- Feb 16, 2020
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Good game and congrats to the MrDots team in its completion.
After completing the game on a few routes I do have some 'hopefully' constructive criticism. A lot of the dialog I felt was completely unnecessary, like the MC trying to lay out knowledge of things like cooking steaks while on a date (cringe) or the doctor going into way too much detail about testing pregnancies. I know this has been addressed but felt it was worth mentioning again.
Another is the overall structure/paths of the game. If not playing the game with a WT mod many of choices that influence direction aren't very obvious to the paths they lead down. Personally I would have liked to have seen 2 clear paths in the game. A romance path, where MC and D are monogamous and included the career path she would ultimately go down (influencer with Koko) or a lust/hedonist path (not monogamous) and would have played off of D's hinted kinks, like her porn kink, exhibitionism and how she likes to be watched having sex, leading to something like an online cosplay-porn type of career. Anyway, it was a great game regardless and I'm looking forward to the next project.![Thumbs up (y) (y)](data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7)
After completing the game on a few routes I do have some 'hopefully' constructive criticism. A lot of the dialog I felt was completely unnecessary, like the MC trying to lay out knowledge of things like cooking steaks while on a date (cringe) or the doctor going into way too much detail about testing pregnancies. I know this has been addressed but felt it was worth mentioning again.
Another is the overall structure/paths of the game. If not playing the game with a WT mod many of choices that influence direction aren't very obvious to the paths they lead down. Personally I would have liked to have seen 2 clear paths in the game. A romance path, where MC and D are monogamous and included the career path she would ultimately go down (influencer with Koko) or a lust/hedonist path (not monogamous) and would have played off of D's hinted kinks, like her porn kink, exhibitionism and how she likes to be watched having sex, leading to something like an online cosplay-porn type of career. Anyway, it was a great game regardless and I'm looking forward to the next project.
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