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Matt -- Lord of wrong deadliness and info dumps
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Feb 27, 2020
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why the hell you have sex scenes and at the best part u black the screen like a 80's softporno damn it just show the action when we creampie them you show the them after the fun with cum on the body why not during the fun
I grew up watching 80's porn movies on open television, maybe that's why. Truth is, I had a crappy rig and I avoided doing aftermath on all scenes probably. At some point I'll fix them all.


scripting the story is nice but the firsttime spectre called me played out as text only when i was with ava on a event with the buttplug had to reload befor i tryed the event with ava

ava maid just start the fun blowjob when u go for facefuck the cum button dont work i had to rollback to cum normal
This here is very weird, gonna double check that. Maybe the save was corrupted or I did something very wrong.

maybe make the day more daytimes morning/noon/afternoon/evening/night so we have more time to explore the girls especial when we have more girls its extrem grindy to get the goals since nothing shows what u get in each action
I'll add one more time on 0.3 but this also implicates in like 600CG at least to be as I want it. I'll take this slowly. The whole idea is to have a day with 6 time periods.


when u make more stuff for building maybe make a sexdungeon so we can train submission/corruption
I don't think I'll have the time to produce this on 0.3, probably 0.4. I want to keep the update under 3-4 months at the very least. Last time it took 5 months and this is far too much.
 

Ka1tzer

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Hey! So first off, I'm amazed at the sheer amount of content in the game. Even though there are quite a few kinks that are absolute NOPE for me, the game did an excellent job at making them all optional. And unlike most games, I didn't feel like I was missing out on anything, so mad props for that.

The story also seem very interesting... albeit quite confusing atm. The grammar isn't the best, but far from the worst and not enough to take me out of the game. I'd advise replacing every single instance in which "you was" appears with "you were", and they are many.

The one issue I have is with the Himeko abuse scene. That was a massive red flag for me and almost made me drop the game.

Not necessarily because of the content per sé (though it definitely is one of my absolute nope content type), but because the circumstances were infuriating and felt forced AF.

It's briefly mentioned in passing during the date scene with Himeko, and that by itself already stank. But seeing the scene itself, it was all around awful. To begin with, we see the scene through the MC's eyes. That means that at any point before that whole shit happens, he could've throwed a tantrum and stopped it. Simply making himself known in that situation would've stopped it. Instead he chose to watch. WTF. I don't see any viable or plausible justification for that.

Then the act itself is a magic futa (I dislike futa, but the issue is that in all other cases it isn't something that you just snap your fingers and dick grows - whenever that's present, it kinda needs some preparation from the girl, some kind of process she goes through to get the thing, but not with Catherine). And that spiked armor being used in her dick?! What the fuck?!

MC was watching all that, which is unjustifiable in the first place, but didn't even think to use the time in which Catherine was distracted while fucking his girl to chop off her head? Or at least attempt it? When she'd be literally caught with her pants down?

Then after the scene, the futa magically disappears so she could be "properly raped". And once that's done and MC is about to kill her, Himeko appears out of nowhere and stops it because the MC killing her would serve the Omega's purpose. Fine, but what about Himeko killing her then?

That entire sequence felt entirely unnecessary, as there were a plethora of ways for Himeko to be punished that might've even be far more brutal or gruesome than that ass rape. It felt forced because given the circumstances presented, seemed like the MC could have prevented the event altogether, or at the very least interrupted it, yet chose to do nothing except watch it happen and be mad about it later. They also left Catherine alive and pretty much unharmed, all things considered.

Was loving the game until that shitshow came along. Don't mean to be rude to the dev, really, but that was infuriating.

Other than that, the game is very good and quite interesting. I particularly liked Luna, and I can't really tell you why. She's a total wacko, but I liked her a lot.

Looking forward to more updates to the game, but if I'm being honest, my interest in the story took a nosedive after that scene, especially considering that there had been hints about Luna's past after she went MIA.

PS: Why is it that Spectre always has mud on her face? For someone that is such an elitist rich bitch, her face is always dirty, what gives?
 

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Matt -- Lord of wrong deadliness and info dumps
Game Developer
Feb 27, 2020
478
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Hey! So first off, I'm amazed at the sheer amount of content in the game. Even though there are quite a few kinks that are absolute NOPE for me, the game did an excellent job at making them all optional. And unlike most games, I didn't feel like I was missing out on anything, so mad props for that.

