so read most of these 21 pages and while some criticism is valid (like mc acting like some weird perverted 15 year or 70 year old dude (nothing in between), some characters mc/mia being really dense(and others lacking some logic too) and maybe biggest flaw being girls ages??? while visually (especially Mia) looks grown up but ipatch makes her 16 and Ellie is...14, 15 tops. Not cool. Also what does that Ipatch also do? usually these patches are needed for setting from landlady to mom but what does it do in this case? just ages? changes your relationship to mia? could skip the patch then).
But I was very impressed by devs creative abilities during prologue (he made me like all characters which is quite rare, usually in these games I like girls who are more shy but here I was liking Olivia just as much as Lily if not more). I am quite hopeful that for next releases that he will manage to come with really good explanations why Ellie is mc's daughter (which is obvious as fuck and I am quite shocked that there were like 5 pages out of 21 people arguing about that and some people even making up some imaginary arguments) and why Olivia/Lucas not telling him that yet.
Things I am a bit more worried are a) that after first release dev said that he will have no choice but to abandom game if it is not popular enough. And so far patreon/ss is kinda low (39 combined?) and with all shitstorm going on (and lets face it..first chapter was quite a bit weaker than prologue)...dunno how much motivation he has
b) well...ntr? I know he said it is going to be avoidable but that thing always scare me
I read in these posts that there was some situation were Lily was giving handjob (while crying) trying to save mc from those gang members (doesnt sound like ntr but still unpleasant) however I havent seen that scene? so either I made wrong choices or it was changed in new release. Talking about choices...this game could probably use a mod, dunno if I missed any scenes but especially with points system that dev is implementing, choices might matter.