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Amahl Farouk

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Damn, this is so well rendered but so weird a story, it is I am afraid too weird a story for me to get into

Real shame, dev knows how to render but that story just doesnt make any sense at all
 

Darksyde6661

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I find huge massive horse cocks to be boring myself as .9999999999999 of these MC's in these games have the same old same old. So I only play female protagonist's that can avoid them and have hot steamy sexy sex with different females.
I don't know i could do with a good horse size cock every so often.
I't would be good bit of stretching might be just what i need now and then.
 

SGrimmer

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Played through up to the end of content, this owns. Great premise, I was initially put off by the dialogue until it became clear that it's mainly the elitist douchebags talking like elitist douchebags and I'm very excited to see them all corrupted.

Gonna keep a very close eye on this one.
 

yihman1

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Damn, this is so well rendered but so weird a story, it is I am afraid too weird a story for me to get into

Real shame, dev knows how to render but that story just doesnt make any sense at all
I understand how some people can take this sentiment about the story. I don't understand the Chinese language at all, and that language doesn't make sense to me it even sounds kinda weird when I hear it. However, there are over a billion people out there that would highly disagree, and think it makes perfect sense. Just because I do not understand something does not mean that it does not make sense.

Trust me, this story or any adult game would have been much easier to write something like this as many adult game stories go:

There is an awkward boy. His dad died, but it's his 18th birthday and he is happy in spite of dad being dead. He wakes up, and got a morning wood. Then he goes down stairs and his mom is cooking breakfast, and her ass looks real nice in that apron. Then the mom says, "Go wake your sisters up honey." So first to the big sister, but she is taking a shower and the bathroom door is cracked open, so the lad spies on her a moment and she gets mad because of his spying and his morning wood, but it's okay she is only mad for now and will later be very loving. Off to the little sister that is his twin that is 2 minutes younger and she is very loving from the moment the boy sees her she really got that twin bond going and is is so cute and cuddly and you could just eat her up. The family finally has breakfast and it turns out having the breadwinner of the family dead is bad for the houses economic situation. So now the lad must become the man of the house and earn a living as a plumber. It's alright because there will be a fine lady plumber boss who is magnetically attracted to the boy and his eccentricities from the start. And this lady boss will definitely help the lad lay that pipe. Eventually our young plumber friend lays the pipe for his whole family satisfying thier plumbing needs to his hearts content, even laying pipe for the neighbors and the sister's friends and everyone lives happily ever after moving to a hippie commie nudist colony in the end, but no other men are allowed just our plumber friend everything working out for everyone in the end without a hint of jealousy between the boy and his 7 wives. It would be the 463rd game like that.

It is better to be off beat, unconventional, unique, different, or eccentric than to be a clone of a clone of a clone of a clone. Only shooting stars break the mold. Back to my original point about the Chinese language. I assure you that it is not written in Chinese it is written in English. Are there any points in the story to you in particular that were difficult for you to comprehend? If there are by all means ask away and perhaps I can provide a little bit of clarity, or some of the other folks who understand what is going on can shed a little bit of light on it with their interpenetration of the writing. Feel free to ask away.

It is unfortunate if you scoff at others thinking they should be ashamed for being imaginative and creative.

The story or game is probably not be for everyone as some people don't like trying new things, and take great comfort in familiarity, and we are making something new and fresh here.
 
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yihman1

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OK cool. Thank you for your responses to my questions, it is appreciated.
I just have another. If I choose to avoid certain sex scenes I do not want to engage in, is it more of a "skip" button, as in they still happen and I just don't see them. Or is it more of an avoid completely if I so choose?
Because I can see just skipping scenes being a problem as they will still have happened and I assume characters would act like they happened thus negating having "skipped" rather than avoiding completely.
It won't be written in a way so that later dialogue will imply a sex scene happened if a sex scene was avoided. If rose has sex with the 1st penis she can have sex with there will be blood. If she moves on to dick 2 there will not be blood in that scenario. However, if she skipped dick 1 and moves on to dick 2 that one would be the virgin blood scene. She will only have 1 blood scene per play through. So, previous sexual history will effect current and future sexual history.

The sex scene that happened in this version was with Natasha and in a dream. Seeing as Natasha has a history of fucking the whole football team it will not show any difference to the player if they skip past that scene or play through every variable. She is already set to slut.
 

yihman1

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NGL, I'm really hoping for a Natasha x Rose run to be a possibility. I just find the idea of both of Mark's exes getting together both kinda funny and interesting.

