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Hello... -To people who comes from the top... it's gonna be a long post-

I am on this forum for more than one year, but it’s my first post.

I’m a bit shy. I’m french, not confident in speaking english (apologize for my english), and the forum has something that you want to keep it secret…

But I wanted to express myself about F95, porn and taboo games, and this place is maybe the best to do it.

Because, as many people think here, DMD is the best game in the style, and just for that, I have to thank Mr Dots, all his staff and around (Mr. Steel ((« dont l’avatar est chan-mé » as we say in french)) for sure). And I wanted to do a few remarks about.

Three things I want to say. In a way, it’s critical opinion, but my goal is not to complain. More to explain a point of view about the problematic of porn game, and taboo in particular.



First is about F95.

Except the inherents problems of every forum (stupid conflicts between people because writings don’t express the real way of thinking of the writers), this one is cool. People are respectful, in good mood, and the humour is not pervers. What is surprising, in fact, because of the subject. In many games, players has to corrupt people into fucking him, sucking his dick all the time, doing money, be strong and fuck, in the large sense, everybody. All what people criticized about GTA are just osties and mess wine near all what we have to do in all these games.

Actually, the cool atmosphere of F95 proves that it’s all in the game. Because of my job, I know people who cannot precisely make the difference between game and reality, and in F95, everyone would be afraid of them.

Fo all these, F95 is a good element for a general and philosophical theory of games.



Second is about the limits that we can see, and that we can feel.

At the opposite of what I said, the word « pervers » is bad considered here. And that’s surprising too. In my opinion, and many psychanalyst are in the same : we are all pervers, and that’s totally normal. I even think that people who absolutely block his perversions are more pervers than the others. And that we need to know about the perversion of a girl before having a real relationship with her. And that we have to accept the perversion of a friend or of a girl that, to say that he’s a friend, or that we love her, etc.

All these games make that we can live our perversions without causing any trouble to anybody. So why still having a taboo about this word, and what he represents ? These games are made to express perversity, the perveter they are, the best they are too. Actually, people here knows that and just takes care about not shoking the others, and I understand, but I wanted to defend this idea.

And perversity is an exigeant thing, as Sade said. That’s why everybody prefers realistics stories. That’s why in general the best story will be the most pervers and the most realistic.



Third is about DMD, for sure.

Here, I will speak like an emotional fan.

Oh fuck I love this game. The first time I played, I don’t remember which ‘day’, but it ended with the first naked night – when if you are in the ‘just-d’ way, she touches yer dick. It took a long time, and it worked like a good serial (with suspens, etc.) And, because of my intellectual status, I thought about it a lot. It was really well developped, and it expressed the subtil way of perversion. We could compare it to Lolita from Nabokov.

And compared to LOP, and these kind of games, it was an amateur one, and that was one of the elements which made my opinion. Really, bravo.

BUT, I had a little critic to do to it, and with the time, it grews up. And it’s about the question of perversion. I think that a few people said it on this thread (I used to read it precisely, but I’m french, it’s a bit difficult and it has been mayhem at one time, and now really less. Sorry for that).

At the beginning, F was more clearly pervers. THE fact who proves it (in front of a judge), it’s when he pretends that touching the boobs are a kind of ‘special message’ to help the back. In fact, that’s true, for girls who have big tits – but in general a good father advices a better bra. And after this, all his blabla to make her strip, to have a shower with her, it’s very subtil. Because it took a long time, and at each point there really is something more. Torture will never stop… At the opposite, that’s clear : I was like everybody, and, I was always saying : but when I gonna fuck this fckg bitch ?!? But that was good. Really.

But I was afraid, first, when she asks to go out with. Because, that could turn in a classical love story, with all the classical problems. Actually, there was something really awesome, the day after : you understand that she doesn’t know what it means. She had something about Kelly Bundy, t’was perfect.

But, in the chapter 2, all the pervers things has disapeared, or has just been transfered to the adultere question – we have to confess that he dirtily cheats and lies on her. I think that all the juridic thing was here to recall that she was a daughter, and not just a girlfriend, but it wasn’t enough. She makes the progression of the sexual affair. F is just passive and follows D. In a way, it looks like a normal love story, a LOPgame.

