I just finished this VN last night, and it reminds me of Caribdis's style, which I like a lot. I read from comments that the beginning part will be reworked. One thing I hope the dev can change is how the trolling choices work. For example, I dislike the first troll choice bcuz the game goes 4th wall breaking and tells you not to do that again. If I want to do the "fuck around and find out" choice, the game should just let me, not warn me. My suggestion is to utilize the game established lore and just have the Nords rollback the choice. It already does this for accidentally killing Aria and the Nord rollbacks the choice for the player. Then, maybe even add a hidden death counter to the game that counts how many times the player has died causing the Nords to reset the game for him. When reach nearly the end of the game, the Nords can praise or mock the player, depending how many deaths, or even include bonus lewd scenes, etc.