VN Ren'Py Abandoned Derealization [v0.0.5.0] [Greenish Purple]

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bluedrakken

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Aug 6, 2016
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its a bullshit remake/work with nothing new and i can't even tell what was rework. i'm out what a waste of time.
 

Bmagada

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We bring up and drop that his sister is a porn star out of nowhere......then hes magically not mad about it. Its like writing things just so things happen and not that they help whatever the narrative is. Like dude.....write an outline to your story, start to finish, then stick to it and make small changes if you have to. No wonder this is taking forever.

Like why in the would would you make someone click "speak your truth" 80 times? Its padding. Move on to what's next.
 
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MrBenny

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Jul 20, 2021
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Wow, well that was disappointing....there isn't any new content with latest update (The renders and story are excellent though...). And with the step-sister mentioning she's been involved in a porn career, blah...:sick: (Gross)

And considering the step sis has a post secondary education, and yet shows she's a total idiot for going into the slimy porn industry...all in hopes to make it big,...big at what? Being continually used sexually, or known to suck or take that huge cock...all while earning a few dollars just like a street prostitute (Dictionary meaning... "Prostitute": a person, in particular a woman, who engages in sexual activity for payment.) It sure would have been better received to see her as some kind of solo cam star (maybe using plastic toys)...instead of used as cum dump for money.

Also I've know a few in the adult entertainment industry, and it isn't glorious at all for woman...as there are many off camera actions that the girls are forced to do, in order to secure parts in new projects. But guy porn stars don't have the same issues, as there female counter parts. A female porn star has to have a certain mindset to survive the constant sexual abuse they are exposed to (there are many Weinstein type people in the industry that demand them to have sex with them and their business partners). And usually over time it takes it's toll on a girl, and a lot of the women end up with serious substance abuse issues, etc.
 
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SpyderArachnid

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We bring up and drop that his sister is a porn star out of nowhere......then hes magically not mad about it.
In case you missed it, after the gas station incident, they made a deal to not speak of it again. She agreed to not speak about what she saw, in exchange for forgetting about what she told him. And the MC agreed.

Like why in the would would you make someone click "speak your truth" 80 times? Its padding. Move on to what's next.
Character building. It's supposed to signify the struggle she is having with herself. She is screaming for help, while her inner self is stopping her from doing so. She just keeps trying and trying to reach out, but she is being blocked from doing so. I thought it worked out pretty well and added some nice emotion to that moment.
 

The ArcKnight

Nylon enthusiast, Harem enjoyer.
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May 19, 2018
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So which girl is the sister and what kind of porn career?
If she's just doing cam shows by herself, that's what the fuck ever.
If she's actually getting railed by any dude who can afford her price tag and has a camera, then yeah, Dev is on some Bullshit.
 

MrBenny

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Jul 20, 2021
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Hmm...so who is the Red Head girl (Glory) to MC (just a room mate?)? I don't think it's his daughter, even though she is seen holding a #1 Dad cup at the beginning. And why did he not tell her he was moving out? Very odd.

Then players are left wondering what Paul's intention is with Glory, during the movers packing up scene (well we know what is on his mind, just don't know if anything bad happened to her). And Paul really looks like the Jeepers Creeper monster from that horror movie.

And then there is the red head girl shown laying face down on the road, that gets dragged off camera. Hmm, is that Glory (though her eye brows look different from Glory's)? So many questions...I guess we all have to wait and see what happens next. :unsure:

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