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Arthoneceron

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Your rendering wider than you are tall, but your figure is taller than she is wide. She's basically getting lost in the sea of WhoGivesAShit to the sides.

Keeping the 16:9 ratio but doing portrait instead of landscape would get something like this - View attachment 694369

Maybe zoom that out a bit so she's not about to exit the frame, but you get the idea. She's now the focus and her expression, positioning, etc is what you're paying attention to, not the bar behind her or the big-ass couch she's on.

Of course, if it's a render for a game, you can't really do tricks like that. So do the best you can -

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Focus is still on her face and body language, and you've cut out the unimportant stuff.
Thanks for that! This is actually of the backgrounds for the main menu of my game, but this is something that I'll really take a look later on the future ones.
 
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Jackie, one of the girls from my project, in a night of insomnia.
Do you guys have any tip to improve the renders, apart from the obvious "make her nude"? For now, my work seems... plain...
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It is a good render, don't be too hard on yourself (we can be our worst critiques sometimes). Though, the left side of the image feels very empty, you could probably crop it to that black stool in the background or add maybe a notebook on the couch she was reading.

You could also try changing the camera angle, other than a straight on shot (which is not a bad thing). Lighting is a big part also, not everything needs to be well lit, having a lamp light in the scene suddenly isolates her in the room and draws more attention to her.

While I do appreciate the nude/nsfw renders here, I find some of the clothed ones more sexy at times. The excitement comes from what is hidden from me and the anticipation of uncovering what is there.

Keep up the good work
 
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Thanks for that! This is actually of the backgrounds for the main menu of my game, but this is something that I'll really take a look later on the future ones.
In that case, lay her out. No reason for her to be sitting when she can be laying on her side, stretched out and giving the wide frame a reason to be wide.
 

Carpe Stultus

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Jackie, one of the girls from my project, in a night of insomnia.
Do you guys have any tip to improve the renders, apart from the obvious "make her nude"? For now, my work seems... plain...
View attachment 694363
Besides the already mentioned things, i'd make the couch a bit smaller and change the texture of it, it looks too big imo and then give the poor render more iterations or use a denoiser because there is a lot of grain in it. To finish it off you might even want reduce the blurr of the FOV a bit, but thats completly depending on your taste.
 
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That is the card I am looking to get with my next computer. The RTX 2080 Super or the TI
I would only consider the TI if you absolutely need the extra RAM on offer, I think from a performance perspective the gains are probably not worth the extra money, it would be better perhaps to put that towards another super card instead. But of course depends on how deep your wallet is. It may even be practical to go with dual 2070 super instead too. But I’m very happy with the 2080 super and is a great step up from my previous card.
 

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Impossible. I can't do it. Maybe someday in the future.

Nah, not impossible. In the future sounds more like it. :) a few weeks and tutorials from youtube ago, I didn´t know how to do something like that either.^^ I thought I test it because I wanted to do a whole project in this style. maybe a comic or even a VN. But no...thats way out of my league, to much work and to less time. was worth a try tho.
 
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