The story also seem very interesting... albeit quite confusing atm. The grammar isn't the best, but far from the worst and not enough to take me out of the game. I'd advise replacing every single instance in which "you was" appears with "you were", and they are many.

The one issue I have is with the Himeko abuse scene. That was a massive red flag for me and almost made me drop the game.

Not necessarily because of the content per sé (though it definitely is one of my absolute nope content type), but because the circumstances were infuriating and felt forced AF.

It's briefly mentioned in passing during the date scene with Himeko, and that by itself already stank. But seeing the scene itself, it was all around awful. To begin with, we see the scene through the MC's eyes. That means that at any point before that whole shit happens, he could've throwed a tantrum and stopped it. Simply making himself known in that situation would've stopped it. Instead he chose to watch. WTF. I don't see any viable or plausible justification for that.

Then the act itself is a magic futa (I dislike futa, but the issue is that in all other cases it isn't something that you just snap your fingers and dick grows - whenever that's present, it kinda needs some preparation from the girl, some kind of process she goes through to get the thing, but not with Catherine). And that spiked armor being used in her dick?! What the fuck?!

MC was watching all that, which is unjustifiable in the first place, but didn't even think to use the time in which Catherine was distracted while fucking his girl to chop off her head? Or at least attempt it? When she'd be literally caught with her pants down?

Then after the scene, the futa magically disappears so she could be "properly raped". And once that's done and MC is about to kill her, Himeko appears out of nowhere and stops it because the MC killing her would serve the Omega's purpose. Fine, but what about Himeko killing her then?

That entire sequence felt entirely unnecessary, as there were a plethora of ways for Himeko to be punished that might've even be far more brutal or gruesome than that ass rape. It felt forced because given the circumstances presented, seemed like the MC could have prevented the event altogether, or at the very least interrupted it, yet chose to do nothing except watch it happen and be mad about it later. They also left Catherine alive and pretty much unharmed, all things considered.

Was loving the game until that shitshow came along. Don't mean to be rude to the dev, really, but that was infuriating.

Other than that, the game is very good and quite interesting. I particularly liked Luna, and I can't really tell you why. She's a total wacko, but I liked her a lot.

Looking forward to more updates to the game, but if I'm being honest, my interest in the story took a nosedive after that scene, especially considering that there had been hints about Luna's past after she went MIA.

PS: Why is it that Spectre always has mud on her face? For someone that is such an elitist rich bitch, her face is always dirty, what gives?
It's not mud it's a tattoo.

The setting is harsh, but MC lives in a protected bubble nowadays. shitty things happened and Mc couldn't do a thing to help her. I didn't showed on purpose but no matter what he do he can't save her. Himeko can't kill that woman, she lacks the strenght to do so. More about mental strenght and not being able to turn against the woman that raised her. When producing this scene I had something in mind, for me it makes sense and its need to be something disturbing. Mc had a reason why he couldnt act right away, it's no because he just wanted to observe. The flashbacks are all out of order, they will make sense later on.

At first I didn't felt that this scene would be something people would drop the game altogether, wasn't my goal to fuck up with anyone but I imagine that, in order to punish MC for escaping their clutches they would do terrible things to hurt him both phsiciacally and mentally. When first talking about this whole omega thing MC points out how much he hates them and how absurd they would be like the scene he says he hid under corpses for some days while some crazed followers where going all necrophilicac and cannibalistic.

I mean the scene is avoidable, yes. The fact in the story no. I could have gone another way sure, but I stand for this decision, MC past life was pure suffering, when it comes to rape scenes this is the only one that happened, I could go on about this but I think it's better not since it would be a bunch of spoilers. Now all bad things will happen to MC and people he knew that ended up dying because of him. The only people that survived that were close to him are on the photo he carries with him.

Luna in the other hand would always kill someone trying to abuse her., I mean she tries to kill MC first thing when she sees him. That type of thing never happened in her story. However, she is not to be trusted. Or is she? It will depend on how people treat her before some milestone.

