I'm just going to leave my input here..
1. Spelling errors - I'm not really going to be picky about this due to not everybody's primary language is English.
2. I don't understand Japanese - Yet again, not going to be picky here. It actually adds at least some flavor to the text.
3. Emotional rollercoaster much? - Once more, not being picky or saying this is bad. Actually made the story better because it allows the player to connect with the character(s).
4. Am I the only one that had a few good laughs? - Any game, doesn't matter what kind it is, that can make me chuckle or smile, then that's a star from me.
Overall: I enjoyed the story. The characters are nice and for fucking once we're not seeing the same damn overused characters over and over again.
Personal opinion: Fuyu, Shina, Akina, Neko and Tomoe <3. Rest can fuck off. XD lol