Maybe D could have been more transformed by his mother, and she could have been in the mood to want to go with F but not to continue the love story. Saying, ‘it was really cool, but it’s not normal, we cannot do that, you are my father’, etc. Here, F would have had to seduce her again, making her remember the good feeling of hugs, and special messages, and all these things. Because of the first steps in the first chapter, it could have been really quick (when you seduce an ex, you don’t pass by all the first steps you passed the first time, you just fuck her). And at each step, she could just say, the first days – « yesterday we made bad things, but today we have to be quiet… » And finally fuck her too. And still be a rabbit with the other girls.



But as we say : if you ‘re not happy, do better. And I wouldn’t do better…

And it’s the first game in this style which has been seriously developped, so congratulations and keep on
 

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Or just have Elena do the whole dog tail butt plug thing and be D's pet.
Good idea, but that is so not Elena's personality. She is aggressive and dominant. Lil red head be more in that direction....hell, even D's personality is more suited for it than Elena's.
 
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E-Dog

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Hello... -To people who comes from the top... it's gonna be a long post-

I am on this forum for more than one year, but it’s my first post.

I’m a bit shy. I’m french, not confident in speaking english (apologize for my english), and the forum has something that you want to keep it secret…

But I wanted to express myself about F95, porn and taboo games, and this place is maybe the best to do it.

Because, as many people think here, DMD is the best game in the style, and just for that, I have to thank Mr Dots, all his staff and around (Mr. Steel ((« dont l’avatar est chan-mé » as we say in french)) for sure). And I wanted to do a few remarks about.

Three things I want to say. In a way, it’s critical opinion, but my goal is not to complain. More to explain a point of view about the problematic of porn game, and taboo in particular.



First is about F95.

Except the inherents problems of every forum (stupid conflicts between people because writings don’t express the real way of thinking of the writers), this one is cool. People are respectful, in good mood, and the humour is not pervers. What is surprising, in fact, because of the subject. In many games, players has to corrupt people into fucking him, sucking his dick all the time, doing money, be strong and fuck, in the large sense, everybody. All what people criticized about GTA are just osties and mess wine near all what we have to do in all these games.

Actually, the cool atmosphere of F95 proves that it’s all in the game. Because of my job, I know people who cannot precisely make the difference between game and reality, and in F95, everyone would be afraid of them.

Fo all these, F95 is a good element for a general and philosophical theory of games.



Second is about the limits that we can see, and that we can feel.

At the opposite of what I said, the word « pervers » is bad considered here. And that’s surprising too. In my opinion, and many psychanalyst are in the same : we are all pervers, and that’s totally normal. I even think that people who absolutely block his perversions are more pervers than the others. And that we need to know about the perversion of a girl before having a real relationship with her. And that we have to accept the perversion of a friend or of a girl that, to say that he’s a friend, or that we love her, etc.

All these games make that we can live our perversions without causing any trouble to anybody. So why still having a taboo about this word, and what he represents ? These games are made to express perversity, the perveter they are, the best they are too. Actually, people here knows that and just takes care about not shoking the others, and I understand, but I wanted to defend this idea.

And perversity is an exigeant thing, as Sade said. That’s why everybody prefers realistics stories. That’s why in general the best story will be the most pervers and the most realistic.



Third is about DMD, for sure.

Here, I will speak like an emotional fan.

Oh fuck I love this game. The first time I played, I don’t remember which ‘day’, but it ended with the first naked night – when if you are in the ‘just-d’ way, she touches yer dick. It took a long time, and it worked like a good serial (with suspens, etc.) And, because of my intellectual status, I thought about it a lot. It was really well developped, and it expressed the subtil way of perversion. We could compare it to Lolita from Nabokov.

And compared to LOP, and these kind of games, it was an amateur one, and that was one of the elements which made my opinion. Really, bravo.

BUT, I had a little critic to do to it, and with the time, it grews up. And it’s about the question of perversion. I think that a few people said it on this thread (I used to read it precisely, but I’m french, it’s a bit difficult and it has been mayhem at one time, and now really less. Sorry for that).

At the beginning, F was more clearly pervers. THE fact who proves it (in front of a judge), it’s when he pretends that touching the boobs are a kind of ‘special message’ to help the back. In fact, that’s true, for girls who have big tits – but in general a good father advices a better bra. And after this, all his blabla to make her strip, to have a shower with her, it’s very subtil. Because it took a long time, and at each point there really is something more. Torture will never stop… At the opposite, that’s clear : I was like everybody, and, I was always saying : but when I gonna fuck this fckg bitch ?!? But that was good. Really.

