So, here's my two-cents from what I see so far;
I played this game twice: Once at it's initial release, so the first beta on here, and once with this current build.
Pros:
The art is fantastic, and I like the concept. It gives me that "larger than life" feel that I (personally) like seeing in games. Power fantasy and all that. It's set up to make you feel like you're important to the world from the get-go. Scenes are (For the most part) well written, and a lot of the characters I find it easy to be drawn to. For that alone, it's a game that I definitely want to continue to play and watch.
Cons:
The UI is messy, Even the cheats are improperly labels. A gold cheat actually being a stats cheat for example, pronouns aren't correct in a lot of places, tags like "Character's Name" sometimes pop up as MC or blank, There are places where even after delegating relations in the succubus/demon girl plot line where she still refers to them as mother or blood related, The actual management of the city doesn't seem to have a big effect on the actual gameplay like it could or should, Sometimes choices don't properly portray what your character will say or the route you're going for, Some quests if you save before making choices then load back in will send you to the castle with no way of resuming the quest, There are places where lines of dialogue repeat their selves.
You have a game here with some great assets, some great plot, and a lot of potential, but I worry that adding "More" before fixing what is already there and doesn't work properly -- might make it so that you have too much to handle/fix later on and result in a half-baked project that you lose inspiration for. I really hope that doesn't become the case.
