Interesting start. Not sure about a few things. Maybe will keep an eye on it and see where it goes.
Renders are pretty good. Though I think the animations might need a bit of work, though they aren't as bad as some I have seen. A proof reader could be needed, I am guessing Dev's first language is not English, which happens a lot, that's fine, but there were a few things that I noticed.
My biggest dislike though: I didn't like how the lewd scene started out, it was borderline rape. I was uncomfortable and even though she agrees in the end, perhaps adding at least the 'sleep sex' tag as a warning. EDIT: Just saw someone else said 'molestation tag' and that might be even more appropriate. I dunno, maybe I am wrong, just felt quite uncomfortable with how that started.
Being able to change the MC's name would always be a plus to me, but I am fine with it as is. One question though, is this a kinetic novel or will there be choices to be made?