atlas114

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sorry I am not a patreon :(

of course! I have some to share for Chapter 2 as well (D only) though you can easily set Elena, Georgina, and Jennifer paths with his "no save"? shortcut. I'll post them tonight
 

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2017 Wrap-Up - Jennifer

Here are some year end thoughts regarding the female characters in the story, staring with Jennifer. Part of this discussion will revolve around the observed themes: (1) Love conquers Fear; (2) Love transcends Societal Prejudice: (3) Coming of Age; and (4) Family.

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Jennifer shares with MCFemale the state of virginity. The steps taken with MCFemale can be played out with Jennifer, but with brilliant differences. This was nicely done in the last update. Where MCFemale is shy and hesitant, Jennifer is full of Elena and internet driven plans. Both stumble along - one knocks hesitantly on the door; the other enters the room without knocking.

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(1) Coming of Age: As the only other virgin, this theme can be strong with Jennifer. Here path could be “First Teen Love” and the ups and downs that come from that, ending, possibly, in a more mature and adult Jennifer by the end of the story.

The first love can be intense and immersive, blocking out the mundane in the world, and either transforming the world into a place of wonder, or crippling one with doubt and second guesses of the other’s true affections (or both...and sometimes within the same hour). Young love can be the stuff fairy tales and dreams are made of; or the thing of insecurities that drive one to distraction.

So what is at stake for Jennifer? Will her relationship with MCMale be healthy or harmful? Will it grow into a longer term healthy relationship with him? Part of her path might be to take the overwhelming emotions she has now, and mold it into a sustainable loving and lasting relationship.

Here is Jennifer now:

Fresh off of an intimate night with MCMale, her body is filled with excitement and adrenaline. It is surprising she did not pester MCMale with social media texts and pictures on the last update, but that is not likely to last. Young love, especially first love, is intense. So intense, it can be quite scary. This intensity will make the love seem stronger than it really is.

In this early stage, Jennifer is likely to everything else in her life slide as she obsesses on this new relationship. Family obligations, work, friends - all seem so much less important. Every love song ever written now applies to Jennifer. She’s “walking on sunshine” because she’s in a “teenage love affair.”

Assume, in this Visual Novel, there are successes and failures - good paths and bad paths to be taken. Passion and love, especially young love, go hand in hand. This passion will ultimately be Jennifer’s greatest success or failure, depending how she uses it (or if it uses her).

Ultimately, is she going to gain self confidence and maturity through this relationship, or will it take an unhealthy spiral. With her immaturity,Maher young love won’t be picture perfect. There might be jealousy, anger, and hurt along the way. The relationship might have intoxicating highs, and conversely, devastating lows.

Will MCMale’s relationship with Jennifer, and his opinion of Jennifer’s intelligence, talents, and her future give her the boost she needs to take her from a teen to and adult and bring about her understanding of her own value as a person?

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(2) Family: It is interesting that Jennifer is the only character whose core family is still intact (Father-Mother-Daughter). Would Jennifer then bring insights to this theme? Does she bring expectations to the story that other characters don’t have?

Arguably, Jennifer comes into the intimate relationship scene with the least experience, and the greatest immaturity. Does the intact family relationship then give her strength in her weakness? When emotions run high, and fears of relationship rise, does she look toward the relationship her parents have and calm down, modeling how they deal with relationship strife?

Alternately, Jennifer’s familial experience could also cause barriers in her relationship with MC Male. Seeing how relationships must be (like her parents), Jennifer might layer expectations into her relationship with MCMale as she expects their path to move toward a commitment ... and marriage.

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(3-4) Love conquers Fear and Societal Prejudices: As discussed above, Jennifer’s individual fears could come from those caused by the uncertainty of young love. In addition, if she is going to have a long term relationship with MCMale, there will be the issues of fear and jealousy if MCMale continues to have an open relationship with any of the other characters.

As for Societal Prejudices, for Jennifer there are several. Society (and perhaps her family) frowns on a May-September Romance. If other women stay in the picture, Society frowns upon a polyamorous relationships. If MCFemale is in the picture, Society frowns on that.

It could be that Jennifer’s young love runs so strong, that this alone overcomes for her these prejudices. On the other hand, there might have to be several scenes where we see the step-by-step resolution and acceptance of these issues. (Interestingly, this “resolution and acceptance” in this VN might be the greatest obstacle if the VN is slowly moving toward a polyamory or harem ending possibility).

