Love the theme, the plot and the tone of it. An earlier poster worded it in a lovely A4 page text wall, so I'll omit that bit and get straight to what has been bugging me about this.
The MC is not even 30, but sports quite an amount of grey hair. I'll overlook the fact that the description mentions him as "young" adult in his barely 30s, but instead focus on that serious amount of grey.
I'm 38 and even I don't have such an amount when sporting a full beard. So for posterity's sake, and for pedantic peeps like me: consider to either change his age to be almost 40 or remove the grey.
I understand that the grey may look mature, charming, at least that's what the 'whamans' say, but in games it becomes an itch you can't scratch. Like a 20+ old looking like a 14 y/o just for the shota tag.
Anyways.
Love the game, the MC is just... a pet peeve. xD