EdgeOfShadow

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I've got to Ava first choice and there is corruptio/goodness, while the blackmail/love for students was explained really well, I have no idea what repercussions these stats will have. Please add some most basic explanation for things like this.

Edit: Finished the update and a bit further where there was another corruption/goodness choice, this time self explanatory and it also cleared up what the previous choice meant (Ava's corruption/player goodness, not her goodness).

Overall I must say that while the quality of the game is great in basically all aspects, the quantity is lacking, but that's to be expected with just a few months of development time.
P.S. With all this outcry about girls being sluts, having boyfriends etc. I was expecting more stuff in this regard, meanwhile all girls so far (maybe except of Sofia? unclarified) don't seem to have even gone to the first base with anyone before meeting MC. People here are way too sensitive.

Dang! All these updates and still no sex. Good work so far by dev, but come on, LETS GO!!!!!
There is actually a single sex scene.
 
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LazyBloodlines

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Dang! All these updates and still no sex. Good work so far by dev, but come on, LETS GO!!!!!
But... there are two sex scenes with Sophia :oops: (I mean if you count the MC doing Sophia twice in a row as two sex scenes.)

Is there actually lolis in this game? Lotta games that have the loli tag just have small chested teens not actual lolis.
I'm sorry. I'm from a literal culture. What do you mean by "actually lolis"? ACTUALLY underage girls? Then it's a big no-no. I'm just following the rule from the tag list. The Loli tag is meant to inform that there are girls with underdeveloped bodies. But prepubescent characters are prohibited. :unsure:
 

Larry2000

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Not sure about this one. The number of images uploaded of the MC have me thinking "Edge Lord" persona, plus the smoking is a major turn-off.
The edge lord part I can't help you with, but luckily MC isn't a love interest so you don't have to be turned on by him. :ROFLMAO:

On a serious note, I get it if it's a love interest Smoking, but why is the MC smoking a "major turn off?"
 

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I'm sorry. I'm from a literal culture. What do you mean by "actually lolis"? ACTUALLY underage girls? Then it's a big no-no. I'm just following the rule from the tag list. The Loli tag is meant to inform that there are girls with underdeveloped bodies. But prepubescent characters are prohibited. :unsure:
Yes that's what I meant. I just wanted to know since it's been used in both situations before.
 

SharkVampire

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At first look, I was thinking it would be "The Headmaster" that came to the dark side, considering violence, gangs and other themes. Well, it's hard to judge for now, too many things yet to implement. The writing is decent, there are a few typos here and there, even though they didn't bother me much, but I thought it should be mentioned to fix them eventually. Without enough events and activity in the headmaster's office, it's a bit boring compared to linear story what appear from time to time. Will see how it plays out in the future updates, hope it will provide better experience. I also would like to see a choice between bad and good actions more morally complex. More gray choices where is no obvious evil or good sides of conflict.

For now the game mostly lean to building a wide harem of various girls, not that is a bad thing, just I prefer it more when girls are hard to achieve and when not all of them okay with sharing. But, I can let it slide, because, so far, I intrigued about where the things will go. And I like the darker side of this game and that the hero not that simple and has its own baggage of problems to deal with. The fact that the main character is essentially struggling with himself is an interesting concept, that we not see that often, and that's why it is very intriguing. I would even like to add one suggestion from myself, it might sound rough, since is literally came to my mind after playthrough, but maybe you find this concept worthy. At the moment, our hero is a natural badass, and it seems unlikely that he will find serious obstacles in the future. It would be an interesting solution to make his only powerful enemy his alternate ego, which would want to take complete control over his body. It might happen after serious fuck up from the MC side, so alter ego would come to conclusion that, they will die soon if he continues to be in charge. You could make it so that his alter ego starts deceiving him at first, and while we - players, probably could figure it out, the MC shouldn't (at least there shouldn't be always an option to choose) since he is already deep in this mental issues. Next he can start openly blackmail, if MC will decline his suggestion or ignore him for too long, his alter ego could take control over the MC body, for a short period of time, and do some nasty things with girls, or he can refuse to help us in some difficult situation (which won't end nice) that will require his fighting skills or devious mind.
The MC will need either start taking pills (he can steal them), and get rid of any dark influence, but also lose any help from him, until he stops taking them, or earn favors, agreeing with alter ego proposals, and spend them to make decisions that he don't like. As result of this idea, the decisions won't be that simple: choose a route, which you want to go - bad/good. Because you will need to take into consideration what your alter ego want, as well.

At this point I think that's all, let's see what will be in the next updates.
 
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LazyBloodlines what's the difference between v0.4.1a and v0.4.3b that's available on ?
 

