VN Ren'Py Completed Dating My Daughter [Ch. 1-4 v1.01] [MrDots Games]

[Jeff Steel]

Brilliant observations and analysis.
Am an aspiring writer of romance/erotica and I assume you are a writer as well?

Kind of, sort of. In real life I’m an attorney. In my part time i provide scene/character ideas, plotting, and some rewrites on DMD/Melody. I’m better at writing analysis than I currently am at writing in this genre.

The analysis on sex scenes I did to remind and cajole the DMD team to start turning up the emotional edge of the sex scenes in DMD. As D/F get closer to sex - and as Elena and other characters learn of their relationship - imo there can be some delicious scenes impregnated with all sorts of character tension and heightened emotions.

 

[Wellthisisinteresting]

Everyone! already have your guns ready!? cos this is going to be a blast! :OhMyGoodness: the new chapter is almost out! :eazyHype:


Yea! ... Well, it would be more enjoyable if some1 is sneaking in the trees (well, yea, except that creep Lucas. lol) and who cares if it's risky... It's more fun... hehe

I'm ready, release the game Mrdots!!! :heartcoveredeyes:And your new avatar is awesome wow! :heartcoveredeyes:

Your right I'm really a bit worried of that Lucas guy, even if he's behind bars now, I have a feeling he will slip out or something; talking of guns i think F and D needs one

 

[Wellthisisinteresting]

Waiting and ready for buy a coffee for this awesome game!!!

Yea!! XDXD My coffee money is also ready right here to buy some nice drinks for our Hero Mrdots! :heartcoveredeyes:

 

[Cruxiz]

This guy is going to get a caffeine rush.

 

[IPkiss]

tomorrow will be exciting day,F1 qualifications in monaco,champions league final and best for last,new DMD update,can't wait!

Oh no ---you forgot the replays of the Royal wedding......................................

 

[sutairs]

It's almost here!!!! I'M M O I S T

 

[Jeff Steel]

Here are two quotes showing, in my mind, how I see the differences between D’s Love and Melody’s Love with their respective MC:

D: “Everyday I spend with you is the new best day of my life.” - Reliant K (lyric from “Must Have Done Something Right”)

Melody: “People always tell me either A. you love him. B. you hate him. My usual answer? C. All of the above.” - Anne Roiphe quote

 

[Sum FΑggott]

waiting for the release like...

 

[zindathar]

Just a few more hours, i really cant hide my excitement

 

[AxSn]

It's almost here!!!! I'M M O I S T

Jesus, keep it in your pants.....

 

[sutairs]

Jesus, keep it in your pants.....

NO

 

[Airez]

How much hours more? Can anyone please give a countdown details?

 

[rmma621]

I'm ready, release the game Mrdots!!! :heartcoveredeyes:And your new avatar is awesome wow! :heartcoveredeyes:

Your right I'm really a bit worried of that Lucas guy, even if he's behind bars now, I have a feeling he will slip out or something; talking of guns i think F and D needs one

Yea, he could slip out. Thanks! glad you like my new avatar.:extremelyhappy:... And by guns, I meant our dicks or clitoris... haha ...
But yea I think F and D also need a real gun incase something unexpected happens...

Jesus, keep it in your pants.....

NO

LOL XD...

 

[Wellthisisinteresting]

Yea, he could slip out. Thanks! glad you like my new avatar.:extremelyhappy:... And by guns, I meant our dicks or clitoris... haha ...
But yea I think F and D also need a real gun incase something unexpected happens...

Ok lol Did you make that avatar? To get that "fan of thing" looks really cool..

 

[rmma621]

How much hours more? Can anyone please give a countdown details?

Should be in about 16hrs or so from now, It will be Sunday in other places by then.

Ok lol Did you make that avatar? To get that "fan of thing" looks really cool..

Yea I did. That image is from the game. I just added the "fan of" and the names to it. Thanks!

 

[Wellthisisinteresting]

Should be in about 16hrs from now, maybe till Sunday in some other places.

Yea I did. That image is from the game. I just added the "fan of" and the names to it. Thanks!

Very well made, perfect, best avatar on this whole site by a mile!

 

[RustyV]

- imo there can be some delicious scenes impregnated with all sorts of character tension and heightened emotions.

Impregnated? A well developed vocabulary or plot slip?

 

[xsssssssss]

Idk, i hope for D+F+Elena, but i think its to early and D is not used to that yet but that would be an awesome scene when it comes!

Even if we likely aren’t going to get d+f sex, I’m hoping d+f at least get to the point where they are ready to get over that particular hump.

 

[wrx21]

i hope in this update that F finally sucks D's tits properly,it was enough of just licking. want to use those boobs points at last
that doesn't sound weird at all right x'D

 

[spasimosk]

finaly the day has come !