But I was afraid, first, when she asks to go out with. Because, that could turn in a classical love story, with all the classical problems. Actually, there was something really awesome, the day after : you understand that she doesn’t know what it means. She had something about Kelly Bundy, t’was perfect.

But, in the chapter 2, all the pervers things has disapeared, or has just been transfered to the adultere question – we have to confess that he dirtily cheats and lies on her. I think that all the juridic thing was here to recall that she was a daughter, and not just a girlfriend, but it wasn’t enough. She makes the progression of the sexual affair. F is just passive and follows D. In a way, it looks like a normal love story, a LOPgame.

Maybe D could have been more transformed by his mother, and she could have been in the mood to want to go with F but not to continue the love story. Saying, ‘it was really cool, but it’s not normal, we cannot do that, you are my father’, etc. Here, F would have had to seduce her again, making her remember the good feeling of hugs, and special messages, and all these things. Because of the first steps in the first chapter, it could have been really quick (when you seduce an ex, you don’t pass by all the first steps you passed the first time, you just fuck her). And at each step, she could just say, the first days – « yesterday we made bad things, but today we have to be quiet… » And finally fuck her too. And still be a rabbit with the other girls.



But as we say : if you ‘re not happy, do better. And I wouldn’t do better…

And it’s the first game in this style which has been seriously developped, so congratulations and keep on
Great essay and thoughts. Just 1 thing....next time could u put it in a spoiler please? That way it doesnt take up half the page? Long responses should always go in spoilers.
Couldn't find the how to use spoiler thread unfortunately with this new search function since we changed formats. But did find this one:
 
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RustyV

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Hello... -To people who comes from the top... it's gonna be a long post-

I am on this forum for more than one year, but it’s my first post.

I’m a bit shy. I’m french, not confident in speaking english (apologize for my english), and the forum has something that you want to keep it secret…

But I wanted to express myself about F95, porn and taboo games, and this place is maybe the best to do it.

Because, as many people think here, DMD is the best game in the style, and just for that, I have to thank Mr Dots, all his staff and around (Mr. Steel ((« dont l’avatar est chan-mé » as we say in french)) for sure). And I wanted to do a few remarks about.

Three things I want to say. In a way, it’s critical opinion, but my goal is not to complain. More to explain a point of view about the problematic of porn game, and taboo in particular.



First is about F95.

Except the inherents problems of every forum (stupid conflicts between people because writings don’t express the real way of thinking of the writers), this one is cool. People are respectful, in good mood, and the humour is not pervers. What is surprising, in fact, because of the subject. In many games, players has to corrupt people into fucking him, sucking his dick all the time, doing money, be strong and fuck, in the large sense, everybody. All what people criticized about GTA are just osties and mess wine near all what we have to do in all these games.

Actually, the cool atmosphere of F95 proves that it’s all in the game. Because of my job, I know people who cannot precisely make the difference between game and reality, and in F95, everyone would be afraid of them.

Fo all these, F95 is a good element for a general and philosophical theory of games.



Second is about the limits that we can see, and that we can feel.

At the opposite of what I said, the word « pervers » is bad considered here. And that’s surprising too. In my opinion, and many psychanalyst are in the same : we are all pervers, and that’s totally normal. I even think that people who absolutely block his perversions are more pervers than the others. And that we need to know about the perversion of a girl before having a real relationship with her. And that we have to accept the perversion of a friend or of a girl that, to say that he’s a friend, or that we love her, etc.

All these games make that we can live our perversions without causing any trouble to anybody. So why still having a taboo about this word, and what he represents ? These games are made to express perversity, the perveter they are, the best they are too. Actually, people here knows that and just takes care about not shoking the others, and I understand, but I wanted to defend this idea.

And perversity is an exigeant thing, as Sade said. That’s why everybody prefers realistics stories. That’s why in general the best story will be the most pervers and the most realistic.



Third is about DMD, for sure.

Here, I will speak like an emotional fan.

Oh fuck I love this game. The first time I played, I don’t remember which ‘day’, but it ended with the first naked night – when if you are in the ‘just-d’ way, she touches yer dick. It took a long time, and it worked like a good serial (with suspens, etc.) And, because of my intellectual status, I thought about it a lot. It was really well developped, and it expressed the subtil way of perversion. We could compare it to Lolita from Nabokov.

And compared to LOP, and these kind of games, it was an amateur one, and that was one of the elements which made my opinion. Really, bravo.

