VN Ren'Py Abandoned Elysion [Ep.5 v0.30] [palemaster]

[Look-see]

And dave was practicaly noone that time like mc sayed...

forgot about that. hmmm that actually would've at least put them on the same level. but then it would be less likely for him to have something to threaten MC with unless he was just plain psycho.

 

[pochops]

possible but unlikely. mainly because as far as we know. the MC isnt really anyone who needs to be targeted. he doesnt have money or inluence.so in that case it would be. why would the MC be a target in the first place? the only way i can see it is. Dave wanted MC's wife and told her if she didnt go through with it MC would be ...hurt?

but again i feel like that would take the story in a different direction then what it is at the moment. and so far the Club seems to be the main focus. unless somehow the club has said influence and MC somehow takes over than takes on David but i feel thats a hell of a stretch.

Doesn't have to be the mc. Wasn't the ex-wife's own family rich and influential? Anyway, this is all theorizing for fun. But if this was the standard cheating wife trope, why even include her disappearance in the plot? Maybe I'm reading too much into this and the sudden appearance of Dave. But I wouldn't be surprised if Julia going on trhip was being lured into something that maybe the ex-wife has endured for years. Do you have a theory on the wife's disappearance?

 

[pochops]

You seem really invested in this thing, are you the dev Kidding. I think you are a patreon at least, but honestly, better to cut my loses short here and just ignore the game from now on

PEACE

Ha! Definitely don't have the tech skills. Just have a lot of time on my hands this past month. Accrued vacation time and I've been binging on these games trying to select a few to support.

 

[laeg]

forgot about that. hmmm that actually would've at least put them on the same level. but then it would be less likely for him to have something to threaten MC with unless he was just plain psycho.

Still how realistic u see that for example u will go to your coleque and tell her that she will sleep with u or u will harm his husband?
Not sugesting anything it is just example.
Do u think that she will accept do that or she will go to police and than sue u after her husband will break your nose?

 

[Look-see]

Doesn't have to be the mc. Wasn't the ex-wife's own family rich and influential? Anyway, this is all theorizing for fun. But if this was the standard cheating wife trope, why even include her disappearance in the plot? Maybe I'm reading too much into this and the sudden appearance of Dave. But I wouldn't be surprised if Julia going on trhip was being lured into something that maybe the ex-wife has endured for years. Do you have a theory on the wife's disappearance?

thats actually a good point. and no i dont have one but if she was in fact a gold digger then my guess it would be something like. daughter was at an age to take care of herself or knew MC would and now ex can live more freely. however this game does seem to have some mystery to it so maybe its not that simple. worst case scenario she was in fact being used by dave and ending up dying and as such dave wanted a replacement and Julia is there. but i feel like that would be to dark. more likely if Ex is in fact a slut then the mention of her sister was mentioned to dave a while ago and now theres an opportunity to grab her also.

and i agree theorizing is fun if also pointless at the moment but at least in shows interest in the game and story.

 

[Look-see]

Still how realistic u see that for example u will go to your coleque and tell her that she will sleep with u or u will harm his husband?
Not sugesting anything it is just example.
Do u think that she will accept do that or she will go to police and than sue u after her husband will break your nose?

isnt that actually a pretty common porn cliche for blackmail?

like "blow me or i'll send this nude to all your family and friends" and from there it develops into sex. and in reality nowadays it wouldnt work cause like...its just a nude. and after you send it pretty sure it would count as revenge porn or at least you could report to police saying you were being blackmailed but in porn it happens alot.

