VN Ren'Py Abandoned Faded Bonds [v0.3] [Whispering Studios]

[LadySpider]

Honestly, this was bit frustrating, why have white text with no text box or outline, and have the text over so many white or other bright things making it impossible to read and know what is going on? Come on

 

[Chris2041]

Thia game needs a serious rewrite damm sometimes some devs that decide to make a harem game i ask myself if they know what is a harem or they played at least one harem game
But this time i ask myself if the devs have some contact whit another woman or even a human and of they see normal this behavior i fell bd for them when they have a girlfriend
Damm what target are you going for ? becuse harem and incest is clearly not

 

[OWSam000]

The incest focus harem game I like most is SSP. The incest relationship the Dev described in that game is
intoxicating.

 

[kcoope89]

Renders look great, I'll have to keep my eye on this one!

 

[rai1230]

i tried the game it has potintial and i like the concept of it i really do
but the intraction between the MC and his sister dont feal right like she fucked his dad and took everthing from him and in the end he just went to her like nothig happens and it looks like they just made up it ruin the whole concept that you are trying to build and i think you should woek on this side of the storryto make feal more real
for all the people that are winnig about he NTR understand that you dont oun all the women in the wrold
good luck

 

[molva]

The game is terrible. The developer created a very pathetic story. I don't know where he was going with this. He spent numerous hours of his time to deliver a game that will be criticized by hundreds and hundreds of people. I find it very senseless.

 

[micojive]

Devs, especially new devs, really need to learn that being honest with the content you are making / want to make is the first step to making a successful game.

I do not understand how devs can take the time to write a synopsis, write additional information about the game, and still just leave out what actually happens.

If you want to tell a story with a wimpy mc, a family that is only there for his money, a dad who NTRs his son you can..just dont try to mask it behind some story about a MC overcoming hardships in his life bs.

This is the kind of release that gets a dev permanently on ignore lists.

 

[Twistty]

The game is terrible. The developer created a very pathetic story. I don't know where he was going with this. He spent numerous hours of his time to deliver a game that will be criticized by hundreds and hundreds of people. I find it very senseless.

Ya - I deleted it also.
Nice renders - crap story!!!

 

[molva]

Could it be that the developer deliberately caused these issues to garner attention through discussions? In our world, anything is possible.

 

[InTheWoods]

Weak premise for a story. The MC is a gullible fool; there's no way someone this dumb could have built a successful business.
1. He happily lets his gold digging daughters walk all over him
2. His wife is out of the picture but he doesn't get a divorce - in spite of being milked for her "vacations"
3. He suspects his business partner of undermining him, yet he happily hires a secretary on his recommendation, without even interviewing her
4. He can't even say no to sloppy seconds with his sister

 

[Mibera]

Did the developer intentionally create these issues to gain attention through discussions?

you mean like, bad PR is still PR? possible but I don't think(hope) so, he will probably not want the attention it's getting him.
but if he did

 

[micojive]

Could it be that the developer deliberately caused these issues to garner attention through discussions? In our world, anything is possible.

Doubt it. the whole, Bad PR is still PR thing doesnt really work on a pirate site where no money is to be made by just views. Devs NEED supporters and subscribers to make money, and you dont get people to give you money by pissing them off.

 

[rai1230]

Weak premise for a story. The MC is a gullible fool; there's no way someone this dumb could have built a successful business.
1. He happily lets his gold digging daughters walk all over him
2. His wife is out of the picture but he doesn't get a divorce - in spite of being milked for her "vacations"
3. He suspects his business partner of undermining him, yet he happily hires a secretary on his recommendation, without even interviewing her
4. He can't even say no to sloppy seconds with his sister

i kinda agree with you what you said is valid but the game is still in early stages hopfully (i understan its stretch) but maybe he can make the storry better
but still people really nead to chill about NTR/sharing

 

[XV71]

Could it be that the developer deliberately caused these issues to garner attention through discussions? In our world, anything is possible.

that wont work here on a pirate site, look at the dev of Milfylicious for example his first game bootylicious was so badly received he abandoned it and made a new account, that game was even worse as I recall as it was the dad's harem not the mc's, once trust is lost devs either make a new account or risk continuing with the 0 trust they established, or they do a 180 on their target audience to survive, some devs are just tone deaf and out of touch.

 

[Thedude715]

Mc lets everyone walk over him bleh you get no options as how he reacts at all, where is the option to freak out and tell your bitch of a sister to fuck off? But oh wait the mc went to her himself for advice..... don't know how to salvage this mc.
Also the white text is against a white background so you can't read the dialogue in some scenes so yeah.

 

[YogSothoth1982]

I thank you for giving me your point of view, I will write it down to try to improve it, don't worry about your other message, I don't consider it was with bad intentions, that's why I asked for your opinion

The question is: Can we tell the sister to go to hell? I mean, after playing it it's clear that she isn't and will not be (in my eyes) a LI, so it's better to get rid of her as soon as possible. In fact, the scene that the MC has with her is one more scene than I want him to have with her.

I also don't find much interest in the slut daughters who only thinks about money, it's better to get rid of those too.

 

[Faxe10%]

Could it be that the developer deliberately caused these issues to garner attention through discussions? In our world, anything is possible.

No way...Even the previous game
was NTRish. This developer likes certain fetishes or has no idea what harem/incest means.

 

[Beast Within]

that wont work here on a pirate site, look at the dev of Milfylicious for example his first game bootylicious was so badly received he abandoned it and made a new account, that game was even worse as I recall as it was the dad's harem not the mc's, once trust is lost devs either make a new account or risk continuing with the 0 trust they established, or they do a 180 on their target audience to survive, some devs are just tone deaf and out of touch.

I have Milfylicious in my ignore list for some time now but from what I have heard, that one is going downhill as well. has some nice renders though aint gonna lie.

 

[ThaDude1977]

Exactly what i want in a incest, Harem game. To find out that your father fucked your sister before you so i can have sloppy seconds. (Sarcasm) Man yeah i love seeing my Li's fuck other people and my father to boot. Look i know not all Li's are gonna be virgins but i don't wanna see it and people that love incest is not gonna be happy to see and know that the sister fucked the dad and or have relationship with him. This is going to be a major flop.

 

[YogSothoth1982]

Weak premise for a story. The MC is a gullible fool; there's no way someone this dumb could have built a successful business.
1. He happily lets his gold digging daughters walk all over him

It seems to me that in this incest game it is best to avoid incest.

2. His wife is out of the picture but he doesn't get a divorce - in spite of being milked for her "vacations"

Maybe it's better that she doesn't show up, so she can't disappoint us more than the daughters and sister.

3. He suspects his business partner of undermining him, yet he happily hires a secretary on his recommendation, without even interviewing her

Yes, the whore secretary to whom I have said no and to whom under any circumstances I'm going to say yes. In my opinion she should go to the same place I want to send the sister and the slut daughters.

4. He can't even say no to sloppy seconds with his sister

In my opinion we should be able to tell the sister to fuck off and avoid that scene.