Ren'Py Completed Dreaming of Dana [v0.099] [PTOLEMY]

[Penfold Mole]

Sir? What's that about?

You're a knight now. At least in this thread. Get used to it.

It doesn't really matter who's older. Don't think I gave it a thought. But they are close in age. 1 year or less between them.

Can't be much less than 1 year, I think. Unless they have different mothers or they're actually twins (which would be interesting, actually). Give their mom some recovery time after giving birth to one of them

I've been giving a lot of thought about what you said in regards flashbacks (f off about the Jessica and Maria stuff ).
And I think you're probably right. In the first chapter, during "memory lane". Chris could have a dream that night, remembering his first feelings. Go down memory lane with Dana the next day, that would trigger a second dream etc...

I'm thinking that his passion might be a little too abrupt in manifesting itself. That would give more of a slow burn to the first chapter. So, you're probably going to get your wish.

Nice, I've been waiting for that, too.

Thanks a lot again. For the game and being here. Sir!

 

[Rosa Melano]

Sir Ptolemy. Just wondering who is older. Dana or Chris

I like to believe Dana is the big sister so she have more attention of parents and that is why she become more mature and responsible and chris is younger and received less attention and that is why he become rebel, but dana saw this happening and tried to be closer and take care of chris, that is the reason why chris don't resent dana but don't feel affection for his father.

 

[netkeliye]

I like to believe Dana is the big sister so she have more attention of parents and that is why she become more mature and responsible and chris is younger and received less attention and that is why he become rebel, but dana saw this happening and tried to be closer and take care of chris, that is the reason why chris don't resent dana but don't feel affection for his father.

 

[styggtuff12]

anyone els having the glitch where if you click on the club the game thinks you're pressing the restaurant instead and opens that?

anyone know how to fix this?

 

[Balub]

@Ptolemy I sprinkled around some suggestions here and there, let me conclude them shortly and hopefully you can address them. They're not in need of any new CGs as far as I'm aware, but instead should help fleshing out the story:

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**Let me take this chance to tell you that I really like how you handle rape in this game:
We all cannot deny that taking or being taken unwillingly can be very erotic though it's of course completely amoral irl. I add "being taken" because I know of a few women (including an ex-gf) who are occasionally fantasizing about this kind of scenario.
Now irl you can do this with a partner via consensual role playing, I don't see why you shouldn't actually show it in-game though.
In actual fact we see this plenty and all over the place in adult games, but your game is afaik the only one that implements it fully (accepting it as a potential fantasy of the player) while at the same time letting the player know of the consequences of his behavior. It's one of the reasons why I think this game is not only "adult" but actually "mature".
So many other games belittle this kind of behavior or trivialize it, stating that every woman likes it and just doesn't want to admit it so you just have to rape her often enough.
Now I acknowledge that there are women who dream being desired and taken by their will and in games that don't take themselves too serious it's ok if this applies to all women.
Give the mature nature of your game though I really like that you stay realistic with this kind of thing and don't downplay it.

@styggtuff12 same happened to me: One picture was the night club, the next one the restaurant. When there were events though (e.g. meeting Jessica at the night club randomly) it seemed to work so I didn't bother.

You might wanna upload your save though so Ptolemy can have a look at it.

 

[Ptolemy]

@Ptolemy I sprinkled around some suggestions here and there, let me conclude them shortly and hopefully you can address them. They're not in need of any new CGs as far as I'm aware, but instead should help fleshing out the story:

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**Let me take this chance to tell you that I really like how you handle rape in this game:
We all cannot deny that taking or being taken unwillingly can be very erotic though it's of course completely amoral irl. I add "being taken" because I know of a few women (including an ex-gf) who are occasionally fantasizing about this kind of scenario.
Now irl you can do this with a partner via consensual role playing, I don't see why you shouldn't actually show it in-game though.
In actual fact we see this plenty and all over the place in adult games, but your game is afaik the only one that implements it fully (accepting it as a potential fantasy of the player) while at the same time letting the player know of the consequences of his behavior. It's one of the reasons why I think this game is not only "adult" but actually "mature".
So many other games belittle this kind of behavior or trivialize it, stating that every woman likes it and just doesn't want to admit it so you just have to rape her often enough.
Now I acknowledge that there are women who dream being desired and taken by their will and in games that don't take themselves too serious it's ok if this applies to all women.
Give the mature nature of your game though I really like that you stay realistic with this kind of thing and don't downplay it.

@styggtuff12 same happened to me: One picture was the night club, the next one the restaurant. When there were events though (e.g. meeting Jessica at the night club randomly) it seemed to work so I didn't bother.

You might wanna upload your save though so Ptolemy can have a look at it.

First, I'll look into the bug you mentioned. Thanks for that.

There are a lot of things to address.

1) The pill.
It's assumed that they are all on it. After all, it would be a baby fest without it.
Not a priority for me. Sorry.

2) Cuddling.
Again not a priority, at this time.

3)Andrea
It's already in the works. Will be a few patches from now.


You see, contrary to what you assume in your review ( I do read them ) the game is far from finished. After you chose your beard. There will be quite a lot of gameplay to go. Only Andrea is implemented for now.
The reason why I stop the game there is because the "scenery" will shift. And it will be far more linear from then on. Not meaning that there will be no choices, but no more randoms etc..... It will be in the line of a more traditional VN.
Otherwise I'd have to create a whole new set of randoms, since the old ones don't fit anymore once they have moved in. It would triple the size of the game, and I'd never finish it. I've started making this game in December, and I was planing to be finished by March. Funny huh? Now i'm hoping for January

So there is a lot more content that takes priority over these details. Like the Maria+Dana getaway that I'm working on right now.