 

[laeg]

isnt that actually a pretty common porn cliche for blackmail?

like "blow me or i'll send this nude to all your family and friends" and from there it develops into sex. and in reality nowadays it wouldnt work cause like...its just a nude. and after you send it pretty sure it would count as revenge porn or at least you could report to police saying you were being blackmailed but in porn it happens alot.

didnt tought about it like that but u r right...still it it is realy low cliche wich idk if wil made her see in better ligh

 

[Look-see]

didnt tought about it like that but u r right...still it it is realy low cliche wich idk if wil made her see in better ligh

well the good news is you dont HAVE to pursue her. but yeah unless we know the whole story its hard to tell where to place her.

but i dont think theres alot of help because it doesnt say the person she cheated on the second time was with the same guy. although it could have been.

but apparently her family wasnt surprised she dissapeared so only time will tell.

 

[Look-see]

also i just realised. ppl use the Mc's last name alot so unless the name has some significat point to the story. it would be nice if we could make that custom as well.

 

[palemaster]

also i just realised. ppl use the Mc's last name alot so unless the name has some significat point to the story. it would be nice if we could make that custom as well.

His last name has no real significance in the story other than match with the greek elements of the game. I'll try to make it customizable in the next update.

 

[Look-see]

His last name has no real significance in the story other than match with the greek elements of the game. I'll try to make it customizable in the next update.

i knew Greco was greek but didnt pay much attention to it since not alot of greek stuck out to me. then look up elysion and apparently thats greek to so theres that. but in my defense not like i know any greek related things except famous mythology

 

[Tkoyama]

Man, what a game!

 

[Ursus4321]

[QUOTE = "palemaster, publicación: 5121165, miembro: 858629"]
It may not be to your liking, but it clarifies


That and teasing Preston when you talk to him. If Preston is not mentioned in your game, that means he did not speak to Julia when he left.

[/DATE]

You are obviously the author and you know everything. But forgive me if I found it odd that someone who just leaves walks away without a skirt or panties. It's a misunderstanding apparently, but I think the evidence was there. I did not choose the option that led me to ntr and that is why I was surprised, but if you say that nothing happened I will have to believe it

 

[dolfe67]

like "blow me or i'll send this nude to all your family and friends" and from there it develops into sex. and in reality nowadays it wouldnt work cause like...its just a nude.

There is a lot of stories like that on the internet, happened in real life nowadays. Though the blackmailed girls are generally young

 

[DA22]

No offence but 3 things.
1. correct no one exspects a girl in a harem to be a virgin never said they did what I said was before they end up in a harem.
(and I have seen people in other Harem game threds try to demand pritty much exactly that so not pure nonsense.)

2. I do agree with you to a point but the option to view would be better since some players would (why i don't know) want to veiw. than when we are being made to view without choice like with some games.

3. not altogether sure why you even quote me to start with.
And then write as if I was the one asking about purists and not trying to explain it.

Again no offence intended.

To 1. There are a few people who do indeed only want to romance a virgin in their games, for those I guess that is more like a strong fetish like other people have a fetish for lesbian sex, MMF, rape and such. Most of us do not care to much about that as such, but see 2.

To 2. The thing is that there are different ways to play a game. More immersive ways and others love to play from an NPC point of view. Now especially in romance games and harems where you need to romance the women in question or even if in one path you need to, for the immersive players a LI has to be somewhat romanceable also in real life. So for example if the LI is into things like getting dped by two or more guys, bestiality, femdom, heavy submission to males, cheating and so on, that would make a woman not someone you would want to be in a relation with in reality that would have an impact. Even if she is further a great person that you do not mind as a normal friend it starts to clash with how you perceive her in game and will to want to romance her.

If those afore-mentioned things only happen in past and there is a story why the woman in question changed her interests and that is somewhat believable it is something that might not block those players to go for her. When it is shown in game though or heavily implied she has those actions in present or likely to still have in present even if you can skip the scene as such, it still shows the woman in question as having those interests and hard to romance or even unromanceable for those players. This is one of the reasons why it is so hard to make a game that both appeals to the more immersive players and those that like third person action and why they so often lead to shitstorms.

For me I have no problem with fact in itself if you treat Julia or anyone else like shit she may decide to have sex with others, though I prefer it not to be shown. If she has sex just willy nilly just cause she wants it while starting to build or is in a love relation with MC or is shown to be very much into fetishes that I am not into like MMF then that does make that character unromanceable for me and if that goes for too many of the female LI's then the game is just not for me or at least not the romance/harem paths.

