I managed to complete first stage of this game and would like to share my impressions. To do this, since I didn't play this game much i'll try experimental "stream of consciousness" approach.
Ok, so what do we have here, another lewd text based rpg, lets give it a spin, how do i install it? Lets try online version first: ok, turn your phone to album orientation yadayada, *turning a phone*, oh nice, it completely changes what it shows when i rotate it, that's new, quite neat gotta say, but that address bar in my browser steals too much space, how do i fullscreen? To install properly press "add to home screen", ok, lets try it, spinner go brrrr... is this it? Where it is again, lets find it on homescreen like it says, *minimizing browsing, searching, searching* ah here it is, lets try pressing it, oh it is fullscreen now, very good, this is probably most elegant installation i ever seen, don't need to install any apk, and don't need to do my usual magic to open up html on my phone like with all twine games before, cool to see, ok lets start the game, ok, UI tips, very good, ah so this is our MC? Quite hot i like her, can i pick slutty elfboy instead so i can relate with MC more? No? unlucky, anyway chick it is, picking extra stat point, hmm, oh here is perception, it would probably let me see more content, right? Lets go with this one. ok, here is my mentor, she wants something from me, ok, very good, ok we need to rape the human from the get go, that i can do, hmm, its your run-of-the-mill human character who's also futa, why is it futa if its "regular human" that's just weird, no? w8 i saw futa switch in options before, lets try pressing it, does it do anyting at all? ah i need to advance to next text line for it to have an effect, ok, i wish it would refresh at once, but whatever, oh, there is art, interesting how does it look with futa turned on, lets try, hmm, it looks the same? ok, lets turn it off then, w/e, rape is complete, what's now, ah there is sexy deertaur futa, hi sexy, can i suck your dick? No? not interested? I see, i hope you'll be in a mood later on, what about mentor chick, can we already fuck? no, questions it is, don't see any "sex" word in them, i'll ask her later, lets go up, what do we have here, statue, ok lets inspect here, ah, some lore.... more lore, ok.... even more lore, when does it stop? ok what up with flower? ah, consumable, lets save it for later, oh, first encounter, who's this, some ugly ass worm chick, asking me to fuck, ok, know my kindness, oh, it deposited eggs in my ass, eww, nice, who's next, oh, some sexy futa batgirls, cool, cool, w8, didn't i turn off futa in options? Yeah i did, but they are still futa? well, actually i'm ok with it since it batgirls may be its normal for them, oh, they pumped me full of cum in all orifices, nice, lets find more stuff to fuck, w8, do those eggs in my ass soaking cum from my ass, that's probably bad thing right? i think i need my cum, may be fucking that worm was a mistake after all, anyway, what do we have here ah hot mushroom chicks wanna fuck too, and they are futa again, well it seems that futa switch i turned off doesn't do too much after all, but i can't fuck them, no pheromones you say? ok lets fight them instead, ok turn based combat i saw it before i know what to do, hmm, they have resistance to everything thats strange way to design your enemies, shouldn't they have a weakness or two? Anyway lets try to cast stuff on this one, ok, ok, oh it fortified itself, its resistances go up, means i'll just clobber another one meanwhile, hmm, they are awfully tough and they are regenerating too, and every two turns they became fortified, what's up with these chicks, my hp is running out, w8 i have some consumables in my backpack right? oh i can't use them, cause i needed to pick stuff to put in my belt, ok my bad, we're losing this one then, rejoice we'll be fucking on your terms then! hmm, did they just kill me and i died? in porn game? in the first fight? AT TUTORIAL STAGE? ok, i see, its one of those "harcore" "unforgiving" ones, luckily there is autosave, so i'll just load right before the fight and equip my stuff properly... w8, why is my latest autosave at character creation? Are you kidding me? Why do i need autosave if it never saves? ok... i know where to go, i can get there very fast, ah, it is this worm again, i don't want it to egg me again, i'll just fight it... HOLY FUCK WHY DOES IT HAVE 1 MILLION HP? i thought it is default difficulty, i didn't change it for sure, ok, what did it just do, it burrowed? I'll need to kill tendrils first right? ok, here it go, wtf did worm just charged