DiosDecay
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It is a good render, don't be too hard on yourself (we can be our worst critiques sometimes). Though, the left side of the image feels very empty, you could probably crop it to that black stool in the background or add maybe a notebook on the couch she was reading.Jackie, one of the girls from my project, in a night of insomnia.
Do you guys have any tip to improve the renders, apart from the obvious "make her nude"? For now, my work seems... plain...
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You could also try changing the camera angle, other than a straight on shot (which is not a bad thing). Lighting is a big part also, not everything needs to be well lit, having a lamp light in the scene suddenly isolates her in the room and draws more attention to her.
While I do appreciate the nude/nsfw renders here, I find some of the clothed ones more sexy at times. The excitement comes from what is hidden from me and the anticipation of uncovering what is there.
Keep up the good work