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Chapter 3 simply lost focus, gained it back somewhat, lost it again and gained it sort of back. It had issues, so here we are.Chapter 3 looks more and more like it was a milking exercise the further chapter 4 continues on the same old vanilla path.
The F & D vanilla story had the perfect wrap up at then end of Chapter 2.
It was always supposed to end with marriage (and heavily assumed pregnancy) - Chapter 2 was meant to be a launching pad for all the other kinks, combinations and side-paths that would still end in the married couple ... plus whatever options came with all of that movement.