LazyBloodlines

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LazyBloodlines what's the difference between v0.4.1a and v0.4.3b that's available on ?
Just some small changes to the code, making it more efficient. Fixed a few minor bugs. Changed the menu screen. Not worth the re-download.

Since the game's already been updated twice on f95 in the same week, I didn't want to abuse the uploaders. :p
But there'll be new content in a week or so.

I'm adding it to the gofile paste, though.
 
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jsmith27x

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So far I mostly like what I've seen with this. My biggest issue is with the daily sandbox element where the way to avoid clicking on options that don't do anything is to talk to my other self who then tells me which option to choose, which still seems like unnecessary clicking. It would be preferred to either have the other self just automatically suggest the next action at the point of reaching the sandbox choice screen, or take the whole element away as more VN style offering only the options that advance the story line, and doing something like having a laptop to click on to check grades, finances, or upgrade the school.

So far, that's not too bad, but it just irritates me to perform an action. Check what my other self says to do next. Perform next action, when it would be so much easier to just be able to do what comes next, either by being told up front, or having options be more limited.

The more linear story parts were enjoyable. I'm surprised how immersed I actually was in the actual plotline unfolding, and found that to be the most enjoyable part so far.

I like the idea that Sophia and Ava might be quite a bit into each other. I definitely would like to see more of those two getting closer, and I mean as an actual relationship, not just sex.

So far I like Ashley, Asuka, and Ava most.

Minor error I noticed was in a part where it said something like, "his trust on you increased." I forget who it was specifically, but it really should read that his trust IN you or trust FOR you or trust TOWARDS you increased. ON just doesn't really work in English. Not a big deal, but a little awkward.

I was a little bummed out to reach the end. More please.
 
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Thuviel

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Hey Dev!
I didnt play this game, (for now) but read a comments, and very suprise how u know handle this, and give a feedback all people.
Congratulations to you, and all respect.
I try this game and we see.
Oh, +1 :
" I'm sorry. I'm from a literal culture." - Oh fuckin Yeah! Me too, in my language. this is rare gem these days. :) GL
 
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lhucio

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I have deleted my comment because I did not want to discourage the developer.

I will only say as constructive criticism, that if you are going to make a "realistic" game, try to make the situations realistic, otherwise the immersion of the player disappears completely.
 
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SharkVampire

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Let's see, I've been playing for almost no time, but the scene where you meet kayle and the boyfriend makes absolutely NO SENSE.

After rescuing her from the white-haired thug, she grabs the protagonist's arm, we walk next to the boyfriend, the boyfriend greets her and she completely ignores him, and goes with the protagonist to a building, far a bit weird, but ok I believe it, you can think that the girl likes bad guys, this is a sex-game and sex is coming...

She sits down, you calm her down and tell her that she is safe and that she can stay there and suddenly she has a panic attack? AFTER GOING TO AN UNKNOWN HOUSE WITH A STRANGER?

I hope things get a bit better, because if they continue like this the situations are not going to make any sense and I had high hopes for this game...
That's the only thing you find weird in the game?
The whole brain surgery episode was on the whole level above that.:ROFLMAO:
He was carrying her like a sack of potatoes, knowing what kind of trauma she could have, it's just a super level of plot armor that she survived that. More than that, in one scene there was like a bunch of people in the train, after a few punches to the bad guy, he's returning to the train, and it's empty. The train station also empty, and the street (which wasn't showed, but obviously he needed to bring her to his car or to his home) and of course there are no cameras.

Also, about that scene with the couple, there were like 4 thugs and one of them even carried a gun which, he obviously wouldn't be afraid to use, and the MC called that guy a pussy? Seriously? The boyfriend was like a student, I think? How the MC imagined him defend his girl? Turn Rambo mod, try to punch one of them and immediately die in process? After the MC returned with girl, the author, of course, showed us the weird reaction from the guy, to show him spineless, so we won't be pity him after we get our way with his girl. I don't really like this porn game trope, when all the other male characters dating girls are always the bad guys, from whom the player won't have the shame to steal the girl. Honestly, considering the dark theme of this game, I would prefer if this scene was reworked, and the guy could be shown not as pathetic, but as a regular person, that tried to distract thugs from his girl (like he could be screaming for help while command her to run), but failed anyway and so after the MC rescued them, he could start making plans to steal his girl or leave them alone.

But I can close my eyes on these things, for now I'm fine with the writing in other scenes. I'm also curious where the things will go. Maybe if such situations become the norm for this game, I will drop it, but for now I'm staying. Plus there are not that many games with dark themes, and MC who have deep inner problems with his head, I'm interested to see how he will get out of different situations with such problems.
 
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