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However this plays out, I do expect that after one day, Jennifer is itching to text, talk, or Skype with MCMale - and MCMale may or may not be prepared for what emotions and adoration Jennifer is going to unleash upon him. (“Okay, Jennifer, going to hang up now.” “No, wait wait wait, I have something else to tell you.” —— “Okay, Jennifer, got to go.” “No, wait wait wait, Do you miss me? ... Never mind ... No, yes, a little?”)
 
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Gully

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Mar-Sep - just saying. I like the story, but it's getting difficult to suspend belief. Mostly because of the female characters being so darn tiny.
 

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I know what you guys are saying - the “art” of the slighter ladies along with their comparison to the other rendered ladies makes Elaine and Jennifer appear to be between 14-16 years of age. Won’t disagree with perception since in art, perception is everything.

However, the stated (or implied) age is 18 for both. Don’t want to start another long winded series of posts on age of characters as that was done half a year ago.

(In reality, when I was 20 I started dating another 20-year-old college student who was a blonde version of Elena - went on for 5 years. So I am biased in my acceptance.)

Funny quote - “Mar-Sep” romance.
 
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minombrehota

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When is the next update set for? MrDots Patreon doesn't say much.

Also, will there be any full on incest in this game? I know Patreon has their new rules and regulations, I hope the game doesn't change from what it was gonna be to please Patreon. If that's the case, I hope there's another platform for MrDots to go to.
 

401Grem

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I've known a girl who was 14, taller fuller figured and could easily pass for 19. I've said it before, being petite and flat chested doesn't make someone automatically underaged, nor does being taller full figured make you automatically an adult. Looks alone can be deceving.
 

Arcteryx

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I am a 20$ donator from the start and actually gave you guys access to the extras a few minutes after day 15 was released, so I am not sure your phrase has any relevance.
Sorry for the slow response, I've been offline for the holidays, and I'm not very active on this forum. The beggar comment wasn't for those who support the developers, and selflessly share with the F95Zone community. It was directed for those who complain about not getting updates as soon as they are released, e.g. requesting timers, when they are not supporting the developer and just leeching off of your, and many others, generosity in sharing titles. It was also not negatively directed at those who realize that not being a donor has drawbacks and are patient with the hero uploaders on this site.

edit: I usually do not respond to posts over a day old, however I felt that an explanation of my comment was necessary as it seemed to have irritated a patron that shares on this site.
 
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Brazen

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So I got this:

Code:
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/day16_00.rpy", line 4881, in script
SyntaxError: invalid syntax (game/day16_00.rpy, line 4881)

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "game/day16_00.rpy", line 4881, in script
  File "S:\Eh'\DMD\Dating_My_Daughter-0.14-win\game\Dating My Daughter v0.16 (Extras Included) Patched #2\Dating My Daughter\renpy\ast.py", line 1656, in execute
    if renpy.python.py_eval(condition):
  File "S:\Eh'\DMD\Dating_My_Daughter-0.14-win\game\Dating My Daughter v0.16 (Extras Included) Patched #2\Dating My Daughter\renpy\python.py", line 1748, in py_eval
    code = py_compile(code, 'eval')
  File "S:\Eh'\DMD\Dating_My_Daughter-0.14-win\game\Dating My Daughter v0.16 (Extras Included) Patched #2\Dating My Daughter\renpy\python.py", line 584, in py_compile
    raise e
SyntaxError: invalid syntax (game/day16_00.rpy, line 4881)

Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 6.99.12.4.2187
DMD Chapter 2 0.16

Not sure what to do from here.
 

401Grem

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Breasts are certainly the least accurate indicator.
But facial features, stature and overall bodily proportions are out-of-whack.
But for "certain" types of porn games, all this is just standard fare...
Sure, take second happiness for example, where ALL the women are much taller and older looking then MC, does that make him underage??? He's hairless thin and short, could he be a 15yo college student?
 

atlas114

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@virtuvoid as promised.

sorry for delay. i got lazy and forgot about it til now.

Day 16 start - D only.

EDIT: 1000th post here! "Addicted" for sure :FeelsGoodMan::heartcoveredeyes:
 
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atlas114

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FP: 103
LP: 103
Boobs: 21
Ass Points: 21
Exhibition: 20
Sharing: 10
BDSM: 10

no relationships with anyone else. I guess I could do it again with no Sharing/BDSM but I put some points in there just in case. either way it's easy enough to restart from the beginning of Chapter 2 and speed text my way back to the beginning of Day 16.
 
