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I have to disagree. Despite being slightly broken English, I found the story and dialogue pretty compelling. I really enjoy Sebastian as a character.
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there is a rhythm thing, when should go fast and when goes slow, a game like this can't be lengthy for the whole time, otherwise it't not just boring, but annoying
I agree with this completely. And there were a couple of moments in the story that completely caught me off-guard in how much they made you actually CARE about the characters. If I wanted fast point-click-fuck, there are literally hundreds of other options. I tried this game on a whim from the Featured page, and that, at the risk of repeating myself, i think it is beautifully put together.
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Exactly. I found myself willing to walk over broken glass for those twins, I really cared for them. That is good writing.
Yes! And Tiffany staring at the moon... lovely.
I find the dynamic of playing through the viewpoint of a sociopath, charismatic in an American Psycho kind of way, manipulating characters you care about really interesting. Kudos to the writing from here as well.
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ahh...i thought she looked familiar (in the daz3d thread)
why isn't there a fan art thread though?
hey guys i have a question about the game, how the corruption work in this game? is it with brain wahsing blackmail.. other stuff?
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Formulated a little more subtle, he exploits the different weaknesses of them.
I played it last night,
i review the 3 elements of a game;
1) Art: absolutely perfect. nice job on character and environment designs
2) coding: reasonable however the fact that some clickables are on far left and the other on far right was problematic in a sandbox game.
3) Story: lets say its personal and every player will think in his/her own way. but i believe the story can be told with less words or at least in a more useful way.
Best of luck
i review the 3 elements of a game;
1) Art: absolutely perfect. nice job on character and environment designs
2) coding: reasonable however the fact that some clickables are on far left and the other on far right was problematic in a sandbox game.
3) Story: lets say its personal and every player will think in his/her own way. but i believe the story can be told with less words or at least in a more useful way.
Best of luck
I'm not a big fan of such games, especially with 3DCG (I prefer the pure text games), but I've heard many praises of this game, so I decided to give it a try... Visuals look nice, and the game works pretty stable, but the story... Kind of reminded me of the brazilian soap operas - you watching it, and you understand what is happening but it's simply... how to say it... fails to connect with you, to immerse you into the story, I guess? There ARE good moments of course, but sometimes the text is just "empty" and repeating (especially during the ero-scenes). And then there some things is story that simply doesn't add up, for example:
- judging from the story, MC is ~25 y.o. (he's graduated from the university some time ago) - he's older than Tiffany (who's not older than 18, and considers him to be the "older" man), and somewhat younger than Mel (who's "in her thirties"), and judging from the flashback, his age difference with Mel couldn't be more than 10 years, but in the same time she (Mel) mentions that "she's old enough to be his mother" (although I guess that can be explained by her low self-esteem);
- at the beginning of the story it was mentioned that MC haven't seen Mel for an almost 20 years (aside from the inconsistencies with the MC's age in that case between a flashback (where he's relatively old, not a teenager yet, but still, which means that now he should be closer to 30's) and "Mel seeing herself old enough to be his mother" (which means that in this case he should be way younger than her, definitely not 7-8 years younger)), but later it's mentioned that it was only 13 years. But if it was only 13 years, doesn't that means that he and Tiffany would've knew each other? It's mentioned that after having a family, Mel changed into her "homey" version, but Sebastien didn't knew about her changes before meeting her? Which means that she's changed after separating from him and before giving birth to Tiffany (who's supposed to be 18)?
Of course it may be just me being stupid and missing some easy explanation, but...
Sorry for my english, it's difficult to write such essay.
- judging from the story, MC is ~25 y.o. (he's graduated from the university some time ago) - he's older than Tiffany (who's not older than 18, and considers him to be the "older" man), and somewhat younger than Mel (who's "in her thirties"), and judging from the flashback, his age difference with Mel couldn't be more than 10 years, but in the same time she (Mel) mentions that "she's old enough to be his mother" (although I guess that can be explained by her low self-esteem);
- at the beginning of the story it was mentioned that MC haven't seen Mel for an almost 20 years (aside from the inconsistencies with the MC's age in that case between a flashback (where he's relatively old, not a teenager yet, but still, which means that now he should be closer to 30's) and "Mel seeing herself old enough to be his mother" (which means that in this case he should be way younger than her, definitely not 7-8 years younger)), but later it's mentioned that it was only 13 years. But if it was only 13 years, doesn't that means that he and Tiffany would've knew each other? It's mentioned that after having a family, Mel changed into her "homey" version, but Sebastien didn't knew about her changes before meeting her? Which means that she's changed after separating from him and before giving birth to Tiffany (who's supposed to be 18)?
Of course it may be just me being stupid and missing some easy explanation, but...
Sorry for my english, it's difficult to write such essay.
Pretty understandable, i feel bad leaving such a beautiful game in the middle but i prefer low art with good story rather than a good art with no backup.
you went into the story and i come with you,
aside from countless meaningless dialogues, the teen girl was dating her BFFs boyfriend however when she was interacting with him there was no indication of that.
they way Mc pushed the mother (with over the window Nonsense) was lame enough, yet she had to accept his lamer blackmail in a very lame way.
the actress chick was cute characteristic but the twins? Man!!! how they allowed an stranger to tuck her in bed.
as you said, the story has many holes,,, if i ever read a later update's changelog that has script edit, then i will retry.
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