- Jul 5, 2017
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Thank you for the praise.Good update with a nice progress for Harley, thank you for that, Jan!
For a bit of constructive feedback I would say that Lola was a bit rushed IMO. I think you intended to bring a new girl for getting more options through coming updates, and I appreciate it. But perhaps it would give them more meaning and "thrill" if you don't let them get too corrupted on their first update/introduction. I played DD the first time with v0.19 and it took me a while to get some scenes out of Yuki, Chrystal and the Dean, making it more satisfying during the process. Now we get our first "pretty little blonde" and five actions later she's sucking dick in the gym from three different guys. Although getting blackmailed by the MC she should have resisted more, I think.
I always welcome constructive criticism and I'm more then happy to discuss that, especially when it concerns stuff I can actually do something about.
So Lola, I added in October and I've been working towards adding onto her content, which means that the rapid progression we see in the game already, will probably be stretched out to the same pace of gradual build up we see with the other characters. Without it following some kind of formula or pattern, because I really want to avoid having the progress with one girl being to similar to the next one.
I'm always brainstorming more ways to integrate the serum role in the game, so as to give the game more variety without having to add on a shitload of work by redoing or remaking the scenes for each girl.Another point is the diminishing use of the serums. I think it's a nice idea from you to evolve this game around the idea of a chemistry teacher and his experiments with mind/body altering serums. Just use it more often! We have around one or two serums per girl, marking evolution steps for each of them. Why not add more? Giving Lola a serum and forcing her into some kinky scenes to blackmail her would have been a good chance to show some sex scenes AND keep your meta theme of the serums alive. Harley gets one serum and I'm pretty sure she will get more, considering her breast size leaving enough space for "development". Use it more often, to give your laboratory more meaning and make some story arcs more "believable".
Like say if we added another level of body morphing serum to one of the already changed girls, that would mean having to dedicate a whole month to make around 5-10 scenes with her. So I've been jotting down some ideas I have, how I can go about having some fun content involving the serums which wouldn't take up all my time.
But really thanks again for your thoughts, it's always good to hear from someone who has some ideas for this game.