Loxxxthenasty
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- May 1, 2020
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Nice...It's A start... However I do not agree with the choosing one thing...The reworked version is not bad. The sister doesn't fuck the father and the daughters aren't gold diggers, though the MC still has the stupid idea of grooming only one of them to be his successor. Also, the backstory for Vanessa (the secretary) was changed, the MC hired her years ago to keep on eye on Vincent while he was away instead of Vincent recommending her to the MC.
A slippery slope...