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VN Ren'Py Domino Beach [Ep.1] [Mr Jet]

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Eonor

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Made a compressed Android port of Domino's Beach Episode 1 with scrappy's walkthrough mod.

Got some basic gestures loaded in: swipe up for save menu, swipe down to hide UI, swipe left to rollback and swipe right to skip. Save files are now stored in the Documents folder. This sometimes means that you may need to close and re-open the port after installing so the save folder is properly created.

Please let me know if you encounter any issues with the port and I'll see what I can do to get them sorted.

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NebulousShooter

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Banging body, but unfortunately she has a face not even an Incest AVN Mother could love.:cry: :Kappa:
I hope Mr Jet helps her out in future versions.
 
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Kond

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My top 3 girls for now are:
1 - Blake's girlfriend (sorry dude, but your days with her are numbered)
2 - Fiona (when she changed from her work uniform to normal clothes i was "DAMN")
3 - Carla (after the shower scene she surely isnt a shy one, not that im complaining tho)
 
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jish55

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You wanna know what sucks about this game? It's one of those games that's so good you want to know what happens next but are forced to wait for months for the next update.
 

ATM1234

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You wanna know what sucks about this game? It's one of those games that's so good you want to know what happens next but are forced to wait for months for the next update.
Well mrjet did say it was more of a hobby than a main. So I think that's the reason why he doesn't update much. Still it would nice to see snippets of the next update
 

NebulousShooter

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1720795240834.png Opinions on this, because I was about to compliment the improvement over BARS where it felt way too try hard, like someone that read a book and now tries to incorporate quotes and fancy words and expressions into their own work. You didn't know if the MC was supposed to be PervyPendejo#69, or Sherlock Holmes. Here it feels way more natural, which would be ironic if the AI dialogue sounds better :Kappa:
 

Ragnar

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MrJet is not a native speaker so shit happens. I find the writing in BARS serviceable but I'm not a native speaker either so eh. I like Domino premise about a dude down on his luck starting again in a new place, the beach theme, surf and so on.
 

NebulousShooter

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MrJet is not a native speaker so shit happens. I find the writing in BARS serviceable but I'm not a native speaker either so eh. I like Domino premise about a dude down on his luck starting again in a new place, the beach theme, surf and so on.
I am Eastern European as well, so I can kinda pick up on weird expression translations, I'm talking apart from that. To me it felt like someone that tries to write fancier than they can actually write. Domino doesn't have that problem at all so far, every dialogue flows way better and thats why I wanted to post about it, but then ran into that review mentioning ChatGPT and got me wondering.
 

Ragnar

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I am Eastern European as well, so I can kinda pick up on weird expression translations, I'm talking apart from that. To me it felt like someone that tries to write fancier than they can actually write. Domino doesn't have that problem at all so far, every dialogue flows way better and thats why I wanted to post about it, but then ran into that review mentioning ChatGPT and got me wondering.
https://f95zone.to/threads/domino-beach-ep-1-mr-jet.214365/post-14187369
 
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Skylaroo

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I don't have an issue either way whether the writing of a game is using ChatGPT or not (I'm aware Mr.Jet said no, but just speaking in general here), but what I have an issue is that someone wrote a review purely based on their assumption and then just snowballed from there.

It started from "I have a feeling that" (unsure assumption), then moved on to "Is anything from the game an original idea from the dev" (escalated exaggeration), and it finaly ended with "used/created" (objective fact). It makes zero sense to use personal speculation to review a product.
 

cxx

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I don't have an issue either way whether the writing of a game is using ChatGPT or not (I'm aware Mr.Jet said no, but just speaking in general here), but what I have an issue is that someone wrote a review purely based on their assumption and then just snowballed from there.
you wouldn't believe about amount of players who play game for 5 mins and then post review (usually bad) and leave thread and game.
 
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