But I guess this is up to players, if this was harsh enough to make people want to drop the game I totally understand.
 

acgamer69

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Do you have a roadmap for what scenes/kinks are comming in 0.3? Or maybe some previews? Looking forward to it, especially the beast, watersports, futa and maybe even more extreme stuff :devilish:
 

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Matt -- Lord of wrong deadliness and info dumps
Game Developer
Feb 27, 2020
478
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Do you have a roadmap for what scenes/kinks are comming in 0.3? Or maybe some previews? Looking forward to it, especially the beast, watersports, futa and maybe even more extreme stuff :devilish:
Later on I'll share some previews (probably tomorrow) gonna select some to show, I said I'd do it and I totally forgot, tks for reminding me.

As for a roadmap, I think I'll not share this exactly how it will be otherwise it may pump up people towards an idea, and if something happens and I end up not adding said content it would be very frustrating for me and for everyone else.

But some stuff about this version, I'm already closing in the 1000CG mark, I made more than 90 animations already, and I wrote 30% of it all I believe.

I developed all the kinky stuff and some vanilla as well.

Some new doll will be showing up but as an introduction for now.
I'll be implementing Ava's Bimbo body type
I reworked on Mimi's Bimbo body type
Tons of dickgirl action - not futa but dickgirl (with balls)
I'm reworking on how people can block tags.
I'm reworking several aspects on the gallery and MC's computer.
Lactation, watersports, pegging, dickgirl's topping MC and some other was added as long with beastility.
Some scat scenes, but always this type of thing is highly optional and easily avoidable

Someone from MC's direct family will have a flashback. Guess it will be a good update.

I'll probably need until January to finish it, I'll need to take a medical leave for almost 2 weeks, nothing serious but it needs to be done asap.

This version is focusing 90% on sexual scenes and 10% on story.
 

klckr

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Feb 3, 2020
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On the note of AI and stuff. Is it possible to get ChatGPT to proofread a project like this? Otherwise maybe get someone to proofread, maybe you can even get some chump fan do help you for free as you already have an amazing amount of support for a project that has just started.
I really think grammar and flow can use some work, especially the beginning is probably off-putting for new player, personally I was already thinking of quitting in the first few minutes.
Worldbuilding is kinda important and you are bungling it up a bit by using the wrong terms and contradictions every other sentence.
You are making a game in a well established science fiction setting which attracts science fiction fans, who probably all had a lot of science fiction by now. What you are doing is the Lord of the Rings equivalent of confusing elves with dwarves and saying dragons are those talking tree motherfuckers.
If you don't want to put in the effort maybe word change the mistaken words for something of your own making so there is no more confusion.
 
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Matt -- Lord of wrong deadliness and info dumps
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On the note of AI and stuff. Is it possible to get ChatGPT to proofread a project like this? Otherwise maybe get someone to proofread, maybe you can even get some chump fan do help you for free as you already have an amazing amount of support for a project that has just started.
I really think grammar and flow can use some work, especially the beginning is probably off-putting for new player, personally I was already thinking of quitting in the first few minutes.
Worldbuilding is kinda important and you are bungling it up a bit by using the wrong terms and contradictions every other sentence.
You are making a game in a well established science fiction setting which attracts science fiction fans, who probably all had a lot of science fiction by now. What you are doing is the Lord of the Rings equivalent of confusing elves with dwarves and saying dragons are those talking tree motherfuckers.
If you don't want to put in the effort maybe word change the mistaken words for something of your own making so there is no more confusion.
Why dont you do it? Wanna review a 500k word game for free? Get some chump fan... man... honestly?
 

klckr

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Why dont you do it? Wanna review a 500k word game for free? Get some chump fan... man... honestly?
Well I am mostly talking about the beginning, I don't know if you reread it but I see from your post here and comments further on that your language skills are much better than this. Would be a waste to dissuade people with just an intro.
And the chump part is of course a joke, that's why it is strike-throughed. You'll be amazed at what people want to contribute to projects they love.
 
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Matt -- Lord of wrong deadliness and info dumps
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Well I am mostly talking about the beginning, I don't know if you reread it but I see from your post here and comments further on that your language skills are much better than this. Would be a waste to dissuade people with just an intro.
And the chump part is of course a joke, that's why it is strike-throughed. You'll be amazed at what people want to contribute to projects they love.
Some people did wanted to review and proofread, the game needs a ton of polishing before being something average. For 0.3 I'll be able to review most of the game, at least 2/3 since now all the files are split in separated folders. At first I had all the game in one huge ass file that made it very hard to review. Now I can organize myself better between, rendering, writing, programming and all that. For the main characters and main events as the very first day everything will be reviewed and inconsistencies cleared, there are like 5 or 6 people that will test the game properly and this is something they will provide some detailed feedback on, so let's see if I can improve this part. It's most definitely the weakest link.

