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botc76

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YES. PLEASE GOD SPOIL IT!

I know its going to be even more infuriating but have at it.
But with spoilers please, as annoying as it is to wait another month, I want to read it in the story not know it already.
 

Josh M Spicer

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Well then, nice to know I won't be missing much action by avoiding these.

So much potential just kinda thrown away for a hack-eyed story that forgoes logic for the sake of plot.

It's like a Coeur fic!

Good luck Palmer.
 

TheKryptonian

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Alright, you asked for it.
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You have got to be fucking kidding me... That's it? I mean really that's the whole reason she went full-on bitch mode to the MC?

What a waste of a previously great character in Amanda... did the writers just get bored lol

Thank you DrFog
 

Palmer

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Look. Im obviousy not the only person talking about how poorly this thing is written. You want to pull out the "play something else" line that's fine by me, but its a terrible fucking excuse for the steamy pile of writing you obviously approved for release. I have caught hints here or there from others that this dirt the aunt brought up is absolutely a ridiculous excuse for why the Amanda character acts the way she does towards the MC.

Just admit you fucked up with the storyline and I'm sure people will just move on and enjoy the good parts of this game. But this crap about just wait and see this amazing reason why the central love interest just betrays the MC is not going over well AT ALL.
We are extremely proud what we manage to accomplish every single month (while developing two other games), and then release it for free. You are not; so play something else :)
 
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HonoredEx

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I came here to ask if everyone was as confused as me about how the plot is going,
What i didnt know was that there was an almost 2 chapter difference in releases (Chapt 16).

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Kathy and Heidi ftw
 

Irgendwie Irgendwo

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Did not read the spoiler as I want to come up with an appropriate sarcastic review on the fly, but can you please tell me if that is revealed in C15 or 16? Thank you!
 

Jayjayj

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Yeah.. not going to jump on the bad writing wagon I think its actually pretty good story considering. Just because some of us might not like the way the story is playing out doesn't mean its bad per say.

Personally I would have made it more about MC and Daughter fighting against the odds to keep the diner going, instead of the daughter seemingly being way too easy to be manipulated by a stranger versus the man she's known and loved her entire life, but that's just me.
 

TheKryptonian

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We will keep trying our best. AW has published 5 books now by the way. And we release everything for free. Since you think that is low standard, maybe hang out in a different forum instead of this one? :)

Regardless, thanks for your feedback bud, and have a great weekend! :)
No. I like it here. A lot of like minded people who agree this plot/storyline here is weak AF.

You can have my feedback anytime ;)
 

wildt

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We will keep trying our best. AW has published 5 books now by the way. And we release everything for free. Since you think that is low standard, maybe hang out in a different forum instead of this one? :)

Regardless, thanks for your feedback bud, and have a great weekend! :)
Palmer did you just degrade this site ? Or did I just take that the wrong way?
 

Magixian

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Save files are for the online versions only.
hey again. Yes, got that the first time around. But with no instructions by you or the linked site on HOW TO USE THEM. Hope I made that clear now :)
It's a bunch of .dat files, now where are we to store them?
Every time I try to start a random chapter, it asks me to play the prior one without any promts.

*edit: wauw. Just learned there is a Cracked, an Offline and an Online version.. Can you make it more confusing for newcomers ? Also, the OP does not suggest this is the case, only showing links for 'Official' and 'Cracked'... What a confusing mess. If you really want all these version around, then name it the same all the time.
 
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