That last is fair enough, it is the devs game and story after all and up to him to which kind players he wants his game to appeal, but if that is partly those more immersive or romantic players it is wise to be very clear and keep in mind that building up the other dick parts too much and every controversial fetish added and shown in game will lose you players on the one side or at best does nothing for those players while you add content other players will love.

I am always glad it is up to the devs to balance that and not me if they go the way of adding both types of content and focusing on that, but it is important devs are aware of that fact and if he/she wants to go much to the less immersive side he tells the more romance or harem players the game is not for them.

 

[palemaster]

Great start let's of potential, however a few things you should consider. 1stly explain what each stat does. Sympathy, Authority, and Love
Give us a better understanding what's going to happen with each of them. 2ndly since the game is named after a stingers club, might wanna include a bit more about that in the description. Based on the description your likely to attract a type of player who isn't necessarily into the content your providing.

Anyways I can't wait for more.

Thanks for your suggestions. When I first made and published the game, my goal was to maintain the mystery around the club until it appears in the game. But you are right. I'll update the description as soon as possible.
As for the stats, I'm already writing some kind of tutorial that will explain more about then.

 

[MrFriendly]

Thanks for your suggestions. When I first made and published the game, my goal was to maintain the mystery around the club until it appears in the game. But you are right. I'll update the description as soon as possible.
As for the stats, I'm already writing some kind of tutorial that will explain more about then.

I'm really enjoying this game, though, to be honest, it is not typical for me. My only real complaint is that I dislike how many relationships the MC already is in (I prefer being able to make those decisions) and that he is such a despicable person (who cheats on everyone left and right). In my opinion the fact that the former wife also cheated on him is par for the course. Not that anyone "deserves" to be cheated on but I have no sympathy for him.

Anyway, look forward to future updates, hope the MC continues to fuck up his life more as it is quite entertaining.

 

[brunotsilvares]

i need help to solve


I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
File "renpy/common/00start.rpy", line 205, in script call
call _gl_test
File "renpy/common/00gltest.rpy", line 387, in script
$ __gl_test()
File "renpy/common/00start.rpy", line 205, in script call
call _gl_test
File "renpy/common/00gltest.rpy", line 387, in script
$ __gl_test()
File "renpy/common/00gltest.rpy", line 387, in <module>
$ __gl_test()
File "renpy/common/00gltest.rpy", line 317, in _m1_00gltest__gl_test
_gl_performance_test()
File "renpy/common/00gltest.rpy", line 342, in _gl_performance_test
ui.interact(suppress_underlay=True, suppress_overlay=True)
AttributeError: 'SWDraw' object has no attribute 'scale_fast'

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
File "renpy/bootstrap.py", line 326, in bootstrap
renpy.main.main()
File "renpy/main.py", line 617, in main
run(restart)
File "renpy/main.py", line 148, in run
renpy.execution.run_context(True)
File "renpy/execution.py", line 922, in run_context
context.run()
File "renpy/common/00start.rpy", line 205, in script call
call _gl_test
File "renpy/common/00gltest.rpy", line 387, in script
$ __gl_test()
File "renpy/common/00start.rpy", line 205, in script call
call _gl_test
File "renpy/common/00gltest.rpy", line 387, in script
$ __gl_test()
File "renpy/ast.py", line 922, in execute
renpy.python.py_exec_bytecode(self.code.bytecode, self.hide, store=self.store)
File "renpy/python.py", line 2218, in py_exec_bytecode
exec(bytecode, globals, locals)
File "renpy/common/00gltest.rpy", line 387, in <module>
$ __gl_test()
File "renpy/common/00gltest.rpy", line 317, in _m1_00gltest__gl_test
_gl_performance_test()
File "renpy/common/00gltest.rpy", line 342, in _gl_performance_test
ui.interact(suppress_underlay=True, suppress_overlay=True)
File "renpy/ui.py", line 298, in interact
rv = renpy.game.interface.interact(roll_forward=roll_forward, **kwargs)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3006, in interact
repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, pause=pause, pause_start=pause_start, **kwargs)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3516, in interact_core
self.draw_screen(root_widget, fullscreen_video, (not fullscreen_video) or video_frame_drawn)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 2380, in draw_screen
renpy.display.draw.draw_screen(surftree)
File "renpy/display/swdraw.py", line 869, in draw_screen
if self.scale_fast:
AttributeError: 'SWDraw' object has no attribute 'scale_fast'