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Les_Riggs

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When is the next update set for? MrDots Patreon doesn't say much.

Also, will there be any full on incest in this game? I know Patreon has their new rules and regulations, I hope the game doesn't change from what it was gonna be to please Patreon. If that's the case, I hope there's another platform for MrDots to go to.
MrDots usually posts the next update of the game in the overview section. V17 will be out January 27th, which I think he posted up about 12 hours ago.

As for incest, it looks like he’s doing his best to try and keep it in the game without having to mention anything about it in his posts, so the Patreon wolves that are monitoring his page and fan posts, don’t realise what’s up. No easy task.

And from memory, I think he did ask fans for some recommendations for other platforms but none have been suitable or as stable as Patreon (used to be) so far. Hope that answers your questions.

Just out of interest, does anyone know of any of the other game creators that have incest based games, been able to find an alternate platform to Patreon yet? And if so, are they using it?
 
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Some-Dude

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is it just me or this update wasn't good !! the facial expressions were really bad (for D) i mean in most scenes the only thing that changes in her face is her mouth and even that's not matching the scene ! like she's being witty and she has a sad face ! or the squash scene when the guy is trying to close up she's just moving left and right for like 3 minutes(play that again and you'll see) the same goes with the F character he's so immature in this update like he's a teenager who's trying to act like an adult ! in the past he always thinks A LOT to himself but didn't talk too much or out of place (very mature) but now he talks as much as he thinks ! he says so much nonsense and unnecessary information , it's like they were trying to make the scenes longer ! and the whole thing took a step back sexually ! sure there were nudity but absolutely no intimacy which is weird cuz their relationship is based on intimacy ! and then at the end they make a heavy scene like that to make up for how dry the rest of the update was ! the story was always the strongest aspect of this game but this time i felt like someone else made this update !! but still it really fixed my DMD withdrawal and not to mention "BOOBJOB !!!"
 
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there's have been a lot of conversation about jennifer and her appearance,
I've known a girl who was 14, taller fuller figured and could easily pass for 19. I've said it before, being petite and flat chested doesn't make someone automatically underaged, nor does being taller full figured make you automatically an adult. Looks alone can be deceving.
agree,but jennifer really does look out of place in this game when you compare her with other girls
D is obviously created in a way we all (or most of us) imagine perfect girl-cute,pretty,blonde,busty petite.I can agree that her appearance may be a little bit over the top but i'm sure that would be the description of a perfect girl by the most of the guys

Elena and Jennifer on the other hand are completely different,being undeveloped compared to D,and while Elena,in my opinon,has nice figure for petite girl,Jennifer simply doesn't.She seems even "smaller" next to Elena,and i mean generally smaller.I was a little bit uncomfortable at the beginning of ch2 when she overslept in dads place,that scene just looked so wrong to me,lying there and trying to advance things with dad...That's the reason i skip any scenes with her.
I certainly don't want to bash devs and everyone else who likes her,but in my opinon she's a huge no.I wish she resembled more to Olivia or especially Margo.
 

Some-Dude

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there's have been a lot of conversation about jennifer and her appearance,

agree,but jennifer really does look out of place in this game when you compare her with other girls
D is obviously created in a way we all (or most of us) imagine perfect girl-cute,pretty,blonde,busty petite.I can agree that her appearance may be a little bit over the top but i'm sure that would be the description of a perfect girl by the most of the guys

Elena and Jennifer on the other hand are completely different,being undeveloped compared to D,and while Elena,in my opinon,has nice figure for petite girl,Jennifer simply doesn't.She seems even "smaller" next to Elena,and i mean generally smaller.I was a little bit uncomfortable at the beginning of ch2 when she overslept in dads place,that scene just looked so wrong to me,lying there and trying to advance things with dad...That's the reason i skip any scenes with her.
I certainly don't want to bash devs and everyone else who likes her,but in my opinon she's a huge no.I wish she resembled more to Olivia or especially Margo.
you've got an issue with that and not with full blood father daughter incest ?!
there are girls even over 21 that look like Jen or Elena and thinking about them like that simply isn't fair to them ! my last GF was basically the same size as Elena and she was really self conscious about it too so it's just not cool to think of them like that , also their bodies develops up until they're 22 just like some guys , so it's kinda like a phobia to be unconformable with Jen or Elena when it's clearly stated that they're legal . . . but who am i to talk everyone likes what they like (or dislike in this case !!)
 
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