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I did like the ending. It was a nice cliffhanger. I'm looking forward to chapter two.True tho parents have been accused of kidnap before irl, and that was deception what Rachel -> i didn't like it not one bit.
I did like the ending. It was a nice cliffhanger. I'm looking forward to chapter two.True tho parents have been accused of kidnap before irl, and that was deception what Rachel -> i didn't like it not one bit.
* cocks back for an OT SLAP* don't make me..Tho Sarah's sniper is really something you shouldn't ignore...
My bad then... I thought it was the ghost Sara... my apologies if I offended someone with my carelessnessIts Nova not Sarah.
its funny i normally hate cliff hangers like when i am binge watching on Flix and hit the end of a season.. but in this case i agree with you. all i want is more!I did like the ending. It was a nice cliffhanger. I'm looking forward to chapter two.
Yeah so do i gona take a while 2/3 more months till he start writing it and its finished. And 2 months till revision is done so will be easier to wait last month on new chaptI did like the ending. It was a nice cliffhanger. I'm looking forward to chapter two.
Too bad it's not coming soon... as I understand it... there might not be story development and just patches to the existing one... hope I'm wrong tho...I did like the ending. It was a nice cliffhanger. I'm looking forward to chapter two.
Unfortunately you are not wrong. I'm glad I am an extremely patient person.Too bad it's not coming soon... as I understand it... there might not be story development and just patches to the existing one... hope I'm wrong tho...
I'd like F & D to visit a concert of Coco in chapter two or three and things get naughty backstage afterwards.I am still sad that there isn't a whole lot of love for Coco here. i know she just has a bit part but there are soo many possibilities with her
if i am not mistaken there is still 2 more story development patches planned for this chapter before the next chapter. 14 is focusing on some previous content but i think it will still continue the story.. anyone confirm?Too bad it's not coming soon... as I understand it... there might not be story development and just patches to the existing one... hope I'm wrong tho...
Koko* you mean... and yes it would be great to see her again... becoming friends with D and F. But she's a star... and unless they go to her... I don't see anything happen... tho they have e-mail exchange with D... so who knows (plot twist)I am still sad that there isn't a whole lot of love for Coco here. i know she just has a bit part but there are soo many possibilities with her
well D E and J all love her so maybe she Visits the 4 of you from time to timeKoko* you mean... and yes it would be great to see her again... becoming friends with D and F. But she's a star... and unless they go to her... I don't see anything happen... tho they have e-mail exchange with D... so who knows (plot twist)
I'm glad for you... that you're patient and all... I'm not... my heart is hurting knowing that I would be away from my little princess... for sooooo longUnfortunately you are not wrong. I'm glad I am an extremely patient person.
this was mentioned earlier, though its unlikely considering that M and B are actually loversNow for a twist. The reason Frank hasn't bothered contacting D is because secretly he and Brad are lovers. Wouldn't that get right up bitchy Rachel's nose?
married*this was mentioned earlier, though its unlikely considering that M and B are actually lovers
D story will not continue until chap 2. v14 chap 1 is to fix a lot of loopholes and fix typo's and add more content to chap 1. IE Elena will now have a condom on her with F and her are in the restroom. ( I use this because it is posted on Patreon) and I don't want to spoil anything if I have supposition on other things added for I do not know.if i am not mistaken there is still 2 more story development patches planned for this chapter before the next chapter. 14 is focusing on some previous content but i think it will still continue the story.. anyone confirm?
you can be married without being lovers i mean thats Mom and Brads intention for D and Frank. so i chose to go with lovers to squash the idea that brad reciprocated.. its still possible that frank has the hots for brad thoughmarried*![]()
Ahh ok.. thanks for the clarificationD story will not continue until chap 2. v14 chap 1 is to fix a lot of loopholes and fix typo's and add more content to chap 1. IE Elena will now have a condom on her with F and her are in the restroom. ( I use this because it is posted on Patreon) and I don't want to spoil anything if I have supposition on other things added for I do not know.
entirely plausible and would depend on how long they spend in D's Country in chap 2. though it might be hard to justifyDon't want to burst any bubbles... but in their country there might be someone that was not mentioned in previous releases and has to play a major role in the future...