Lose agains Rachel whe you are in her room with susan... i think.
That or you have to go to Susan and talk to her, then order something and then talk to her again
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That or you have to go to Susan and talk to her, then order something and then talk to her again
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I didn’t like any of it when we moved off the yacht in this game. At the same time, that freedom to do things with other women was lost. BUT now this last Fifth Chapter is something so fucked up. I downright hate this once all the "Harem" elements have been removed. That marriage was the last straw when this top game got a neck shot. This was ruined at the point when we finally moved from the yacht to that city. It was still tolerable when you had to choose between going to town or being on a yacht. Rachel and Linda were the best in the game and their exhaustion immediately dropped from 5 stars to 2 stars and it wasn’t much comfort to them from their random visit but now this game is starless. I didn’t think I was saying this, but I enjoyed the sandbox style on the yacht and it wasn’t completely free, but enough. Now this game is like going on some train tracks. Nor am I happy with any of the way Rachel has been made. So in a way Susan stole a woman from me and at this point, those three letters NTR enter the ring. No longer interested in playing this anymore. For the first time in these games, what I have played reminds me that this game goes backwards. That is, we start with such a narrow marriage concept and it moves towards a Harem style thing on a yacht. If I could give minus stars I could give this game -3 stars. Hell nicely made top game just full of shit.
Can someone tell me why it shows "no dc"? it's not just this game it appears in, any like this that I've downloaded to play.
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sometimes going back to the office then back to the yacht again unlocks the event
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You need to spank Rachel butt naked in the corridor AND have Susan watch you do it (random)
Once she saw you, go speak to Susan in the Cabin, it will start the chain of dialog leading to the Island II
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After the Island I think you can't go back anymore. Not sure about it though, it's been a while...
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Some news from TheGary on his Patreon page:
Hello everyone,
A little update to let you know what I'm working on these days.
I have been looking for the proper environment for the game, which is one of the longest processes, mainly because the choice is final and will last for a very long time.
I need to make sure of the quality of each location I want. I should have something to show you soon.
I still don't have a name for the new game, I don't want to rush it so... not sure when I'll announce one, maybe I'll make a poll for it when the time comes.
I made 3 characters for the game and asked the Admiral tier what they thought about them, feedback was very positive but they might still be subject to some little changes.
What else.... ah, I fixed a lot of typos in the lastest CmA release, they were reported by a player so big thanks to him. I'll release the patch soon, my mobile data plan took a hit and I can't upload much (yeah, still using my phone for the internet, it sucks).
And... you're up to date!
See you soon and thanks for your support
Hello everyone,
A little update to let you know what I'm working on these days.
I have been looking for the proper environment for the game, which is one of the longest processes, mainly because the choice is final and will last for a very long time.
I need to make sure of the quality of each location I want. I should have something to show you soon.
I still don't have a name for the new game, I don't want to rush it so... not sure when I'll announce one, maybe I'll make a poll for it when the time comes.
I made 3 characters for the game and asked the Admiral tier what they thought about them, feedback was very positive but they might still be subject to some little changes.
What else.... ah, I fixed a lot of typos in the lastest CmA release, they were reported by a player so big thanks to him. I'll release the patch soon, my mobile data plan took a hit and I can't upload much (yeah, still using my phone for the internet, it sucks).
And... you're up to date!
See you soon and thanks for your support
Soooooo... i want to make a fan version of this ending, and i mean i want to make a fan-created version of the ending, with an update focused on Rachel and a whole episode for the "desicion", not just one update. But i want it to be as real as posible, and the only way to archive that is to get TheGary's opinion.
I'm going to make a "kinetic novel" version of the last update with screenshots of the previous episodes instead of new renders because i don't have the assets or the equipment necesary to create the new renders, and i wonder if anyone here can get this "thing" that i want to make to TheGary, or at leat this message, because this "thing" will take me a while. since a don't have a lot of time right now.
After all, this are TheGary's caracters and story, and i don't want to make just a "fanfic" of this, i want it to be a "real" alternative ending.
Like, this is the "ending A", and i want to make an "Ending B" with proper development to every caracter and a little tribute to the story so far and to point the diference between each girl.
But even if it's just a fan proyect, i need TheGary's opinion.