BUT, I had a little critic to do to it, and with the time, it grews up. And it’s about the question of perversion. I think that a few people said it on this thread (I used to read it precisely, but I’m french, it’s a bit difficult and it has been mayhem at one time, and now really less. Sorry for that).

At the beginning, F was more clearly pervers. THE fact who proves it (in front of a judge), it’s when he pretends that touching the boobs are a kind of ‘special message’ to help the back. In fact, that’s true, for girls who have big tits – but in general a good father advices a better bra. And after this, all his blabla to make her strip, to have a shower with her, it’s very subtil. Because it took a long time, and at each point there really is something more. Torture will never stop… At the opposite, that’s clear : I was like everybody, and, I was always saying : but when I gonna fuck this fckg bitch ?!? But that was good. Really.

But I was afraid, first, when she asks to go out with. Because, that could turn in a classical love story, with all the classical problems. Actually, there was something really awesome, the day after : you understand that she doesn’t know what it means. She had something about Kelly Bundy, t’was perfect.

But, in the chapter 2, all the pervers things has disapeared, or has just been transfered to the adultere question – we have to confess that he dirtily cheats and lies on her. I think that all the juridic thing was here to recall that she was a daughter, and not just a girlfriend, but it wasn’t enough. She makes the progression of the sexual affair. F is just passive and follows D. In a way, it looks like a normal love story, a LOPgame.

Maybe D could have been more transformed by his mother, and she could have been in the mood to want to go with F but not to continue the love story. Saying, ‘it was really cool, but it’s not normal, we cannot do that, you are my father’, etc. Here, F would have had to seduce her again, making her remember the good feeling of hugs, and special messages, and all these things. Because of the first steps in the first chapter, it could have been really quick (when you seduce an ex, you don’t pass by all the first steps you passed the first time, you just fuck her). And at each step, she could just say, the first days – « yesterday we made bad things, but today we have to be quiet… » And finally fuck her too. And still be a rabbit with the other girls.



But as we say : if you ‘re not happy, do better. And I wouldn’t do better…

And it’s the first game in this style which has been seriously developped, so congratulations and keep on
Well I gotta say your English is pretty good.

Comparing DMD to Nabokov's Lolita was what all of the Patreon drama was about. lol
 

vette19690

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Hello... -To people who comes from the top... it's gonna be a long post-

I am on this forum for more than one year, but it’s my first post.

I’m a bit shy. I’m french, not confident in speaking english (apologize for my english), and the forum has something that you want to keep it secret…

But I wanted to express myself about F95, porn and taboo games, and this place is maybe the best to do it.

Because, as many people think here, DMD is the best game in the style, and just for that, I have to thank Mr Dots, all his staff and around (Mr. Steel ((« dont l’avatar est chan-mé » as we say in french)) for sure). And I wanted to do a few remarks about.

Three things I want to say. In a way, it’s critical opinion, but my goal is not to complain. More to explain a point of view about the problematic of porn game, and taboo in particular.



First is about F95.

Except the inherents problems of every forum (stupid conflicts between people because writings don’t express the real way of thinking of the writers), this one is cool. People are respectful, in good mood, and the humour is not pervers. What is surprising, in fact, because of the subject. In many games, players has to corrupt people into fucking him, sucking his dick all the time, doing money, be strong and fuck, in the large sense, everybody. All what people criticized about GTA are just osties and mess wine near all what we have to do in all these games.

Actually, the cool atmosphere of F95 proves that it’s all in the game. Because of my job, I know people who cannot precisely make the difference between game and reality, and in F95, everyone would be afraid of them.

Fo all these, F95 is a good element for a general and philosophical theory of games.



Second is about the limits that we can see, and that we can feel.

At the opposite of what I said, the word « pervers » is bad considered here. And that’s surprising too. In my opinion, and many psychanalyst are in the same : we are all pervers, and that’s totally normal. I even think that people who absolutely block his perversions are more pervers than the others. And that we need to know about the perversion of a girl before having a real relationship with her. And that we have to accept the perversion of a friend or of a girl that, to say that he’s a friend, or that we love her, etc.

All these games make that we can live our perversions without causing any trouble to anybody. So why still having a taboo about this word, and what he represents ? These games are made to express perversity, the perveter they are, the best they are too. Actually, people here knows that and just takes care about not shoking the others, and I understand, but I wanted to defend this idea.

And perversity is an exigeant thing, as Sade said. That’s why everybody prefers realistics stories. That’s why in general the best story will be the most pervers and the most realistic.



