VN Ren'Py Abandoned Family Diary [Ch. 2] [CrisDark31]

[Lysergic]

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Would you be able to enable to auto button in the quick menu in the next version?

Also, what are the relationships between all of the characters? I can't tell who is related to whom and it's even worse than usual since so many of these characters look damned near identical.

 

[Ursus4321]

Gotta admit, that camera popping up every time a woman enters the screen is annoying as fuck.

there is a little trick. the flying cameras always appear in the same place. You just have to be with the mouse click on that site and click as soon as they start. And if you fail any you can always go back. But I repeat, the appearance routine is always the same

 

[csmk14]

I'm not seeing a switch to the English Language in the prefs?

Ingles is spanish for English

 

[CRISDARK31]

Ingles is spanish for English

we are checking it because apparently a bug was generated and we are also working on the correct translation.

 

[Nerttu]

Here are my toughts as my first run !!!!!!
First: What the F..k, who are these people ??????
Second: English is bad and there are couple points that is Spanish !!!! (Ss 3,4)
Thrid: Text and scenes aint match at couple of points and at one point, what text says, aint happend. Allso names get grossed at couple of points !!!!! (Ss 5,6,7,8)
Fourth: You can`t go to the "Room" nowhere but starting the game and all the photos are in Spanish !!!!!! (Ss 1, 9)
Renders are great by the way and so are models !!!!!
BTW.....if you want to take ScreenCapture by pressing "S" as allways, game gives you an error (Traceback) and the first choise in game (check Jezz breasts) AINT work !!!! (Ss 2)
Here are some screencaps what I mean !!!!!
And where the hell is that fourth "secret spot" ????? Three that I found was 1: Painting at home foyer, 2: Driving school picture, 3: In elevator at Elis building !!!!! I`ve played about 4 times from start to end to find that missing spot, but nothing (BUG ?????) ?????? It sould be easy, as game changes screen and there are NO text at once for couple of second, so you can search the spot and click it, but NOTHING !!!!!

 

[fixrapid]

And where the hell is that fourth "secret spot" ????? Three that I found was 1: Painting at home foyer, 2: Driving school picture, 3: In elevator at Elis building !!!!! I`ve played about 4 times from start to end to find that missing spot, but nothing (BUG ?????) ?????? It sould be easy, as game changes screen and there are NO text at once for couple of second, so you can search the spot and click it, but NOTHING !!!!!

it's hidden in the "Sister talk" event (spoiler: at the beginning)

 

[Nerttu]

it's hidden in the "Sister talk" event (spoiler: at the beginning)

That was HARD........belive or not, I checked that too, but missed it, I tried couple of times allthough you hinted me !!!!
THANKS A LOT !!!!!!!
BTW....My reactions are full for the day, but I`ll be in touch !!!!!!

 

[彡SILENT๛ONE]

Any compressed Android version?

 

[bobdillan]

Here are my toughts as my first run !!!!!!
First: What the F..k, who are these people ??????
Second: English is bad and there are couple points that is Spanish !!!! (Ss 3,4)
Thrid: Text and scenes aint match at couple of points and at one point, what text says, aint happend. Allso names get grossed at couple of points !!!!! (Ss 5,6,7,8)
Fourth: You can`t go to the "Room" nowhere but starting the game and all the photos are in Spanish !!!!!! (Ss 1, 9)
Renders are great by the way and so are models !!!!!
BTW.....if you want to take ScreenCapture by pressing "S" as allways, game gives you an error (Traceback) and the first choise in game (check Jezz breasts) AINT work !!!! (Ss 2)
Here are some screencaps what I mean !!!!!
And where the hell is that fourth "secret spot" ????? Three that I found was 1: Painting at home foyer, 2: Driving school picture, 3: In elevator at Elis building !!!!! I`ve played about 4 times from start to end to find that missing spot, but nothing (BUG ?????) ?????? It sould be easy, as game changes screen and there are NO text at once for couple of second, so you can search the spot and click it, but NOTHING !!!!!

two things.... press enter more.

^ Like this. Improves readability.

The other... chilld with the "!!!!!" and "????" makes it more annoying to read, now and then is fine, but not every single time.
If it helps throw in some bold text instead. (but not too much).

 

[JoeBlack132]

does the developer plan to include anal sex in the game?

