You didn't fuck up, you simply tried something in a demo that wasn't working as intended - happens all the time.
Like you said this is what the demo is for, testing, getting feedback and adapting.
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Like you said this is what the demo is for, testing, getting feedback and adapting.
Thank you. I already redid that by removing that hairy shit. I will give an update within 2 days.
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Not bad. Hmm... I can definitely tell that it was written by a non-native speaker, but it's better than most games that fall in that category.
What I did find a bit lacking was the over-reliance on exposition. I guess we could give it a pass since it's the prologue. Also, I felt that the sex scenes relied too heavily on the animations. They end really fast if you just click past the animations after a few loops.
As for the actual plot, I think it was interesting enough. I think the backstory was a bit convoluted though. There was a good king, but his son who took over was an asshole, then the asshole got betrayed by another asshole from the Black Knights. Seems a bit redundant with the bad guy being betrayed by another bad guy to take the thrown unless these events and characters are plot relevant going forward. Let's see. Samir was an interesting character. I'm guessing he will be an ally of sorts since he works for mommy.
As for the usual NTR hysteria, you gave the full disclamer in the OP so just ignore people who came here only to cry about the fact that things they don't like exist on the internet.
What I did find a bit lacking was the over-reliance on exposition. I guess we could give it a pass since it's the prologue. Also, I felt that the sex scenes relied too heavily on the animations. They end really fast if you just click past the animations after a few loops.
As for the actual plot, I think it was interesting enough. I think the backstory was a bit convoluted though. There was a good king, but his son who took over was an asshole, then the asshole got betrayed by another asshole from the Black Knights. Seems a bit redundant with the bad guy being betrayed by another bad guy to take the thrown unless these events and characters are plot relevant going forward. Let's see. Samir was an interesting character. I'm guessing he will be an ally of sorts since he works for mommy.
As for the usual NTR hysteria, you gave the full disclamer in the OP so just ignore people who came here only to cry about the fact that things they don't like exist on the internet.
You can always hit the report button on comments/reviews that go against our rules as I did with the 2 reviews.
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I would like to do that. I will do it after one or two updates. The community is too small for discord right now.
Makes sense, just suggesting cause it'd be easier to keep up with all the bug reports.
I will keep that in mind. Pregnancy at the early part is a bit problematic. Moreover, a lot of people are not comfortable with it. This will take a lot of extra work (storyline, images, dialogues, etc) and I have to make it optional. I will think about it later on. I will open a pole in the future on my Patreon. If people say yes then I will.
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Sharing/Swinging stuff with side girls is okay, but please try to do the Non-sharing stuff be more hardcore than sharing stuff. Otherwise non-ntr guys like me will be disappointed that we are only getting hand-holding sex lol.
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Pretty good prologue. Animations were good except the click top right to continue thing. it is better to just let it flow. You can learn alittle with this hardcore type fking scenes from 'bound by lust' by lustseekers. They are really good at making those animations. And also its best to change the header picture coz ngl, it looks really generic.
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Hi KKpotato
First of all, I want to thank Dev for his work and for giving us the opportunity to enjoy it. That said I make it clear that what I will write below is not a "criticism" or a request that you change your story to align with my tastes, it's just a doubt to know if I'm in the right or wrong place for me.
I saw that DEV talked about being inspired by Pale Carnation, and I tried to play it once and it wasn't something I could play, but not for the brothel stuff itself, since if we liked Rosa, for example, we could prevent anyone from touching her and we wouldn't see anything of the sort, though it does have some innuendo. My problem was with the fact that the mother is a former porn actress, I know it sounds dumb and she had fair grounds for doing what she does, but the fact that the MC is frequently "reminding" the mother porn scenes was something that made me very uncomfortable. So understand, it's not just the fact that she's a former porn actress or a former prostitute (for example) but the fact that it's often being relived in the story and shown how she was fucked in the videos, that's what bothered me the most.
So my question is, for the members of "incest" (from what I understood when I played, the mother (the blonde woman, at least that's what I believe her to be) seems a bit "wild" with all the piercing and tattooing) is she going to be a harem thing? or will it be one of the girls who will be shared with other men in the course of the story? Is she anything like the mother in Pale Carnation? Will we have to see their past sexual adventures or be constantly reminded of them?
As I said so I do not have any problems with things like the case of Veronica, she is out of my list of interests and does not seem a person who will make big changes in history, so it is not something that prevents me from playing the game, but I have a big problem when these things happen to family members. And I know that the character precious of baggage to become more "realistic" and such, in the end, it wouldn't make any sense for the mother to be a virgin since she has a child, the problem is more the type of baggage and size of that baggage.
So I know it's kind of silly of me to ask the DEV for a spoiler about the game. But I would be very grateful if he could alleviate some of my fears about those things I mentioned above. Thank you in advance.
First of all, I want to thank Dev for his work and for giving us the opportunity to enjoy it. That said I make it clear that what I will write below is not a "criticism" or a request that you change your story to align with my tastes, it's just a doubt to know if I'm in the right or wrong place for me.
I saw that DEV talked about being inspired by Pale Carnation, and I tried to play it once and it wasn't something I could play, but not for the brothel stuff itself, since if we liked Rosa, for example, we could prevent anyone from touching her and we wouldn't see anything of the sort, though it does have some innuendo. My problem was with the fact that the mother is a former porn actress, I know it sounds dumb and she had fair grounds for doing what she does, but the fact that the MC is frequently "reminding" the mother porn scenes was something that made me very uncomfortable. So understand, it's not just the fact that she's a former porn actress or a former prostitute (for example) but the fact that it's often being relived in the story and shown how she was fucked in the videos, that's what bothered me the most.
So my question is, for the members of "incest" (from what I understood when I played, the mother (the blonde woman, at least that's what I believe her to be) seems a bit "wild" with all the piercing and tattooing) is she going to be a harem thing? or will it be one of the girls who will be shared with other men in the course of the story? Is she anything like the mother in Pale Carnation? Will we have to see their past sexual adventures or be constantly reminded of them?
As I said so I do not have any problems with things like the case of Veronica, she is out of my list of interests and does not seem a person who will make big changes in history, so it is not something that prevents me from playing the game, but I have a big problem when these things happen to family members. And I know that the character precious of baggage to become more "realistic" and such, in the end, it wouldn't make any sense for the mother to be a virgin since she has a child, the problem is more the type of baggage and size of that baggage.
So I know it's kind of silly of me to ask the DEV for a spoiler about the game. But I would be very grateful if he could alleviate some of my fears about those things I mentioned above. Thank you in advance.