Canto Forte

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Oli is the best looking babe in this whole game. Was always, still is, will be.
She is the best girl that stood by MC, when he started learning what a relationship is.
Then is all dissapeared. Lucas must have stuck to his hookers and filled the void
after the bombastic shootout, that way he could still come by to watch over the girls,
feel like he is doing something with his life, in between gang banging, hookers and what not.
 

Nope

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Aug 5, 2016
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While I am enjoying this there are some parts where you absolutely have to keep "It's just a porn story" in mind or it doesn't make sense. Also, it could use a proofreader.
 

animalrapist

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A little too vague.

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If he's been gone for 10 years and has a grown daughter, he and (probably) his lover should be pushing 40, if not over.

Why does everyone look to be in their late teens/early 20's?
A utopian future, where by the miracle of modern medicine, the aging process is controlled and people can look as old or as young as they please. On a related note the game is missing the science fiction tag
 

Avaron1974

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Aug 22, 2018
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Basically what we said was going to happen is happening :unsure: :KEK:

I didn't play this update and I probably won't (maybe the next), but at the end of 1 the mc and the girl didn't have "farewell sex" where she told him to get her pregnant? So the girl could be the daughter of the mc and she says that it's from Lucas to hide something? If they are 1 or 2 years apart it would be possible, the mc's baby was 1 year old when she left (more or less) if she got pregnant during that scene they should be 2 years apart.
I'm not sure on ages but even if it is his there is still far too much lying going on and it's not a good look on any of them.

MC looks like a douche for constantly lying to his daughter, a daughter he already needs to put in a ton of work to get forgiveness from.

I don't see any way of things working with Olivia. Even if the kid is his not only has she lied about that to the MC she has also been lying to her daughter and Lucas which is fucked up beyond anything.

So with Olivia she either fucked over the man she claims to have loved and had a relationship with his best friend or she fucked over everyone and has been lying for years.

Either way she has no redeeming qualities for a future relationship.

I don't know what I was expecting when he came back but all the lies and damn near everyone looking like cunts wasn't it.

Even overlooking the lies in his family he and Lucas basically pushed a girl into fucking them for a job and seems Lucas has been doing this for years.


Nobody came out of this update looking good, not a single person.

I just don't get what the game is supposed to be.

At first I thought it was a redemption story. He goes away, comes back years later to win back gis family thus the title.

But ... that aint it. He comes back then starts lying then more lies then a bit of cuntish behavior. I loved Olivia in the prologue but I left the update not even liking her a little bit. The youngest was the only one not looking like a complete prick by the end but give her time and she'll fit right in.

I think it's safe to say I just don't get it.

Hold on, I abandoned midway when MC was starting to be a creep to Ellie, but is it confirmed that Ellie is Lucas's daughter ?
Like I said, it doesn't really matter, she screwed up either way.

Either she is the MC's daughter in which case Olivia has been lying to Lucas and Ellie for years. If Lucas is in on it she's still been lying to Ellie for years.

Or she IS the daughter of Lucas and Olivia basically jumped in bed with the best friend of the guy she claims to have loved enough to want to steal him from her best friend. Didn't take her long to start bouncing on another dick.


I don't know what the best outcome is because the MC isn't exactly a decent guy so i'm confused what the best path is for that.
 
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Majindevil

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Nov 20, 2018
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meh after this update the MC should of stayed away; Game had potential but this update completely killed it for me.
i have to agree the initial version was controversial but really had potential but the update was pure garbage the mc was totally fucked over from his so called friends... decision didnt really matter too much forced content... startetd skipping in the bartender training (so much side content while the main questions wasnt answered) reminds me a bit of the buried desires mafia update
 
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MrBenny

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Hmm....Gone for 20 years (seriously?), and with no contact at all with the GF or MC's child...? That's just odd, and sounds stupid, considering what MC said that he would never be a shitty parent if he had kids, because of his past home life. And then your so called friend....
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A shower? That's a bath, not a shower. screenshot0003.png
 
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White Lamp

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This is an OK update after a strong start which is a bit troubling. The bartender part of the story is boring and feels like filler. Main story seems to be dragging a bit with no real direction to what the main story is about.

The sexual progression between daughters with the MC doesn't feel organic. Sexy time scenes are still good though.
 
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ImperialD

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all i wanted was Olivia/Mia back ...

quick question : why do you give us a few choices to make them all end the same way ?
its not like others games don't do this also .. it just sucks , when i choose an answer and get the same results no matter my choice :unsure:

TIP:
even people that haven't seen each other for 20-30 years are pretty much the same as the last you talk with them with little to no change in them ...... i'm 60 believe me i know this for a fact ...... ;)
 
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NakkiMuki

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Oh god, what a game.

Positive things
  • the characters are good looking.

Negative things
  • the story is strange. MC has been gone for years without any contact with his own girlfriend and child. No man would do that to his girlfriend and child.
  • Olivia is a lying and manipulative bitch. She fuck immediately MC's best friend when MC leaves. Neither would be in my life anymore at that point. That thing ruined this game.
  • I don't raise other men's children, especially when this child is the result of cheating. And my best friend's child with whom my own girlfriend is cheating. Maybe it wouldn't have betrayed the MC if this shitty MC had kept in touch or stayed in the fucking city.
  • Olivia lies to MC's daughter. Which I would never forgive.
  • MC's daughter is a complete asshole. Every second made me press the CTRL button to the bottom. I just can't stand that kind of behavior every time she opens her mouth. Nothing good will come of it.
  • Every woman in this game thinks the MC is some fucking idiot old piece of shit. Maybe they're right, but it ruins the game by a hell of a lot. Perhaps the best character in the game is, ironically, Ellie, who is nice, but damn, who is the one I don't want in the game for those reasons mentioned above.
  • Lily's death was so ridiculously done.
  • I'm not interested in looking at other dicks.
  • I don't share my women, even if they are whores. Not interested in MMF.

