alright.
i have forced myself to play this. let me explain my journey in to this..
'WALL OF TEXT'
..hope u make it to the end of this story. just stick to ur guns
You were trying too hard to connect all the dots. Using too much logic at a time where it is not needed.
You were not wrong with the points you've mentioned but implying the game did not "deserve" a 4+ star-rating is something you can think for yourself but should not say out loud. It's just like food; just because you don't like certain types of meals or w/e doesn't mean it's shit. It just doesn't tickle your fancy so never ever even start to argue about things like that.
In games like these it's important to relax, take the small bits as they are and laugh and/ or smile about it. Of course it ain't perfect, neither is your ability to write proper reviews though (no offense, just making a point here).
I personaly liked the "unpredictable" atmossphere even though I'm not a huge fan of "a demon tries to get the better of you"-situation. The fact that you hardly could tell what's gonna happen next is one of the best things this game has to offer compared to the tons of mediocre seen-it-all porn-games that pop all out of nowhere and never get finished.
The autor/ writer of DN has huge potential to make reeeeally good games. All he/ she needs is practice, good feedback and time. And support in form of money. I'd prolly offer mine but that'd be unfair considering that there are a dozens of other really good artists out there that don't get my money(I usually buy stuff from the Affect3D-store, sue me).
Anyways,
@psychodelusional great job with Ch.6 and the game in general. I wasn't expecting much but you delivered anyways. Please never fall astray from that path you're walking on right now. Stick with it, it's working.