Windows-7-6.1.7601-SP1
Ren'Py 7.4.1.1270
Elysion Ep.3v0.2
Mon Feb 15 15:31:25 2021

 

[MrFriendly]

i need help to solve

View attachment 1038249
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
File "renpy/common/00start.rpy", line 205, in script call
call _gl_test
File "renpy/common/00gltest.rpy", line 387, in script
$ __gl_test()
File "renpy/common/00start.rpy", line 205, in script call
call _gl_test
File "renpy/common/00gltest.rpy", line 387, in script
$ __gl_test()
File "renpy/common/00gltest.rpy", line 387, in <module>
$ __gl_test()
File "renpy/common/00gltest.rpy", line 317, in _m1_00gltest__gl_test
_gl_performance_test()
File "renpy/common/00gltest.rpy", line 342, in _gl_performance_test
ui.interact(suppress_underlay=True, suppress_overlay=True)
AttributeError: 'SWDraw' object has no attribute 'scale_fast'

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
File "renpy/bootstrap.py", line 326, in bootstrap
renpy.main.main()
File "renpy/main.py", line 617, in main
run(restart)
File "renpy/main.py", line 148, in run
renpy.execution.run_context(True)
File "renpy/execution.py", line 922, in run_context
context.run()
File "renpy/common/00start.rpy", line 205, in script call
call _gl_test
File "renpy/common/00gltest.rpy", line 387, in script
$ __gl_test()
File "renpy/common/00start.rpy", line 205, in script call
call _gl_test
File "renpy/common/00gltest.rpy", line 387, in script
$ __gl_test()
File "renpy/ast.py", line 922, in execute
renpy.python.py_exec_bytecode(self.code.bytecode, self.hide, store=self.store)
File "renpy/python.py", line 2218, in py_exec_bytecode
exec(bytecode, globals, locals)
File "renpy/common/00gltest.rpy", line 387, in <module>
$ __gl_test()
File "renpy/common/00gltest.rpy", line 317, in _m1_00gltest__gl_test
_gl_performance_test()
File "renpy/common/00gltest.rpy", line 342, in _gl_performance_test
ui.interact(suppress_underlay=True, suppress_overlay=True)
File "renpy/ui.py", line 298, in interact
rv = renpy.game.interface.interact(roll_forward=roll_forward, **kwargs)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3006, in interact
repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, pause=pause, pause_start=pause_start, **kwargs)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 3516, in interact_core
self.draw_screen(root_widget, fullscreen_video, (not fullscreen_video) or video_frame_drawn)
File "renpy/display/core.py", line 2380, in draw_screen
renpy.display.draw.draw_screen(surftree)
File "renpy/display/swdraw.py", line 869, in draw_screen
if self.scale_fast:
AttributeError: 'SWDraw' object has no attribute 'scale_fast'

Windows-7-6.1.7601-SP1
Ren'Py 7.4.1.1270
Elysion Ep.3v0.2
Mon Feb 15 15:31:25 2021

Are you using a mod? If so it is the mods fault. I just played through the game from the beginning multiple times with no issues.

 

[brunotsilvares]

Are you using a mod? If so it is the mods fault. I just played through the game from the beginning multiple times with no issues.

I'm not using any mod