"I don't like thiccer models" isn't a criticism. It's a preference. There's nothing constructive to take from it other than "this person wants every model to look like the blue demon." and not much else. Also it seems you're just doubling down on trying to say it's bad, despite you mentioning positives prior. But since you want to be CinemaSins, I'll be Th3Birdman. Let's look at the criticisms.
Watched the Preview;
-lots of good points;
voices good,
lines good,
futanari cock worship good,
vaginal fluids,
masturbation good,
begging good,
super hot dark blue succubus meddling, good
length of final video at 35 minutes
Okay. Doesn't sound like someone who thinks it's "terrible beyond belief". Let's look at the critiques and if they actually are critiques.
-the bad ones;
-cock gets hard and soft with inconsistency, should have a non-erect state at the start and then get erect focusing on, a few more veins, and then stay erect. Its a turn off when it just goes on and off to floppy. If it was a comedy this would a bad laugh now queue.
Except Triss comes into the Tavern flaccid when she takes off her cloak/disguise/whatever. The reason I bolded what you said is because what you said is exactly what happens. Triss walks in flaccid and then as she looks more at the barmaid she becomes hard. It also doesn't seem to constantly go from flaccid to hard to flaccid to hard during the scene constantly.
Maybe an actual critique would have been that she walks into the tavern and gets hard looking at the bartender which is a great dramatic reveal. But when the scene actually starts she's flaccid till they start teasing one another and then Triss gets hard and squirts some pre-cum, indicating her balls are ready to burst. So the actual critique instead of embellishing that she goes from soft to hard constantly throughout the video would just be "She gets hard in the dramatic reveal but when the scene starts she's soft, till they start having sex. So, continuity error." which is more truthful and also a valid criticism. I even went through the entire video again, Triss gets hard at the 5:15 mark and stays that way till she pulls out of her till around 12:30ish. After that she's semi hard as the bartender tries to keep her interest away from the other girl till Triss tires of the worship and goes for the girl instead which is where the preview ends. So the only time it goes from hard to flaccid with no explanation is that she's hard for the dramatic reveal of the intro, and then not at the start of the actual scene.
-the best body in the video is had by the dark blue succubus outside, she looks like a super hot woman, bar her color. But she has no sex.
-the two females inside and the 3rd i guess, are too thick bodied and quite crude. They have ugly bodies. This is a major turn off. But their breasts look good, especially when they sort of sweat and the light from the fireplace falls upon them.
This is preference. You're essentially saying "I like the body type of the demon more than the others." That's not a critique, that's a preference. Some people like thiccer models, some do not.
-the face of the bartender looks strangely old and kind of like wood. Since she is getting regularly fucked she would have some attractiveness in her face as well.
Strangely old?
She just looks like an older Ciri to me. Your comment is more "I want the models to all be shaped like the succubus." We get it, the succubus blue demon is what you find attractive. You think the older bartender looks 'too old'. You also seem to think that older milfs don't have sex or don't deserve it unless they have flawless faces. She's getting regularly fucked by Triss likely because she looks like an older Ciri, she might even
be an older Ciri, I don't know. That isn't confirmed. The way the scene is going it seems she's meant to intentionally want to contrast her with the younger girl that is asleep which she seems intent on Triss
not getting to. But we already know she will.
-video needs some kissing (spit and spitting and saliva drooling). Feels more personal like that. Kissing is equally dominating as penetration via cock.
This is an actual point on things you feel could add to a scene rather than trying to turn it into your own fanfiction, or just complaining that one specific body type doesn't appeal to you. Good job and good point.
-the cock is too big and cannot get sucked. Does not even spit on it when she does not manage too suck it or just spit and suck on the head in a worshipful manner.
Willing to bet it's going to get sucked when all's said and done. She didn't spit on it, but she caressed her lips and her face all over it, she kissed it, she dragged her tongue along it and licked it while also verbally worshipping it like the cure for cancer, world peace, Half-Life 3 and the Detox album were inside of Triss's dick somewhere. Her actions were cock worship to the highest degree, maybe even too high for some.
