VN Ren'Py Distant Horizon [v0.6] [IziRider]

[katarne04]

nice game. something about deep space travel is always interesting. wonder how the new character(s) at v04b fit in this story.
I was gonna make alts to see how the MC's background would be in the story but I think i'm happy with what i got so far tbh. no need for me to go back.

keep up the good work & i'm eagerly waiting for the next update!

 

[OWSam000]

Anyone knows how to get the elevator scene in the gallery?

 

[sakuyas_mmaster]

Fascinating story. Did Skye imprint herself on MC? I hope we can reunite with Hanna. She's one sexy milf.

 

[catnapper]

My guess would be that the Babylon got "caught" in a wormhole and broke up when it re-emerged in what is now "dead space".
That would explain how it travelled so far - but does not explain how somebody knew to look for it there.
It also makes it more likely that other pods survive - which means Hannah can still be floating around in her pod.

 

[PPLayer]

Izirider

Thank you for creating this great SciFi adventure for us to enjoy
I found your work today & I'm playing it atm ... found an error though ...

... I did choose a custom surname for the MC, maybe this caused this error. However, just wanted to let you know.

*edit* ... found a second:

...it should be the MC who said this.
*edit*

Other than that, thank you also for sharing your project with us ... I look forward where your story leads us
... back to playing

 

[arynknight]

Hmm, this one has promise. Could use a bit of copy editing and I'm not sure how 'Di' is supposed to be pronounced (dih? die? dee? I would've just gone with DH) but I hit the end and wanted more so keep it up. Genuinely good story foundation, which is hard to find around here.

 

[Izirider]

PPLayer Thanks! I fixed both. The error in the first one was caused by the addition of an extra "t".

 

[OleJackRipper]

hm. . . .
the last game I looked into with a similar memory loss in space synopsis was a harem, but post memory loss wife ntr'd the mc.

I see the dev said 9.99% certain no ntr. . . .
I don't know man. . .

 

[H0rnyPot4to]

I might have a theory about what happened to Hannah. I think she "possibly" uploaded her imprint to Skye which it explained why one of her eyes are blue like Hannah's and bypassed the expiration date of the bioid.

 

[PapaPhat]

I might have a theory about what happened to Hannah. I think she "possibly" uploaded her imprint to Skye which it explained why one of her eyes are blue like Hannah's and bypassed the expiration date of the bioid.

Had that same thought, friend. Adventure ever on, Phat

 

[Assman_6969]

How about updating the game that is way better with far more time invested for not only the dev but the ones who are waiting for another update to add onto the rest of the playthroughs a player has made or the many times has done so? Rise of the Crime Lord is it seems anyway, far from wrapping up and had just finally gotten somewhere after the year long wait for the little update we did get and here it was months ago for that..... Here we have another multi project dev who is most like gonna drop the actual good game and start whatever mess is here I won't touch again if the other game isn't updated soon! Why does so many devs start something if they can't finish them? Not good if you want support but we will see..... i give it a 4 of 10 the 1st game gets finished

 

[UnfinishedSentenc]

Will be keeping an eye on this. Thanks, and good luck!

 

[TomUK]

I like this game so far, I prefer it when there is something to do other than just nailing everything that moves.

 

[L3z1l3]

Nice game.
At first I didn't like the MC and his wife with their attitude about the before start procedures.
Luckily later on MC behaved more professionally.

I really loved he flashback to how MC's relationship with his wife started. I really hope we will find wifey later on some way and she is not old or broken and she didn't change.

 

[Ghost'']

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[cate.archer]

Izirider : Thank you for that great and interesting update.
But, one mistake has happen despite the proofreader: The Name from one of the pirates changed several times through the conversation:
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What's his name now?
I hope that Skye will be one of the LI's...
Looking forward to the next update.
Greetings from Vienna
C.

 

[Zemax]

Nice

 

[Izirider]

cate.archer Thanks, I will fix that. His name Vosloo.

 

[glassware]

Thanks! I fixed both. The error in the first one was caused by the addition of an extra "t".

These are nitpicks in a porn game, but since 95% of the game is this backstory and worldbuilding, I'd say details matter, so:

• MC says the cryo survival rate is 85%. With 10 people, 8.5 survive. That means losing the first officer as mentioned wouldn't be a rarity that you avoid thinking about; you'd lose one of 5 bridge crew every other trip. Wife has taken six trips with a survival rate of 85% per trip, that's a 37% chance of survival total. That means as written, these people are all crazy and suicidal but don't act like it. There's like one line about it and it is in no way proportional to the insanely terrible odds that nobody in their right mind would accept. E.g. getting married and taking four such trips together, gives a 75% one or the other will die within four trips, so with one year outside cryo between trips they can count the number of awake years they expect to be married on one hand. Retiring to Vega would be all about "so we don't die". This even undermines MC's attitude towards worrying about wife in the future, since he should have come to terms with the likelihood of losing her long ago.
• Three minutes after telling us they're not speaking the same language due to translation nanites, one person points out that the word "ship" is still used to refer to two different concepts. Such a comment doesn't make sense if they know they're speaking different languages. (To be fair, Star Trek fucks this sort of thing up constantly.)

 

[MAD6999]

Cualquier actividad sexual, como compartir o lesbiana (si se incluye), será evitable, como en Rise of the Crime Lord.
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este es un buen desarrollador