- Jul 6, 2019
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Good game. I really like the story so far and the models are all great. I especially like the platinum blond Adele (but am sad that she may have been designated as the slut of the story 
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I also find it interesting that the title of this game is the name of the shady club (as opposed to the name of the Spa) and look forward to see where it goes.
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A note of caution though:
Choices and multiple paths are good, but there is such a thing as too many - especially this early in the game. For example, just for Yumi alone, there are already 4 scenarios to write/render for (MC late for the meeting, MC keeping it on the DL, MC on time Dom, MC on time loving). Many a game have been abandoned by devs getting overwhelmed by having to code, render and ring fence a multitude of different branches intersecting with a multitude of other different branches e.g. The dev of Dirty Pool had to give up on the game and start a new less ambitious one as did the Dev of The Manifest (though in the latter case he came back to it after about a year and half doing another game).
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Anyways, best of luck with the game.
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I also find it interesting that the title of this game is the name of the shady club (as opposed to the name of the Spa) and look forward to see where it goes.
...
A note of caution though:
Choices and multiple paths are good, but there is such a thing as too many - especially this early in the game. For example, just for Yumi alone, there are already 4 scenarios to write/render for (MC late for the meeting, MC keeping it on the DL, MC on time Dom, MC on time loving). Many a game have been abandoned by devs getting overwhelmed by having to code, render and ring fence a multitude of different branches intersecting with a multitude of other different branches e.g. The dev of Dirty Pool had to give up on the game and start a new less ambitious one as did the Dev of The Manifest (though in the latter case he came back to it after about a year and half doing another game).
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Anyways, best of luck with the game.