I don't know if I forgot to bring something up, but no more this game.
 

Virulenz

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Sep 27, 2017
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Thx for that summary. I wasnt sure if i should try it, now i am sure i will not defile my hard disk with it.
 
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longjohngold

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Shame old saves didn't work, but thankfully as it's a straight VN it was painless to get back to where I was.

It's interesting to see how things are going after the time jump... older Olivia doesn't look much like the younger version that I liked, in fact I think the massage girl looks a lot more like she used to (and she's my new favourite... and while I get it's just dye it's kinda weird the kid you had with the pink haired girl isn't the daughter with pink hair, haha... the nameable daughter with pink hair looks real old too, and the mother still looks young so they come off about the same age...

But there's some good corruption opportunities here, not just with the daughters, but also at the club, I enjoyed the interview scene, I hope that girl makes a return.

So yeah, I really enjoyed this update, I'm glad there was a sizeable amount of story, it went on for longer than I expected, and I look forward to more.
 
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Nope

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Oh god, what a game.

Positive things
  • the characters are good looking.

Negative things
  • the story is strange. MC has been gone for years without any contact with his own girlfriend and child. No man would do that to his girlfriend and child.
  • Olivia is a lying and manipulative bitch. She fuck immediately MC's best friend when MC leaves. Neither would be in my life anymore at that point. That thing ruined this game.
  • I don't raise other men's children, especially when this child is the result of cheating. And my best friend's child with whom my own girlfriend is cheating. Maybe it wouldn't have betrayed the MC if this shitty MC had kept in touch or stayed in the fucking city.
  • Olivia lies to MC's daughter. Which I would never forgive.
  • MC's daughter is a complete asshole. Every second made me press the CTRL button to the bottom. I just can't stand that kind of behavior every time she opens her mouth. Nothing good will come of it.
  • Every woman in this game thinks the MC is some fucking idiot old piece of shit. Maybe they're right, but it ruins the game by a hell of a lot. Perhaps the best character in the game is, ironically, Ellie, who is nice, but damn, who is the one I don't want in the game for those reasons mentioned above.
  • Lily's death was so ridiculously done.
  • I'm not interested in looking at other dicks.
  • I don't share my women, even if they are whores. Not interested in MMF.

I don't know if I forgot to bring something up, but no more this game.
So far it looks like Ellie is probably the MCs kid and Lucas stepped in to help.
 

Nope

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Aug 5, 2016
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Well, it won't save this game anymore.
The game has issues but I'm not sure it really needs saving. It needs a proofreader for sure. I would have to redo Lilys death personally but I doubt the dev will. It seems like a lot of your complaints just make it obvious the game doesn't suit you fetish wise, which is fine.
 

CamaroFan432

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The game has issues but I'm not sure it really needs saving. It needs a proofreader for sure. I would have to redo Lilys death personally but I doubt the dev will. It seems like a lot of your complaints just make it obvious the game doesn't suit you fetish wise, which is fine.
It's not about fetish, it's about the constant lying and more than plain stupid behavior from all characters. This game has so many loopholes, the whole imperial starfleet could fit in. In this time skip, Olivia made a 180 towards the MC, but nobody would do that! She should have told the girls, that he would be coming, because she seemed to expect him. When they first met again, she should have jumped and kissed him and should have told the truth about their relationship, but no, she gives him a hug, and then plainly starts the lying. There was no affection. Even if Ellie is MC's daughter, he should know right from the beginning! It's the MOST IMPORTANT information, every women would give to the father, if there are any feelings beside hate involved! Also the constant lying from the MC about who is to his daughter makes no sense. And she should have recognised him nonetheless, because Olivia has a picture with Lily, the MC, herself, Lucas and Mia, where Mia is still a baby. Nobody changes over the course of 15y so much, that he can't be recognised without a surgery. To save this mess, there needs to be a overhaul of this part and a lot more truth, especially between Olivia and the MC.
 

xinkala

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It's not about fetish, it's about the constant lying and more than plain stupid behavior from all characters. This game has so many loopholes, the whole imperial starfleet could fit in. In this time skip, Olivia made a 180 towards the MC, but nobody would do that! She should have told the girls, that he would be coming, because she seemed to expect him. When they first met again, she should have jumped and kissed him and should have told the truth about their relationship, but no, she gives him a hug, and then plainly starts the lying. There was no affection. Even if Ellie is MC's daughter, he should know right from the beginning! It's the MOST IMPORTANT information, every women would give to the father, if there are any feelings beside hate involved! Also the constant lying from the MC about who is to his daughter makes no sense. And she should have recognised him nonetheless, because Olivia has a picture with Lily, the MC, herself, Lucas and Mia, where Mia is still a baby. Nobody changes over the course of 15y so much, that he can't be recognised without a surgery. To save this mess, there needs to be a overhaul of this part and a lot more truth, especially between Olivia and the MC.
can't agree more. felt like playing different game with many holes in story. and mc doesn't look like person he was back then, except being creepy fuck.
 
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