In a few month i'll become an Almirant, but i don't want this thing to "get cold" or to "get forgoten" so even if the actual "fan ending" thing get started in a few months, i really want TheGary's opinion on this.
I'm going to make a "kinetic novel" version of the last update with screenshots of the previous episodes instead of new renders because i don't have the assets or the equipment necesary to create the new renders, and i wonder if anyone here can get this "thing" that i want to make to TheGary, or at leat this message, because this "thing" will take me a while. since a don't have a lot of time right now.
After all, this are TheGary's caracters and story, and i don't want to make just a "fanfic" of this, i want it to be a "real" alternative ending.
Like, this is the "ending A", and i want to make an "Ending B" with proper development to every caracter and a little tribute to the story so far and to point the diference between each girl.
But even if it's just a fan proyect, i need TheGary's opinion.
In a few month i'll become an Almirant, but i don't want this thing to "get cold" or to "get forgoten" so even if the actual "fan ending" thing get started in a few months, i really want TheGary's opinion on this.
Several people are in contact with TheGary if you want to write something and get something to him, it's doable.
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You genuinely seem to want your own ending. It shows a real interest for the game, and I respect that.
As a few here, and some more elsewhere, you resent that Rachel was not among the possible choices. I already gave my opinion about that and tried to explain why for me it was not really possible, storywise. I won't do it again.
However, you need to consider / understand a few things.
. Gary did the best he could, given the time he had and the support he received. For most of his patrons, Chapter 5 was a very good release. As for me, but I'm only one among scores of patrons, it's close to being my dream update.
. Gary told the story he wanted to tell, taking advice and making polls along the way from his patron base to make the experience as enjoyable as possible for most. As far as I know you were not there. It's not a criticism, I would never mock or reproach someone because being a patron means spending money and not everyone gets the chance to be able to do it. What I'm trying to say here is that Gary was very close to his patrons, especially on Discord. And to insist that much about a "proper ending" is like saying to Gary that he did a sloppy job for his finale. And that the opinion of his patrons means nothing. I do resent that.
. Gary will release a "public" version of Chapter 5. It will include typo corrections passed along by splamo (and big thanks to him). It will be the only change, as far as I know. Gary is working on his new project, he already shared some picks with us on Discord. CMA chapter is closed for him and he needs to fully concentrate on his new game. I doubt very much that he will spend much time going over an ending that he would have done himself, had he felt the need for it. And he values a lot the quality of his game. So getting his support for an alternate version would mean that you are able to produce the same render quality, with a story and dialog that are consistent with the former chapters. What's your track record in those fields that would make Gary consider your offer?
So don't raise your hopes up too high.
I think it's time to move on and get ready for the new game.
I admire your choice to do such a thing. I wouldn't use screenshots though. If you unren the game, extracting the assets, you get access to the original images and scripts. Then download the RenPy game engine version that the last version of the game was developed in, and you can manipulate the game however you want, writing the new code that you need to achieve the final result that you seek.
As a work in progress, you can post in the game mods section to get opinions and advice from other forum members who also think Rachel deserved more love in an ending.
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Gary's announcement for his new game :
You were separated from your best friend and his girlfriend during a fortnight wilderness treck.
After a week alone trying to find your way back in the forest, a mysterious girl appears and brings you to her home to meet 'Mother' and help find your friends.
A small community of hospitable women living in a secluded Eden, away from civilization. Everything seems too good to be true, you can't shake the feeling that something wrong is happening here...
See you soon for more news about The Patriarch.
See you soon for more news about The Patriarch.
You were separated from your best friend and his girlfriend during a fortnight wilderness treck.
After a week alone trying to find your way back in the forest, a mysterious girl appears and brings you to her home to meet 'Mother' and help find your friends.
A small community of hospitable women living in a secluded Eden, away from civilization. Everything seems too good to be true, you can't shake the feeling that something wrong is happening here...
See you soon for more news about The Patriarch.
See you soon for more news about The Patriarch.
Alright, you obviously care for this game a lot, so i'll try to explain myself the best i can. I apologize for any mistake i might make, english is not my native lenguage and i have dyslexia.
First of all, I know. Every point that you make i understand, but this game means just to much for me.
First, i kind of understand why, storywise, Rachel couldn't been a choice, but i also don't entirely understand, because of the calls you had with you uncle, where he tell you that it was his plan that you had that relationship with Rachel and basically fulfill his role, take this place in the relationship with Rachel and Susan.