On the topic of the current update, there wasn't really anything of interest to me. I don't care much about Karen and the Natasha scene was not something I was interested in watching after I realized it was a hetero scene. It was a good content update I guess, it's just not content I'm even remotely interested in. Can't really give feedback on the sex scene since I rolled back once I realized what it was. The next few updates are probably going to be more up my alley so I'll wait for that.
Good job nonetheless, I can at least say that the renders are as amazing as ever so I can end this on a positive note.
Depending on Rose's first choice with Natasha she will either come across as extremely friendly or as extremely hostile. The friendly path their will build up more slowly potentially to something great, but the hostile path their is going to escalate much quicker. Rose being so cruel to Natasha may make other people hostile towards Rose as well.
 

yihman1

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Played through up to the end of content, this owns. Great premise, I was initially put off by the dialogue until it became clear that it's mainly the elitist douchebags talking like elitist douchebags and I'm very excited to see them all corrupted.

Gonna keep a very close eye on this one.
That is one take I'm looking for people to have on it. There will be other interpretations as well. I'm trying to make characters that are not so much black and white morally. More complex than that. From some points of view she may come off as evil. From other points of view she may come off as a saint.

The little critter that smiled at Rose at the end of her appearance in this update surely sees more good in Rose than say Natasha would on day 1 were Rose to have chosen to be cruel to her. Yet at the same time it could be argued that Natasha has it coming for how cruel she was to Mark in the past. Similarly the consequences of freeing that animal could be seen as worse than the good of having liberated it.
 
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DDDIsReal

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I was thinking a lot of female protagonist games are "Slow Burners" and have a "Blue Balls" update so very often such as AWAM, a long summer, JOHN. I feel bad for the lesbian lovers on this update as the straight sex lovers got something they can enjoy. Then I'm thinking what's the female equivalent of blue balls? Blue Bean?
You must feel bad! I loved start of the game and the new update was without lesbian action? Why you did this to me? How dare you! (Jk but c’mon give us some candy. I’m tired of female protagonists with straight contents)
 

myuhinny

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Next update is suppose to have lesbian content. They made a post a few pages back about what content is in this update and what is coming in the next updates.
 
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Amahl Farouk

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I understand how some people can take this sentiment about the story. I don't understand the Chinese language at all, and that language doesn't make sense to me it even sounds kinda weird when I hear it. However, there are over a billion people out there that would highly disagree, and think it makes perfect sense. Just because I do not understand something does not mean that it does not make sense.

Trust me, this story or any adult game would have been much easier to write something like this as many adult game stories go:

There is an awkward boy. His dad died, but it's his 18th birthday and he is happy in spite of dad being dead. He wakes up, and got a morning wood. Then he goes down stairs and his mom is cooking breakfast, and her ass looks real nice in that apron. Then the mom says, "Go wake your sisters up honey." So first to the big sister, but she is taking a shower and the bathroom door is cracked open, so the lad spies on her a moment and she gets mad because of his spying and his morning wood, but it's okay she is only mad for now and will later be very loving. Off to the little sister that is his twin that is 2 minutes younger and she is very loving from the moment the boy sees her she really got that twin bond going and is is so cute and cuddly and you could just eat her up. The family finally has breakfast and it turns out having the breadwinner of the family dead is bad for the houses economic situation. So now the lad must become the man of the house and earn a living as a plumber. It's alright because there will be a fine lady plumber boss who is magnetically attracted to the boy and his eccentricities from the start. And this lady boss will definitely help the lad lay that pipe. Eventually our young plumber friend lays the pipe for his whole family satisfying thier plumbing needs to his hearts content, even laying pipe for the neighbors and the sister's friends and everyone lives happily ever after moving to a hippie commie nudist colony in the end, but no other men are allowed just our plumber friend everything working out for everyone in the end without a hint of jealousy between the boy and his 7 wives. It would be the 463rd game like that.

It is better to be off beat, unconventional, unique, different, or eccentric than to be a clone of a clone of a clone of a clone. Only shooting stars break the mold. Back to my original point about the Chinese language. I assure you that it is not written in Chinese it is written in English. Are there any points in the story to you in particular that were difficult for you to comprehend? If there are by all means ask away and perhaps I can provide a little bit of clarity, or some of the other folks who understand what is going on can shed a little bit of light on it with their interpenetration of the writing. Feel free to ask away.

It is unfortunate if you scoff at others thinking they should be ashamed for being imaginative and creative.

The story or game is probably not be for everyone as some people don't like trying new things, and take great comfort in familiarity, and we are making something new and fresh here.