Third is about DMD, for sure.

Here, I will speak like an emotional fan.

Oh fuck I love this game. The first time I played, I don’t remember which ‘day’, but it ended with the first naked night – when if you are in the ‘just-d’ way, she touches yer dick. It took a long time, and it worked like a good serial (with suspens, etc.) And, because of my intellectual status, I thought about it a lot. It was really well developped, and it expressed the subtil way of perversion. We could compare it to Lolita from Nabokov.

And compared to LOP, and these kind of games, it was an amateur one, and that was one of the elements which made my opinion. Really, bravo.

BUT, I had a little critic to do to it, and with the time, it grews up. And it’s about the question of perversion. I think that a few people said it on this thread (I used to read it precisely, but I’m french, it’s a bit difficult and it has been mayhem at one time, and now really less. Sorry for that).

At the beginning, F was more clearly pervers. THE fact who proves it (in front of a judge), it’s when he pretends that touching the boobs are a kind of ‘special message’ to help the back. In fact, that’s true, for girls who have big tits – but in general a good father advices a better bra. And after this, all his blabla to make her strip, to have a shower with her, it’s very subtil. Because it took a long time, and at each point there really is something more. Torture will never stop… At the opposite, that’s clear : I was like everybody, and, I was always saying : but when I gonna fuck this fckg bitch ?!? But that was good. Really.

But I was afraid, first, when she asks to go out with. Because, that could turn in a classical love story, with all the classical problems. Actually, there was something really awesome, the day after : you understand that she doesn’t know what it means. She had something about Kelly Bundy, t’was perfect.

But, in the chapter 2, all the pervers things has disapeared, or has just been transfered to the adultere question – we have to confess that he dirtily cheats and lies on her. I think that all the juridic thing was here to recall that she was a daughter, and not just a girlfriend, but it wasn’t enough. She makes the progression of the sexual affair. F is just passive and follows D. In a way, it looks like a normal love story, a LOPgame.

Maybe D could have been more transformed by his mother, and she could have been in the mood to want to go with F but not to continue the love story. Saying, ‘it was really cool, but it’s not normal, we cannot do that, you are my father’, etc. Here, F would have had to seduce her again, making her remember the good feeling of hugs, and special messages, and all these things. Because of the first steps in the first chapter, it could have been really quick (when you seduce an ex, you don’t pass by all the first steps you passed the first time, you just fuck her). And at each step, she could just say, the first days – « yesterday we made bad things, but today we have to be quiet… » And finally fuck her too. And still be a rabbit with the other girls.



But as we say : if you ‘re not happy, do better. And I wouldn’t do better…

And it’s the first game in this style which has been seriously developped, so congratulations and keep on
WELL SAID!
 

rentintin

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jesus.. all the people bitching about a graphic novel, that they can get here FOR FREE!!
all this stupid whining about it not meeting their fantasies.
all the whining about time between updates. my god!
how entitled some people can feel..
 
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RustyV

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I gotta say now that the MC and D are finally in full on sexual relationship I would not be surprised if the next update was just the MC constantly nailing D. Cause seriously who wouldn't?
The update could be sex with D a side story of a non-main character, more sex with D another side story of a non-main character etc. lol
 

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I gotta say now that the MC and D are finally in full on sexual relationship I would not be surprised if the next update was just the MC constantly nailing D. Cause seriously who wouldn't?
The update could be sex with D a side story of a non-main character, more sex with D another side story of a non-main character etc. lol
I like your thinking!

Of course, now in an also sexual relationship who doesn't want to have sex with his/her partner 24/7?

Let's hope something deep down slumbering in D has now been awakened and she will become an insatiable sex monster, looking petite, sweet, inncocent but still sexually devouring Elena, Margo, all the other girls, jumps over into "Melody", to make it with Melody, Fi, Amy ...

