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And for me will be the last work day before the vacation.
Also I think DmD will be out for me on Sunday not Saturday because of the time zone.

What you expect to happen.From the previews we can be sure some D/F fun on the train and also D+Elena in the bathroom.But do you believe that there will some F+Elena alone time?Or even D+F+Elena?
Idk, i hope for D+F+Elena, but i think its to early and D is not used to that yet :( but that would be an awesome scene when it comes! :)
 

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Brilliant observations and analysis.
Am an aspiring writer of romance/erotica and I assume you are a writer as well?
Kind of, sort of. In real life I’m an attorney. In my part time i provide scene/character ideas, plotting, and some rewrites on DMD/Melody. I’m better at writing analysis than I currently am at writing in this genre.

The analysis on sex scenes I did to remind and cajole the DMD team to start turning up the emotional edge of the sex scenes in DMD. As D/F get closer to sex - and as Elena and other characters learn of their relationship - imo there can be some delicious scenes impregnated with all sorts of character tension and heightened emotions.
 
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Everyone! already have your guns ready!? ;) cos this is going to be a blast! :OhMyGoodness: the new chapter is almost out! :eazyHype:


Yea! ... Well, it would be more enjoyable if some1 is sneaking in the trees (well, yea, except that creep Lucas. lol) and who cares if it's risky... It's more fun... hehe ;)
I'm ready, release the game Mrdots!!! :heartcoveredeyes:And your new avatar is awesome wow! :heartcoveredeyes:

Your right ;) I'm really a bit worried of that Lucas guy, even if he's behind bars now, I have a feeling he will slip out or something; talking of guns i think F and D needs one :D
 
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Here are two quotes showing, in my mind, how I see the differences between D’s Love and Melody’s Love with their respective MC:

D: “Everyday I spend with you is the new best day of my life.” - Reliant K (lyric from “Must Have Done Something Right”)

Melody: “People always tell me either A. you love him. B. you hate him. My usual answer? C. All of the above.” - Anne Roiphe quote
 
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I'm ready, release the game Mrdots!!! :heartcoveredeyes:And your new avatar is awesome wow! :heartcoveredeyes:

Your right ;) I'm really a bit worried of that Lucas guy, even if he's behind bars now, I have a feeling he will slip out or something; talking of guns i think F and D needs one :D
Yea, he could slip out. Thanks! glad you like my new avatar.:extremelyhappy:... And by guns, I meant our dicks or clitoris... haha;) ...
But yea I think F and D also need a real gun incase something unexpected happens...

Jesus, keep it in your pants.....
LOL XD...
 
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