I read your text very carefully, and it is my considered opinion after reading it that you are an arrogant prick. If you can't take polite criticism stay out of public forums, your sarcasm and patronising tone may impress you, but it leaves me as your game does, underwhelmed.
 

SinAppeal

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I read your text very carefully, and it is my considered opinion after reading it that you are an arrogant prick. If you can't take polite criticism stay out of public forums, your sarcasm and patronising tone may impress you, but it leaves me as your game does, underwhelmed.
Thanks Amahl Farouk for your open words.
We def will work on the story.
I am glad that you like the renders ;)
 
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yihman1

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I read your text very carefully, and it is my considered opinion after reading it that you are an arrogant prick. If you can't take polite criticism stay out of public forums, your sarcasm and patronising tone may impress you, but it leaves me as your game does, underwhelmed.
Reading and fully understanding what you read are not always the same thing. Maybe I come off as an "arrogant prick" to some, I don't know you could be right. I'm not perfect. That's just how I am and I can't help but be how I am. I'm talking to you like I'd talk to a friend of mine treating you like a man. There is no need for name calling as it is not productive. I'm asking you politely to be more coherent and concise in your criticism of the writing. "Underwhelmed" and "Makes no sense" is far to vague for me to understand where you are having a problem.

A better way to put what you are trying to express would be as follows for example:

I felt that in the [scene description] the [character] was a bit [something I did not like]. Why would [character] act like [something I didn't like]? That does not make any sense to me! Why didn't they [something I like]?
 
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Overall, I liked the update. However, adding another character ranting about things got kinda annoying. Then he just gets killed off, seemed kinda pointless to even have him besides just harping on pet issues most people probably couldn't care less about in a porn game.
 
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Amahl Farouk

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Reading and fully understanding what you read are not always the same thing. Maybe I come off as an "arrogant prick" to some, I don't know you could be right. I'm not perfect. That's just how I am and I can't help but be how I am. I'm talking to you like I'd talk to a friend of mine treating you like a man. There is no need for name calling as it is not productive. I'm asking you politely to be more coherent and concise in your criticism of the writing. "Underwhelmed" and "Makes no sense" is far to vague for me to understand where you are having a problem.

A better way to put what you are trying to express would be as follows for example:

I felt that in the [scene description] the [character] was a bit [something I did not like]. Why would [character] act like [something I didn't like]? That does not make any sense to me! Why didn't they [something I like]?
Re-read your previous response to me slowly and carefully and you will, hopefully, understand why I called you sarcastic and patronising. I have a master's degree in English, and I am a university lecturer so allow me to assure you that I have no problems whatsoever understanding the text of a porn game. I have no further interest in interacting with you or in your game. Kindly read, and reflect on your previous post and resist the urge to engage me in conversation again. Had you put in as much effort to the plot of your game as you do trying to justify yourself I doubt this interaction would have been necessary in the first instance.
 

yihman1

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Overall, I liked the update. However, adding another character ranting about things got kinda annoying. Then he just gets killed off, seemed kinda pointless to even have him besides just harping on pet issues most people probably couldn't care less about in a porn game.
He isn't dead yet. There will be a vote on Patreon to determine if he survives in a coma possibly even getting better down the road much later, or if he dies there on the floor at the end of that scene his fate is up in the air right now. Either would serve the stories purpose.

The scene may seem pointless now but it will make much more sense later on.

What was he harping on about? Highly educated people are actually idiots, how crappy the school system is and how he did not like the Academy Saphire once attended which just so happens to be the only Academy in the game. Rose knows Saphire. Saphire is a former student.

The last words her father spoke to her were of the evil's of Rose's world and way of life. Rose is one of those highly educated people he was talking about a dean actually one that pushes what he was talking of so negatively.

Furthermore Saphire works at an animal research lab. Something Rose strongly opposes.

In the blue corner you got Saphire who was raised in a native tribe and is the only daughter in a big family. A princess who is a hunter. She keeps her roots but expands out exploring into the world where she went to Rose's academy. Later on she goes to work in a research lab testing with animals for the betterment of mankind working hard to cure diseases with her testing. With the unfortunate events that happened to her father she will be out for revenge.

In the red corner you got rose who is an orphan with no biological family. She was fortunate to have found an adoptive home that brought her to the upper crust of society to have a life of luxury. Rose has a big heart when it comes to animals and highly values education and the education system as it is her world. One night she even freed a little critter that was confined in the prison of an animal testing lab where it had a poor quality of life.

Rose and Saphire are opposites in a lot of ways. There will be a vendetta. Neither will believe they are evil. Both will come to feel the other is evil. Rose has made herself a nemesis this night.
 
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