*while listening to "who let the dogs out" ... searching for my pills*
 

Belnick

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As interesting as D+MC+Elena would have been it would have been out of character for D. Her character is not a 2 dimensional sex-bot, like a lot of games. D has been very hesitant to have a sexual relationship with the MC and having Elena present would have freaked her out too much. Or at least that is how D comes off in the past updates.
did you miss she is full lesbo with elena? :p she already have sexual relation with her so would make sense of asking her lover for help, knowing elena like her dad, but I guess they will add that in last chapter as everyone been done step by step, kiss, stroke, handjob, etc slowly working up to fucking, so if same pace i would guess a threesome would be in the end
 
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ReJoe

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Keeping in mind Mr Dots team worked thru Christmas to release DMD and Melody 2 weeks apart, I understand why the next releases won't be out for another month. Hopefully DMD fans are supporting Mr Dots thru Patroen (Melody) and Buy me a Coffee, etc.
The latest DMD was so hot my hand is sore! The story is gonna go where ever Mr Dots wants it to... I you don't like it play something else. Don't whine about it.
A month is a long time to wait but it's usually worth it.
 

wrx21

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I gotta say now that the MC and D are finally in full on sexual relationship I would not be surprised if the next update was just the MC constantly nailing D. Cause seriously who wouldn't?
The update could be sex with D a side story of a non-main character, more sex with D another side story of a non-main character etc. lol
i wouldn't mind at all to get this kind of an update,i actually hope for it
 

Badollarsonist

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Hello. I'm fairly new to F95, but I am interested in game development and wanted to share my opinion on DMD.

I understand that any suggestions I make are most likely not going to be considered. The Devs have their own vision for the game, and I accept that. My suggestions are from a perspective of what I would have done differently.

First, I would like to point out the things I liked about it.
* The devs did not push the story towards sex with D quickly. They gave the story time to develop a relationship between D and F. This is very rare for an erotic VN.
* The models and artwork are pretty good. Definitely better than a lot of 3D visual novels I've seen.
* I like that the characters have a fairly persistent personality. Elena always acts like Elena and D always acts like D.
* I think it's great that your decisions in Chapter 1 can carry over to Chapter 2. I know this isn't new tech, but it's rare to see a developer bother to implement it.
* Overall, I like the characters. They're not all the same and there's something to like about each of them.

Now the criticisms.
* While the relationship progressed more slowly and naturally than most erotic visual novels, I think it should have been a little slower given the context of the relationship. But I do understand this is an erotic VN and the sexy times must come.
* While the artwork is fairly good, the animations and poses are quite bad in some places. For me, it really took me out of the game whenever I noticed it. There were many places where hand position looked unnatural and almost all of the animations are of poor quality. If it were me, I would have finished the game using only still images and avoiding animations until I had a better grasp of it.
* I noticed that several of the characters have similar speech patterns and use the same slang. I think this should be addressed at some point because Elena has never been to Fs country and D has spent most of her life in Dohnutistan. It would be odd for her to use the same word choice and speech patterns as everyone else where F lives.
* The biggest critique I have is the proofreading. Considering this is a visual NOVEL, this is the most disappointing flaw I've noticed. Even in just writing this comment, I've read it over several times to make sure I didn't make any mistakes. I would be mortified if I asked for money from someone for a story I wrote that's full of typos, grammatical errors, and entire plot points left hanging (like the sick note from Adam and the Koko tickets).
* The entire second chapter felt very rushed. I understand they both want to go back to Fs country, but it's not like they had any real time limit. In fact, it would have been much wiser of them to wait the six months until D had graduated. Then there wouldn't be a need for blackmail (which of course is going to bite F in the ass later). F had already started working on getting a job that could have gotten him a worker's visa. They also wanted Elena to come back with them but you just... leave her behind. Seriously, what was the rush? F ends up back home with no job and almost no money left. Not a great decision. It seemed more like the devs themselves wanted to rush the story ahead. And it shows.
* I would have made the sexual route with D optional, or at the very least more under the control of the player. There were more than a few cases where I really didn't want to do anything to D, but I had to grope her anyway and there was no way around it.
* The only character I really didn't like was Jennifer. Not her personality, but her body and place in the story. Anyone looking at it without knowing anything about the story will absolutely assume that is a preteen child. It's like those lolicon animes that try to cover their asses by saying the characters are 18 when they clearly are not. Also, her being a love-interest came off as super odd considering your character barely interacts with her at all throughout the story and you never get to see any personality quirks or hobbies or interests she might have that would intrigue F. It came off as very forced.

Now I know it sounds like I'm just dumping on this game, but if I didn't like it I wouldn't have bothered finishing it and I wouldn't have bothered writing all this. I actually like it a lot, despite its flaws. I would love to see it remade someday with the level of polish it deserves. I hope moving forward the devs take a little more time to polish the writing and think more about the plot paths they open so they don't leave them hanging.

Keep it up and I look forward to bigger and better things with the next update.
 
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