Also wasn't one of your positives "futanari cock worship good," ???
-someone magically lock the door to the tavern please. Gives more of a sense that she is in control and also makes sense.
That could work. Or Triss could just not care because she'll fuck anyone that comes inside. Either scenario exercises control or makes sense depending on what kind of story you want to tell I guess. Fair points.
-wears a sack at clothing at a cold night and with that length her cock would be seen by all. Some sort of secrecy or basic disguise, even via clothing, would make this more titillating. Or i am missing something.
Maybe Triss is trying to be sincerely insincere about how much she really wants to hide herself. Given what she's shown, she doesn't really care about getting caught because she will fuck anyone that comes across her way, like the two girls right outside the bar before she goes in. Someone that really cares about hiding probably wouldn't stop to do that, so I chalk it up to Triss doing the bare minimum while wearing the most easy access clothing she had.
Some more good and bad stuff i am sure everybody else noticed. Some maybe due to it being a preview, some due to this habit of making indiscernible body figures that are not feminine at all.
He should make a feminine body version as, as version 2 or rather version 1 since that is the way they would look, whatever this refrigerator body-type is just looks bad.
This is a Fridge and non-feminine?
What kind of Fridges you hang out with? But again, down to a preference thing, if not slight overreaction.
Watched the Preview; continued, 3rd viewing, final.
-She looks like guts from berserk or a medieval terminator/robocop mix with the sack at the start. So muscular, so much like a man, so wide. So lame.
Basically your 'criticism' is "I don't find this body type attractive." "Women not shaped like the succubus or with some muscle are basically men to me." which is both quite an interesting stance to take, and also not actual criticism. Again, it's a preference thing.
-there is some faint sprinkling of cum i guess at the start. But its ineffective. Better to have a strand of pre-cum hanging to show her balls are full and she came to the tavern aroused.
Actual sort of criticism and preference. Your criticism is "I'd rather instead of her squirting pre-cum, that it be hanging from her dick instead." You can get across the idea of "balls" being full, by that, or by ejaculating pre-cum while still staying hard. Both things get across the same message that her balls are full and ready to burst. So ultimately, this is more of a preference thing.
-redhead cums inside the bartender but there is no physical reaction (hands tightening their grip on the blond, whole body reflex etc) or, groaning-moaning or excitement. Its like she is frigid and she just spilled some milk. Where is the orgasm?
I guess you missed both of them moaning and Triss's legs shaking and the bartender needing to catch her breath. I can only assume you watched the video on mute all three times.
-the cum and liquids magically vanish, did the underpants gnomes take up a cleaning job in taverns now?
If you want to focus on disappearing, reappearing cum in 3d animated porn, be prepared to drive yourself crazy on 95% of the content you consume when it goes through surfaces and disappears when a new pose happens.
-table is hilariously unstable and full of plates etc. distracts attention.
It's almost like Triss is somehow supernaturally enhanced and the cavern has a older and used rickety table. Triss was making an entire table full of food and objects shake when she was pounding Yennefer, causing a lot of it to fall off.
So unless you missed this, it isn't uncommon.
-This does not happen
Having the succubus magically grow cock and balls and fuck the hidden girl at the back seems pretty appealing. Fucking all her holes and mind-breaking her to become her tool. It could happen at another dimension, dream realm or something and the girl would wake up wet and willing more pliable as she does in the video where she hears, sees and masturbates. Of course its shown that the succubus is manipulating-encouraging her already.
This isn't really a criticism, it's more being upset your fanfiction didn't happen. Once again, preference. "I wish the blue demon would have sex with the girl in the back." isn't critique, it's just something you wished happen.
anybody notice anything else?
I notice, the majority of your criticisms aren't actual criticisms. A few sprinkled in there, but the majority come down to preferences, or stuff that actually happened in the video but you somehow missed despite supposedly having watched it 3 times. To each their own.