on me and dealt bazzilion dmg? It seems we can't win this fight, without consumables, but i didn't pick any yet, i'll have to load and go right first i'll pick some consumables and then will kick its ass for sure! *loading again* hmm, why do i have half my hp? I never noticed that i didn't have full bar from the start, who does that? are you trolling me? ok, going to heal with consumables first going right, ah fight again before i can heal, nice, very fair, its mushroom chicks again, at least i can fuck myself through this time, ok, i'm too tilted to read through this h-scene i'll belive you that you had fun, ok, got my cum and my consumables, i'll use one at once and put another one on belt, could be more but i think we can now win that worm, ok, saving before fight because autosave can't do this for me, here i go, take this you maggot! oh, its burrowing, i think i have few turns before it charges i think it'll telegraph its attack if i read hint carefully, hell no it doesn't telegraph, it just charges on you like that, ok take it you worm, great and now i missed my spell, i don't think we can win this anymore, i'll load and try again, ok, take this and this, its burrowed, i'll just ignore tendrils and guard at once they would probably disappear any way if i kill worm's main body, right? nice it charged we can continue to beat him up, would you kindly die already, i have to drink my last consumable ok, we did it, it's dying, great, tendrils didn't disappear, we have to kill them too, fuck, i'll save my cum and will just punch them to death, hmm my hp is running out but i think we got this, there is only one left, and i missed? MISSED AGAIN, ARE YOU SHITTING ME??? ok, we won, but i have only 14 hp left, anyway lets save and advance, ok, batgirls it is, lets fuck these, ok, it bites me and I DIED AGAIN? RIGHT DURING H-SCENE???!!! REEEEEEE!!!! ok, loading again, lest go find some more consumables, ok there is some food, lets eat, cool, now i can finally not die to h-scene goddamit, ok lets skip this scene, yeye, very sexy, very nice, good, i'm full of cum and have some food may be i can actually complete this tutorial stage after all, ok, lets go use that recipe for quest potion, ok, hmm, why can i put it on belt, isn't it quest item? anyway, lets go use it, oh, its sexy earth golem chick, ok, lets fuck her with pussy, cause i still have some room there, hmm, i have to click this little second option, lets try to press it with my fatfingers, damn, i missed it up on release anyway and now it fucks me in ass instead, couldn't you just do interval between lines bigger so people could actually press what they intend? anyway this scene is hot, but its not what i wanted, i'll just load and try to press what i want this time, ok i managed to hit option in between, but that wasn't easy, can i make font bigger? yeah, i can but it doesn't really help to hit stuff, its still hard, anyway, i think i'm almost done with this tutorial, where do i go now? hmm, troglodyte and i can't fuck it, only fight or run, lets see what it is about, oh it looks scary, i'll load and go another way, hmm, what is there left to do, oh, it crystal, i can finally pick it, yeah, i did it, what now, do i have to fight with deertaur chick? I would rather fuck, w8, i don't have pheromones anymore? And i can't fuck her if i choose to fight her? What up with that, that's not how porn games work *grumbling* *loading* i have this flower that i found i will give me some pheromones, ok, done, but it is not enough? Are you for real? that's only scene i wanted to see most! fuck where can i get more of these pheromones, oh, there is statue lets donate some cum and i get what? Some useless blessing? no pheromones? fuck i hate it, ok, lets try fighting those troglodytes, oh, this new spell is very handy it is actually op, i can win this without using my consumables, nice, after fight i got some pheromones, i think i have enough now... and yes, this is sexy deertaur scene, cool, cool, not wsan level, but hot enough, and that's it, tutorial is done. phew, that was stressful, i don't think i struggled that much in porn game ever, not to mention that it was tutorial stage.
TLDR:
1. please make it so futa switch refreshes current text line at once, so you don't need to advance to see its effect.
2. please make interval between clickable lines bigger so its easier to press on mobile.
3. please make autosave work before and after battles.
Verdict:
Looks very promising overall, very convenient installation, neat ideas and scenes, but gameplay hates you and wants you dead ASAP, and i'm not sure that's good thing in a porn game.