 

[HunkyDunx]

CRISDARK31
Thanks for your first attempt at a game but you really need some help and maybe play a few other games to see what really gets good reviews...
1) Your game start in Spanish but it would be better to have language choice flags for both English or Spanish and then launch into the menu
2) You are getting mixed up between on pronouns. If you are talking about a girl/woman then you use she or her. If you're talking about boy/man then you use he or him. Example: you see Jezz in HER bathrobe and when SHE walks away it should say "Jezz goes to HER room". When you talk about Sasha you and all other people should be saying HER or SHE.
3) The camera game where you have to click on it is more designed for a child, get rid of it.
4) You meet Rex and have to choose an Image, 1, 2 or 3. If you choose 3 then it says you have chosen A6!? Why?
5) Who are all the characters? Is Jezz the MC's sister? Is Sasha the MC's mother? If she is then the MC should call her Mom or Mum. Who is Ellis?
6) Wearing a face mask like that is not going to hide your identity from someone you know. This is like watching Superman ... suddenly people lose the ability to recognise someone because they have taken their glasses off!?
7)I haven't played Chapter 2 yet and not sure if I should as I have a feeling you will need to rewrite a lot of it. I appreciate that your first language isn't English and maybe your game flows a little smoother in Spanish but it really is all over the place. Your graphics are good though. At the moment I would give your game 2 stars.

All the best

 

[CRISDARK31]

All the errors are being solved and we are still looking for a translator to improve this part of the language.

 

[bobdillan]

The game won't have NTR/Swinging/Sharing.
Some female characters probably will have boyfriends but nothing will happen between them.
As the game is harem focused we can say that all the girls will be only for the MC =).

Edit: As it seems that Cris has updated the game keep in mind that I'm no longer working with him so I don't know if anything of what I said before is still relevant.

Oh no...

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[estrada777]

New Android port. Nothing too fancy but let me know if you have any issues.

Version: Chapter 2 + Gallery unlock by fixrapid
Size 212 MiB

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[彡SILENT๛ONE]

No Android mod ?

 

[Sunedosa]

Looks great, makes zero sense and that fucking camera bullshit sucks.

 

[constanline]

Oooh Interesting! Thx

 

[masterdc1976]

the minigames ruin it considerably

 

[Rhynnor]

CRISDARK31
Thanks for your first attempt at a game but you really need some help and maybe play a few other games to see what really gets good reviews...
1) Your game start in Spanish but it would be better to have language choice flags for both English or Spanish and then launch into the menu
2) You are getting mixed up between on pronouns. If you are talking about a girl/woman then you use she or her. If you're talking about boy/man then you use he or him. Example: you see Jezz in HER bathrobe and when SHE walks away it should say "Jezz goes to HER room". When you talk about Sasha you and all other people should be saying HER or SHE.
3) The camera game where you have to click on it is more designed for a child, get rid of it.
4) You meet Rex and have to choose an Image, 1, 2 or 3. If you choose 3 then it says you have chosen A6!? Why?
5) Who are all the characters? Is Jezz the MC's sister? Is Sasha the MC's mother? If she is then the MC should call her Mom or Mum. Who is Ellis?
6) Wearing a face mask like that is not going to hide your identity from someone you know. This is like watching Superman ... suddenly people lose the ability to recognise someone because they have taken their glasses off!?
7)I haven't played Chapter 2 yet and not sure if I should as I have a feeling you will need to rewrite a lot of it. I appreciate that your first language isn't English and maybe your game flows a little smoother in Spanish but it really is all over the place. Your graphics are good though. At the moment I would give your game 2 stars.

All the best

CRISDARK31
8) Who are Daphne, Katerine, Mei and Mimi? Do they all live in the same house? But then why does Elis tell Daphne to give him their address?
9)If they live in another house then why spend the night at his house like it's normal?
10)Without even having a line of dialogue saying: does your "aunt" or "whatever" come to dinner and sleep here? From what Elis says, she lives with him and how come she didn't see him the day he arrived even though it was night?

The most common solution to resolve kinship, because of patreon, is for a variable that the player decides the name or relationship he has with them, Be it and put it as Landlady and Roommates as basic. (In the case of relationship)

Spanish

8)¿Quiénes son Daphne, Katerine y Mimi? ¿Todos viven en la misma casa? Pero entonces, ¿por qué Elis le dice a Daphne que le dé su dirección?
9)Si viven en otra casa, ¿por qué pasar la noche en su casa como si fuera normal?
10)Sin siquiera tener una línea de diálogo diciendo: ¿tu "tía" o "lo que sea" viene a cenar y dormir aquí? Por lo que dice Elis, ella vive con él y ¿cómo es que no lo vio el día que llegó aunque era de noche?

La solución más común para resolver el parentesco, por patreon, es por una variable que el jugador decide el nombre o la relación que tiene con ellos, Sea y lo ponga como Casera y Roommates como base.(En el caso de relación)

 

[Rhynnor]

this mini game is very annoying ‍♂

The positions are always the same, just stop the mouse on one of the last ones and when you start, click on it.