried the game so far.
If animation is gonna look good, go for it, otherwise i wouldnt spend time there cause full body animated scenes take a lot of time and may look cringy. I mean, the spanking with only a extended straight arm looks horrible.