VN Ren'Py Depth's Revival [Rework] [Seacth]

[The ArcKnight]

Yay update!

Anyone else having issues with the text box Opacity not working though?

 

[The ArcKnight]

Spoiler: Reason #456 we love Serena

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[Seacth]

The writing does come across a bit too heavy. I'd say try to cut at least some of those convos that have to do with feeling down to half the word count. Personally, I'd say watch some movies, read a book. Take notes and then compare them to what you're writing. "What can I do to distill the message I'm trying to convey?"

Consider that those of us who are up to read your story might want to spend mebbe 5-15 seconds per click between servings of eye candy.

I only have one other gripe, make up. The extra pale face our lovely teacher has almost kills it for me once she's nekkid.

Other then that you've got a fun game here. I admittedly prefer to imagine that the landlady is actually the younger sister of a landlady...but that's just me.

Cheers!

Thanks for the feedback. This update had really long texts I accept. I Will try to cut them a lil bit ^^

 

[Seacth]

Honestly I love this game, but the game gets too wordy when the MC and the girls start talking about how much they love each other. I just started skipping it. Maybe it's just me. I hate when games get all sappy like that. It's cringy. The game does have a romance tag so I expected a bit but it's a little over the top in my opinion. Like we get it, you're head over heels for each other, but it doesn't need to be repeated 10 times in one scene.

Thanks for the feedback :3 I'll take care of the dialogues for the next update and I'm glad you liked it.

 

[BabooJ1]

Honestly I love this game, but the game gets too wordy when the MC and the girls start talking about how much they love each other. I just started skipping it. Maybe it's just me. I hate when games get all sappy like that. It's cringy. The game does have a romance tag so I expected a bit but it's a little over the top in my opinion. Like we get it, you're head over heels for each other, but it doesn't need to be repeated 10 times in one scene.

Oh dear, you are one of those that has one hand always busy when playing games...

 

[BabooJ1]

I agree I dont want an Imogen relationship.

I do like Imogen as a side piece though.

I believe you can carry on with Imogen in either of her dom paths if you don't want to pursue a love route relationship with her.

 

[DrFoster]

Game crash with mom and son on sofa. The script from Cevvvo456 did not fix it.

 

[BlasKyau]

Game crash with mom and son on sofa. The script from Cevvvo456 did not fix it.

You have the solution in the first post of the thread; I leave you the link to the fix post:

https://f95zone.to/threads/depths-revival-ch-3-seacth.62248/page-27#post-4876505

 

[DrFoster]

You have the solution in the first post of the thread; I leave you the link to the fix post:

https://f95zone.to/threads/depths-revival-ch-3-seacth.62248/page-27#post-4876505

As I said "The script from Cevvvo456 did not fix it."

 

[Fallen Angel Productions]

it looks like old saves don't work does anyone have an old save they can send me

 

[Seacth]

it looks like old saves don't work does anyone have an old save they can send me

Here's a save file it's the start of the chapter 3 on harem path ^^

 

[Seacth]

As I said "The script from Cevvvo456 did not fix it."

I thought that fix worked but still, it crashes on some systems I guess :/ I'll see what I can do about it ^^

 

[BabooJ1]

Not sure why it crashes on some systems and not others - I never got the crash myself and I have played the update quite a few times now even from the beginning of the game.

 

[SoraGG]

usually this type of game will have weird shit story
but surprisingly this game have good story so far and i like it

keep up the good work
will waiting for the next update

 

[Seacth]

usually this type of game will have weird shit story
but surprisingly this game have good story so far and i like it

keep up the good work
will waiting for the next update

Thank you <3

 

[Demoness_Kiss]

Trying to avoid that bug, I'm replaying the game all over again...just in case(also bc i discovered the Dom-route with Imogen...thanks to you guys XD honestly, I like them both equally) u.u

 

[BabooJ1]

Trying to avoid that bug, I'm replaying the game all over again...just in case(also bc i discovered the Dom-route with Imogen...thanks to you guys XD honestly, I like them both equally) u.u

In the gallery scenes you can choose which path you want to view - so you don't have to play the whole game again to view the different dom scenes.

 

[Demoness_Kiss]

In the gallery scenes you can choose which path you want to view - so you don't have to play the whole game again to view the different dom scenes.

but like you can see and read, i wrote "trying to avoid the bug, i'm replaying the game all over again"(i mean from the prologue) the discovery of the dom-sub route is an extra that i got while playing = the dom-sub route is not the reason i'm replaying the game from zero ^_^

 

[BabooJ1]

I'm sure Dev is looking at the crashing but it's sometimes really difficult to pin down when he can't get it to crash on his own system.

 

[Fallen Angel Productions]

Here's a save file it's the start of the chapter 3 on harem path ^^

wow thanks a lot of dev's don't do this thanks so so much