In a way, train mine too, and I appreciate that you have seen my view like this, as I realized from Dorfnutter's post that apparently a discussion close to this one does not have a positive track record and I would never have wanted to bring it up that way.I couldn't agree more with your post and knowing that Caribdis works mostly solo on his game, I don't even know how long an update would take him if he was multi-branching like some others AVN, given the quality he puts into it.
Overall I think it's a great AVN even with a "linear" story with well-written characters and some effort in building some kind of "lore"(with a lot of references too). The story has everything it takes to be a good Harem AVN (because despite the "solo" endings the game is clearly structured like that) which is a well-balanced story between humor/seriousness/obscenity.
(and thank you for your long posts it helps me train my English for my thesis and my exams)
And in short I'll still prefer a good one, not just a good one great linear story as the author intended, and him being able to bring his best, and also realize his own improvement since his previous works.
than he is going to do something with several ramifications and it can become mediocre not being able to work well on the whole or forcing himself to something that would consume him more. In this case, it is much better for him to be able to bring his vision, so that everyone can appreciate and develop all the characters well for his entire audience, also in the way he would like, as much as he has problems with harens, it is only when they are not well developed, and here this is far from being the case.
Giving to see a considerable improvement in the treatment of the characters and feeling that everyone is contributing equally at least, where in his previous work once in a Life time it was possible to notice + only the two sisters, who were in fact the main focus and the others in the harem they may have been sidelined, and not have had a function other than existing.
and that's all already amazing and if it's just one person actually alone having to do all that I just hope that everything can work out and he can just get better so he can bring what he really wants to life in the best way possible.