 

[Balub]

@Ptolemy Thanks a lot for the reply! I'm sure you know best what's good for your game and what should take priority. I'm sure many of us know what comes out when creators try to please everybody with their games/films/whatever.

 

[syarnes]

Has the crash exit the game been fixed? last 3 versions have been effed!

 

[Gomly1980]

Mod request:
Direct path to Dana player exclusive to player (MC) by moving dependency from other NPC like Jessica and Maria. Having Dana more like each NPC ( Andrea ) open evening dating for Dana take her out to Bar, Dinner, Pool, Gym and Theater this could be the new dependency. For the weekend call to spend the weekend with Dana.. Thoughts?

Wouldn't work as part of the story but mods are player made so if that's what someone wanted to do that's up to them.

 

[Ero - Sennin]

1 - Dana's beauty when her hair is down looks like the exact representation of the Greek Goddess of Sex and Love "Aphrodite" (Roman - Venus)

2 - "Hot" This would have been the no.1 greatest of all adult games if the scenes are animated. What more if it is

3 - There is no need for corruption because your sister is already inlove with you in the first place but have to keep it secret so I don't understand why others still want a "corruption/rape" thing at the beginning. It's pointless to hypnotize/corrupt someone who's already inlove with you isn't it. You should be grateful to the author that he made it this way so you can get a hot/intimate scene earlier unlike in those other shitty/milking games that you are being treated as an asshole by your family then still not get an H-scene by 0.50 version or something.

4 - Hope to see some Sibling Wedding and impregnation at the end

 

[Ero - Sennin]

These boys are fierce



Sir? What's that about?

It doesn't really matter who's older. Don't think I gave it a thought. But they are close in age. 1 year or less between them.


@netkeliye I'm glad the story captivates people. I must be doing something right.



Someone has suggested a Dana only mod. I don't know how that would work storywise, but have at it if you want to.


@Maragdus

I've been giving a lot of thought about what you said in regards flashbacks (f off about the Jessica and Maria stuff ).
And I think you're probably right. In the first chapter, during "memory lane". Chris could have a dream that night, remembering his first feelings. Go down memory lane with Dana the next day, that would trigger a second dream etc...

I'm thinking that his passion might be a little too abrupt in manifesting itself. That would give more of a slow burn to the first chapter. So, you're probably going to get your wish.

Thanks for the feedback

Calling you that is a sign of respect to the game creator . I'm a Filipino and this is our culture. So it's an honor to have a conversation with you because we play your games. Hope you don't mind another question. Coz I'm not sure if the Dana getaway scene, Was Chris devirginized her or Chris dick just o big to fit inside? she feels pain but there is no blood and to think the she had a fiance before. just curious and want to understand the story more.

 

[CobraSGT]

Please Dana, be more famous, people need you.

 

[Maragdus]

Sir:biggrin: @Ptolemy first thank you for acknowledging our feedback.

(f off about the Jessica and Maria stuff ).

The Jessica,,suggestion'' i meant more as a cat(kitten) and mouse joke.Dom women are not my jam but i can distinguish between my personal preferences and actual issues.

On Maria it is what it is.Game wise i don't think you should change anything about her ore John them being whores and pising us of on occasion is part of their character and i don't hold it as a minus.

And one request ruin Milas father.:angel:

 

[netkeliye]

Sir? What's that about?

You're a knight now. At least in this thread. Get used to it.

I wouldn't go on and say @Ptolemy a knight, knights are stubborn in their own way he is not,
THE WAY I SEE HIM

Of coarse we being the minions standing in awe and admiring our bosses creation
(Before anyone say's anything, I call dibs on Kevin:biggrin

@netkeliye I'm glad the story captivates people. I must be doing something right.

Oh boy, the way I see your writing

Okay, Okay may be I over exaggerated about your writing but am damn serious about Groove and minion stuff

 

[Gomly1980]

Sir? What's that about? etc...

We knighted you, you should have got the memo ... and the armour ... and a horse, the horse is important.

Well, the armour is made of card and tinfoil because actual armour is pretty expensive and the horse is a small rocking thing but it's the thought that counts.

 

[DMC]

How to set up a scholarship for Andreas brother? Cuz she keeps repeating that she has enough humiliation and wont come on a date with me.

 

[macadam]

HOLLLY HELL !!

didnt realize that this game was this big :O more than 5Gb.. sweet mother of jesus send us more game like that XD

 

[dunhill]

I wouldn't go on and say @Ptolemy a knight, knights are stubborn in their own way he is not,
THE WAY I SEE HIM

Of coarse we being the minions standing in awe and admiring our bosses creation
(Before anyone say's anything, I call dibs on Kevin:biggrin




Oh boy, the way I see your writing

Okay, Okay may be I over exaggerated about your writing but am damn serious about Groove and minion stuff

well for a porn game its got a better story than most games out there.... and after play some of the other porn games out there you really appreciate a good story...

 

[DMC]

I did.When Andrea run, Chris said, "talk to Dana".Next day i did talk with her and she said "you should set a scholarship".But that's it, Andrea still refusing a date.I bet a miss something or need to do something more.

 

[bigbri]

I did.When Andrea run, Chris said, "talk to Dana".Next day i did talk with her and she said "you should set a scholarship".But that's it, Andrea still refusing a date.I bet a miss something or need to do something more.

You have to wait a few days after talking to Dana