- May 10, 2018
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that's bad..direction of plot should be 100% dev's story...patron input should be reserved for cameo's and non-intrusive content...no game here succeeded based on patron's telling the dev what to do.
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- Aug 28, 2017
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Agreed, it's ok to get input but everyone has different preferences, you will always have someone here or on patreon griping that they HATE X so don't do X or they LOVE Y so put more Y in. You'll never please everyone, so the best thing to do is what you're most comfortable and confident with.
Trying to let patreons steer a story is like playing a porn version of Mad Libs.
- Mar 25, 2018
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Agreed. PandaLoverGames I get the desire to cater to those who pay, but a story built-by-committee usually ends up as disjointed and incoherent as you try to appease too many different people with varied tastes.
Tell the story that you want to tell, with the content you want to have. Patrons who like what you're producing will come.
- Feb 23, 2018
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"Emma, abbreviated 'Ma'." L O L
Well played, sir, well played. I applaud your sense of irony as well as your love of pandas.
It does seem that some joke about "package" was lost in translation, but so far I am having a good time.
Well played, sir, well played. I applaud your sense of irony as well as your love of pandas.
It does seem that some joke about "package" was lost in translation, but so far I am having a good time.
- Jan 31, 2019
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Not a bad premise, but man ... that Engrish is horrible ... Which is a shame kuz the visuals are pretty good. I like the Lesbian Friend ...
- Jan 22, 2020
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Seems alright as a quick fap game as it's got quite a diverse cast and stuff, but I gave up trying to read the story quickly as the language was poor, it's definitely one you'd just skip through.
Thank you for your opinion. But... Voices patreon just a vector. It is not a linear story. Not a pole but a tree. It is up to me and only to me to decide where it goes.
Thank you for your feedback. Thanks to this information, we have come to an obvious solution - this week, we will not be feeding the translator.
No no no, keep feeding them, just feed them less... until they improve
lolEDIT: But seriously, great game! Just needs a better translation...
Good day. Because the asset of simple apartments, not Hollywood mansions, normal very few (literally three).
Thank you for your kind words. I myself have always been pissed off by this manner of describing actions and emotions with words in the VISUAL novels. Although, sometimes it takes too long to create a more or less normal mime. The second update was made 12 days of continuous rendering.
- Mar 25, 2018
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I just want to make sure I've got the relationships down:
MC lives alone with Emma, his mother. His sister, Claire, lives elsewhere after a falling out with Emma.
The redhead and the trans girl are schoolmates of the MC, with the redhead also being a childhood friend, but not related.
Sound correct?
Trans content is done well and isn't just pandering in order to add the tag (eg putting in a trans prostitute). Sidney looks like a sweetheart but definitely has a kinky streak.
The redhead comes across as a lesbian best friend, but hopefully we'll be able to have fun with her as well.
Ma needs to be dicked down to keep her sluttiness in check, and I'm looking forward to that.
And I really like the dynamic between Claire and MC. They seem like they just enjoy each other's company. There's slave talk, but thankfully no actual femdom.
Anyways, looking forward to more, PandaLoverGames!
MC lives alone with Emma, his mother. His sister, Claire, lives elsewhere after a falling out with Emma.
The redhead and the trans girl are schoolmates of the MC, with the redhead also being a childhood friend, but not related.
Sound correct?
Trans content is done well and isn't just pandering in order to add the tag (eg putting in a trans prostitute). Sidney looks like a sweetheart but definitely has a kinky streak.
The redhead comes across as a lesbian best friend, but hopefully we'll be able to have fun with her as well.
Ma needs to be dicked down to keep her sluttiness in check, and I'm looking forward to that.
And I really like the dynamic between Claire and MC. They seem like they just enjoy each other's company. There's slave talk, but thankfully no actual femdom.
Anyways, looking forward to more, PandaLoverGames!
Well, in general terms, yes. If I don't give it all up, I'll implement all the stages of building a relationship with GG
- Apr 2, 2020
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Three points...
(1) get somebody (native speaker) to help you with English... I am sure can easily find a volunteer from this site. Your vocabulary is rich but grammar, in a foreign language, is tricky for all us [apart from a few lines not translated, everything was understandable, and descriptive, but the small errors combine to distract the reader],
(2) I admit i have zero technical knowledge about art and videos, but your scenes could be so much better choreographed. I think you need help here, and by somebody with experience [which may present a problem], and
(3) sorry this is a very subjective point... that music is horrible... I find it is the single biggest reason not to continue with a VN. That music, whatever it is called, is so annoyingly repetitive and annoyingly repetitive... thankfully I can mute the sound.
The story seems fun and addictive, which is a HUGE PLUS. I love the idea about the weird and wonderful family.
Good luck!
(1) get somebody (native speaker) to help you with English... I am sure can easily find a volunteer from this site. Your vocabulary is rich but grammar, in a foreign language, is tricky for all us [apart from a few lines not translated, everything was understandable, and descriptive, but the small errors combine to distract the reader],
(2) I admit i have zero technical knowledge about art and videos, but your scenes could be so much better choreographed. I think you need help here, and by somebody with experience [which may present a problem], and
(3) sorry this is a very subjective point... that music is horrible... I find it is the single biggest reason not to continue with a VN. That music, whatever it is called, is so annoyingly repetitive and annoyingly repetitive... thankfully I can mute the sound.
The story seems fun and addictive, which is a HUGE PLUS. I love the idea about the weird and wonderful family.
Good luck!