so i played the latest update from beginning. first of all i like the text at the end of the update. tells me you really care and think about what you're doing and try to improve. very kind words there.
about the update itself: for me personally she sometimes has still these massive cowjuggs and sometimes like in the shower scene, they look smaller but still big - what is nice, just not too exaggerated like her hips (which feel a tad too massive too imo)
her hair well i love long and straight hair, but i think they always look like she came right out of the shower ^^ visuals are not always important but since is the mc they should be key imo.
i like the new outfit for her and did you add raindrops? also that her dad has looks now too (how he talks to her makes me kinda horny idk why lol)
schoolgirloutfit even it tries to be hot looks the worst of all outfits imo. (sorry)
i like the markers above npc's heads which makes it really good and easy to read cause the town itself feels kinda messy and hard to read. (but i saw you already search guys to help you there^^)
its interesting you chose the way of renders with rpgmaker in the background. thats why i would prefer a renpy even i don't mind rpg maker games. this plus the slow movement (in the store she runs faster surprisingly) makes me tend to pref renpy here.
a bit of a change on the map/town would definitely not hurt.
its nice you have choices. and when she bends over its hot. (her legs are hot imo)
you can really see a bit of improvement. dont get discouraged !
oh and the soundtrack is cool.