There are several phone calls with you uncle where this is hint, he literally tells you to have sex with Rachel and help you do it.
But i also can understand why making you choose between you ex-girlfriend(now maid/slave) Rachel or his daughters might be hard to justify storywise.
*The LAST update was really good, the only problem i have is Rachel and little to nothing more.
My first problem is that Rachel is not a choice, after everything that happend you don't have any scene with Rachel in any ending, you have an event that is independent of the ending, but not event one that IS part of one ending.
My other problem is that the second island event is forgoten, the relationship and attitude of Rachel in this yatch event is the same as before the island, but Susan is not. The other problem is that this is the last thing you see, this is where the game ends, and since the last update and the ending are around you choosing a wife, it makes more sense that the last event, and the last thing you see, is your wife.
i mean, if you cut the whole second island event, the rest of the game makes perfect sense: The relationship with Rachel never develop enough, so cuting her from the ending makes sense, the same with Susan, your relationship with Susan before the second island event is based around Rachel, is in the island that you start a proper relationship with Susan, without Rachel.
*The problem i have is not the finale, is not the episode 5, is the last update of episode 4: I'll explain.
Before the third and last update of episode 4 there is nothing that tells you "There is no harem ending, you'll have to choose one of this 3 girls", if anything there are hints about a harem ending with Amy, Chloe and Emily knowing about all you do with each girl. And there is nothing that tells you "The ending is coming", so for me, that i'm not a Patreon(yet), and didn't knew about this, the ending came out of nowhere.
I feel like you didn't explore the diference between each girl, you develop you relatioship with everyone, and when the relationship got to the point where there couldn't been more development besides marriage the ending happed, but i feel like we didn't explore those diferences besides the interview with each girl, and this is what i want to explore in my ending.
i FEEL that we left to much to explore because of the place, in the yatch you had a lot more espace and places to try things, just the fact that each girl has a bedroom and the pool, the terrace, and for a last update he could have add a "casino" to the yatch.
i say i FEEL this, because i'm not an expert so i don't KNOW this, i'm just someone who reads a lot and plays way to many games like this one.
But i don't say that the ending is bad, the only thing that i don't really like about the ending, is that Rachel is not an option.
I don't mean to say is a sloppy ending or a bad one, because it's not, it's just that because the second island event, it feels like there is cut content, and a lot of potential wasted. Not because is bad, because is has room for improvement, like almost every game here, because is not a story that was written and rewritten and rewritten until it was perfect from start to finish.
*The renders, Story and participation of TheGary in this proyect:
As i say, this is not something that i can make right now, because of the renders, i don't have right now the equipment to make renders like this but i'll probably will me able to in a few months. That's why for a version 0.1 i'll just use renders from this episodes(1-5) to represent what is happening, and when i'm able to make this renders myself, i will change that.
The story i feel confident, because as i say, this is not a story that was written and rewritten and rewritten until it was perfect from start to finish, but THIS last alternative update and last episode will be, writen and rewritten and rewritten, i have played this games from episode 1 to episode 4, two times, episode 5 just once, and i will play them again to understant his story style and the caracters, so i feel like i can write this with a story and dialog that are consistent with the former chapters.
Besides, i don't have to take into consideration all the patreons wishes or opinions, just TheGary's.
And about TheGary's participation on this, i just want an opinion and approval, just a review to know if this fan made ending is good enough to be considered an alternative ending, and not just a fanfiction version of the ending, and this proyect will continue until it becomes good enough.
I don't want TheGary to focus or to keep working on CMA, the game is finished, and i'm really exited about his new game, but this game meas to much for me, way to much and i can't just let it go.
I just want someone to get this message to TheGary, to let him know that someone loves his work enough to make fanart from it, and yes, eventually i'll be able to get this message to him myself, but that will take a few months, and i don't want CMA to be "forgoten", i mean, i will work on this, but having TheGary's opinion will let me know that i'm in the righ path.
Right now, i just have the events of episode 4, and the paths of episode 5. Haven't write many dialog yet because i don't have a lot of time right now. But this "draft one for last update of episode 4" that want a review or opinion, not the whole game until is finished, just the story draft.
I hope this explain what i feel, and if you have any more points or questions, i will gladly answer.