But people that say they want to help only with the proofreading- I really think they do, but they back down when they see the word count. And this is such an important task, I don't like the idea of giving nothing back.
 
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acgamer69

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Lactation, watersports, pegging, dickgirl's topping MC and some other was added as long with beastility.
Some scat scenes, but always this type of thing is highly optional and easily avoidable
Well that just sounds lovely. I wonder if there's gonna be beast + scat as well, with the rimming and piss drinking that has been going on so far.
 
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Well that just sounds lovely. I wonder if there's gonna be beast + scat as well, with the rimming and piss drinking that has been going on so far.
I didn't started this yet >yet< up until now I did just 2 scenes with beastality for 0.3, its missing at least 5 new ones. The goal was producing 10 scenes, at least 2 for each doll
 
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Matt -- Lord of wrong deadliness and info dumps
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Feb 27, 2020
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Alright so I'm sharing a small preview; focus on the "small" part alright?

On the patron server I showed more than 1000 files total and yet they didn't see it all (some patron can confirm that as well)

See this as proof of content or something idk how it's called. If inside these folders you don't find any tag you like well, you'll need to wait to the actual game or when I share teh complete CG set. I think there are 200-250 files total on this pack, but the actual number in game will be at least 5-7 times bigger. I'm also not showing the whole scenes on purpose mind you.

I split all the files into folders with each tag, if anything ended up wrong and you see a tag you don't like, so sorry. Just putting this all together real quick. The actual number in each folder inside game is more than at least 100 CG for each Doll. Humans have a much small number, the idea of this 0.3 is to expand greatly on the daily activities as adding a new time to the game and expand more on body types.



The size of the file is <200MB and the size of my files for 0.3 is more than 1GB so guess it's going on a good direction.

Anyhow, as soon as I have a precise date of release I'll say so! The game is still very rough overall, but little by little I'll polish it until it's something truly enjoyable
 

Neuff

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Jul 23, 2017
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So I have a save I transferred from pc to mobile, and it tells me that its 'edited on another device...', I confirm that I want to load it and it just does nothing and stays on the Load page (whether on main menu or ingame).
Im running the game on JoiPlay, is this a game specific issue or caused by JoiPlay?

I tried finding the line in code that triggers this and simply skip the check, but I dont know my way around Renpy Games too well so no luck with that.
 
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Matt -- Lord of wrong deadliness and info dumps
Game Developer
Feb 27, 2020
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So I have a save I transferred from pc to mobile, and it tells me that its 'edited on another device...', I confirm that I want to load it and it just does nothing and stays on the Load page (whether on main menu or ingame).
Im running the game on JoiPlay, is this a game specific issue or caused by JoiPlay?

I tried finding the line in code that triggers this and simply skip the check, but I dont know my way around Renpy Games too well so no luck with that.
Look I honestly don't know, probably pc save and joyplay save are different things? I think this a renpy issue
 
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Matt -- Lord of wrong deadliness and info dumps
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yo whens the next update coming out i cant wait
Probably next month, it's missing mostly a hard review on grammar and many small errors, I'm about to reach 1050 cg and 100> animations. This version is more to expand on sexual and daily activities than adding story or major events. The idea is to add 'meat' to the game's skeleton.

It would be sooner but I'll need to take a forced leave for an eye surgery(next week) that will put me away from the screen for at least 10 to 15 days.
 

exloladdict

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Probably next month, it's missing mostly a hard review on grammar and many small errors, I'm about to reach 1050 cg and 100> animations. This version is more to expand on sexual and daily activities than adding story or major events. The idea is to add 'meat' to the game's skeleton.

It would be sooner but I'll need to take a forced leave for an eye surgery(next week) that will put me away from the screen for at least 10 to 15 days.
Best of luck with the surgery!
 

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Probably next month, it's missing mostly a hard review on grammar and many small errors, I'm about to reach 1050 cg and 100> animations. This version is more to expand on sexual and daily activities than adding story or major events. The idea is to add 'meat' to the game's skeleton.

It would be sooner but I'll need to take a forced leave for an eye surgery(next week) that will put me away from the screen for at least 10 to 15 days.
oh nah fosho take your time your healths more important
 
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