I just read a number of posts on here regarding the story having run its course and NTR and other issues.
Just figured I'd through my 2 cents into the pot.
Has the story run its course. I'd say yes for the most part. The story was about could the father get with his daughter and form a relationship. The rest is primarily side acts to that story. About the only part of the story that might not actually be complete is does the mom have a future role to play.
Stories are generally able to be summed up in a single sentence. "Can F get with D?" or "What happens when F tries to get with D?" If you are going to cover a persons entire life or even a large part of it that falls more onto bibliography. Those are even broken into separate sections such as child hood, education, career... and so on.
So on the technical aspect this story is played out. The author should start a separate story or new chapter in regards to content covering off topic aspects.
That said most the hacks on authors on patreon writing aren't interested in developing really new stuff and coming up with new characters and so on. This results in them just seeing what degrading crap they can further subject a character to so that they can milk the patrons that will go along with it.
As for NTR and sharing. Sharing and NTR are different but I get that most people tend to see them as the same because most people can't understand people sharing. Why would you? Frankly, I'm of the same mind on that. The less dicks there are in the picture the better I like it. Honestly, the only one I want to pretend the girl is with is myself if I put myself into the characters spot.
Most the games are written so poorly I don't feel immersed in the least bit.
That said technically sharing isn't NTR even if most view it as the same. There is however an "sharing" tag and it should be used.
If I was in the authors shoes I'd have started another story. Something more on the line of can F protect D from bad shit.
Another option would be the down fall. That's going to be rather unpopular though. The characters haven't really done anything bad to anyone else for people to root for their demise. Even if you did create a compelling reason for people to hate them you are preying on the more base of instincts to sell the story. That isn't going to do anyways as well as father protecting daughter.
To be clear my personal opinion is the author should stretch his legs and move on to something new and fresh rather than keep trying to milk this.
nice words! Well spoken and i can agree 100%
Sidenote:
PERSONALLY i even skip MFF (YES, this is also sharing) - i am like "100% to ONE person rather than 50% to two". On our discord i even told that i would be 100% turned off even by the thought of having another dick near me rather than being able to enjoy it even a little bit.
The difference is, that i just do other decisions and AVOID such content. If not avoidable, i just fastskip through and act like nothing happened.
I don't need to rage just because another person did what HE likes and not exactly what i like. There are a lot of things i don't like in DMD (Elena, Georgina, Martin for example), same as there are things i rather would like to see (For example Rachel - YES, i am a fan of Rachel, as i know her story and i can understand why she acted like she did - also i see that she deeply regrets and wants to apologize) Most over here will disagree, i know, but that's ok.
There's just a BIG difference between personally dislike something and/or openly raging about that.